It was really convenient...

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It was really convenient that Tsunade recovered and gained her consciousness right after Sasuke killed Danzo, don't you think? So they could just reinstate her as Hokage rather than find a new one like Kakashi. In fact, it was really convenient that Danzo got killed by Sasuke, so there never was a power struggle between Tsunade and Danzo over the position of Hokage. It was especially convenient that Danzo went to a Kage Summit and wasn't in town when Sasuke went after him, meaning Sasuke didn't have to go inside the Leaf Village to seek him out (where he would have ran into a lot of opposition and there would basically be a second Konoha invasion). In fact, there were a lot of convenient things that happened in that arc. Plot and poor writing is my opinion on why these things happened.
 

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I mean, it's a story. Pretty much everything that happens in a story is kinda convenient in some fashion.
 

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WOW! You are guessing that PLOT is the reason things happened in a story? You are on to something here sherlock

People have forgotten the definition of the word - "plot".

Plot - the main events of a play, novel, film, or similar work, devised and presented by the writer as an interrelated sequence.

I'll leave this here.
 

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People have forgotten the definition of the word - "plot".

Plot - the main events of a play, novel, film, or similar work, devised and presented by the writer as an interrelated sequence.

I'll leave this here.

Thanks for this! This should be posted on the first page for how often I read "That only happened cause of plot"
 

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Well its a story not real life .

Anyway thar arc was one of the worst arcs in naruto.
 

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It's plot. Convenient shit happens at convenient times. Its all about spotting asspulls on NB o but Tobi told Sasuke where Danzo was.
 

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Something here people don't seem to understand.

Good writing = plot doesn't seem forced, it's natural as if it could happen in real life, there are no odd coincidences or random lucky stuff, there is always a solid explanation for things

Poor writing = lots of coincidences and asspulls, stuff like that

So it's poor writing is what I'm trying to say.
 

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Something here people don't seem to understand.

Good writing = plot doesn't seem forced, it's natural as if it could happen in real life, there are no odd coincidences or random lucky stuff, there is always a solid explanation for things

Poor writing = lots of coincidences and asspulls, stuff like that

So it's poor writing is what I'm trying to say.

Asspulls is poor writing.
An Award is needed for you sir XD
 

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Something here people don't seem to understand.

Good writing = plot doesn't seem forced, it's natural as if it could happen in real life, there are no odd coincidences or random lucky stuff, there is always a solid explanation for things

Poor writing = lots of coincidences and asspulls, stuff like that

So it's poor writing is what I'm trying to say.

I don't think any of us, except for the younger members, would say that the manga is well written and especially not recently. Just accept what you're reading and move on. The manga is almost over anyway
 

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it was plot that pain attacked konoha and sas changed his aim to danzo when obito tempted that juicy meat in his face.
 

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The Kage Summit happened because of Sasuke's attack on Killer Bee. That was what pushed things to the tipping point between the villages, particularly considering Konoha's previous neglect to really deal with Sasuke.

Danzou was in power because Konoha was weakened by Pain's previous attack on the village; this happened because Itachi was dead (after his battle with Sasuke), which basically allowed Akatsuki to attack the village sooner than expected. This invasion also marked the culmination of the "Akatsuki" arc, where the leader showed himself in a full-scale attack, and the villages could no longer pretend the organization was something they could handle on their own.

Danzou was obviously deeply connected to Sasuke's character arc; he ordered the Uchiha Massacre, knew Itachi's identity, and had ordered a member of Root (Sai) to assassinate Sasuke (behind Tsunade's back). So it was fitting that, in an arc basically focusing on Sasuke's descent into darkness, Danzou would be present. And since Sasuke's hatred stemmed from Konoha's darkness, it's fitting that Danzou would be the main villain. A confrontation with Danzou was clearly the "next step" for Sasuke.

The fact is, Danzou seized upon Tsunade's absence to further his ambitions; it's one of the reasons he allowed Pain to do so much damage, and didn't send Root to aid (or help out, himself). So it's not a total "plot convenience" or "coincidence" that all of this happened while Tsunade was out of commission; much of that was Danzou's fault, and the rest happened as a result of Sasuke's actions.

I agree the arc was poorly-written; however, the basic Sasuke vs. Danzou theme throughout the arc is not to blame. Killer Bee vs. Kisame was a really random filler battle, and kinda sucked. The Ao vs. Fuu/Torune, and Tobi vs. Fuu/Torune, were also terrible. Basically, it was the filler action.

Sakura's confession was probably Sakura's lowest point in the series, and IMO was a major reason why Kishi decided to cut her screen time to almost nothing throughout the majority of the War Arc.

Naruto's hyperventilation / fainting spell was, likewise, probably Naruto's lowest point in the series. He, however, redeemed himself at the arc's conclusion when he finally met Sasuke. Sakura merely came off as being a weak failure when she backstabbed her comrades to attack Sasuke, then failed to kill Sasuke, and then cried and relied on Naruto once again.

I could go on; my main point is that I believe the Danzou / Sasuke "coincidences" complained of in the OP are not really that contrived, and fit squarely with Sasuke's development in that arc. The main problem in that arc was pacing, which was bogged down by these other, horribly-written sideplots. If the Naruto/Sakura portions of the arc had been better-written, and had complimented the rest of the arc rather than detracted from it, I believe the arc would have been fine. Instead, I find it to be a fairly forgettable arc, and Sasuke's development did a 180 pretty quickly in the War Arc (as did Sakura's when she was finally allowed to become semi-relevant again nearly 16 volumes after the Danzou arc).
 

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It convenient that trash danzo even got to live this much
 
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