[KG] Iron Sand with Skorm

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*thinks*

Iron Sand... used by you, *points* Third Kazekage. I believe you drew inspiration from the Shukaku himself, using iron powder combined with your magnetism to manipulate it in a similar way to sand techniques. This makes it stronger and more versatile than regular sand due to its weight.
 

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Hm.

Magnestism is a kekkei genkai, with aspects of earth and wind release. It allows the creation of magnetic forces from your chakra to manipulate metallic objects such as weapons.
 

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No sir, earth and wind creates bakuton also what we call blast release. Try again, and please be more elaborate.


Blast release is Lightning and Earth, according to wiki.

The magnetic forces created by Jiton allow the user to manipulate metal-based weapons (unless of course the weapon is immune or made of materials that can't be affected by magnets), or, in the case of Iron Sand, manipulate iron powder. Shape manipulation combined with the KG itself allows the Iron Sand user to create weapons and whatnot by forming the sand to their desired shape.
 

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Blast release is Lightning and Earth, according to wiki.

The magnetic forces created by Jiton allow the user to manipulate metal-based weapons (unless of course the weapon is immune or made of materials that can't be affected by magnets), or, in the case of Iron Sand, manipulate iron powder. Shape manipulation combined with the KG itself allows the Iron Sand user to create weapons and whatnot by forming the sand to their desired shape.
I noticed because i thought it was weird you brought that up. Seems to me that magnetism release has always been related to the electric element, screw that then xD.

Yeah that's good enough. What are the KG's weaknesses?
 

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I noticed because i thought it was weird you brought that up. Seems to me that magnetism release has always been related to the electric element, screw that then xD.

Yeah that's good enough. What are the KG's weaknesses?
You know, I thought the same thing, with electromagnetism and all that, but I guess Kishi has his own set of rules for abilities >_>

Weaknesses? I'd assume denser material, like how Gaara's dad's gold sand was able to stop Gaara's regular sand. So I dunno, would Gold Sand stop Iron Sand, you think?

And maybe water or super heavy earth. I say water because it... drenches the sand? Maybe Lightning too, but I dunno about that since we just learned it's made up of Earth and Wind... so neutral?

In terms of other basic elements, I assume they're neutral as well.
 

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Honestly, this KG has been debated about so many times it's a headache. Currently it's not weak against anything, yet not strong against anything either. Apparently that will change but we'll just go with how it looks currently. Rp-wise.

Weaknesses? I'd assume denser material, like how Gaara's dad's gold sand was able to stop Gaara's regular sand. So I dunno, would Gold Sand stop Iron Sand, you think?
It could be seen as a weakness logically, but i would like to assume that the chakra put into the magnetic fields are what differs the outcome, should iron and gold dust clash. Like you say though, the density of gold is almost twice as high as iron. But that could be seen as a contrary if the user controls more mass, they need more chakra to fuel the magnetic fields that holds the mass. Currently there are no gold dust techniques(cannon) that are stronger than iron sand(cannon) in the rp. This being said, the sand users both utilize magnetic fields and if the iron sand weights more, it also means it's easier to manipulate if both techniques require the same amount of chakra. That's.. the only thing i can defend the current statement that iron sand has no weakness, but nor does any magnetic ability have.

And maybe water or super heavy earth. I say water because it... drenches the sand? Maybe Lightning too, but I dunno about that since we just learned it's made up of Earth and Wind... so neutral?
Water i kinda see were you're coming from because it stopped Gaaras sand with ease since it basically transformed the sand into mud and made it hard for him to control. Iron sand is denser than regular sand and isn't as affected by the water. Then again that contradicts the previous statement of mine so.. It's interesting, however it's still neutral. Currently. Super heavy earth? So far regular earth is less dense than iron sand, thus making it having no problem with digging through it, if the magnetic fields are strong enough ofc. Wind is currently under debate and so is fire. Why wind? Because the electricity that the magnetic links contain would be blown away by the wind, who acts as an isolator. However, now when the wiki states that Jiton is earth and wind based i guess that ship sailed. Oh well. Fire is debatable as extreme hot temperatures causes magnetic links to act bad, but it's currently neutral. However, as it's written that Jiton is based on earth and wind, fire would use wind as a fuel. I can see it being a weakness towards the element honestly. But that also rules out the idea of having lightning as a strength towards jiton as wind is strong towards lightning.
 

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Then I shall assume that Iron Sand is neutral to everything, then xd

Thanks, that was a very informative post ^^
For now >_>.

Alright so onto some techs. I want you to perform the techniques i list and a combination or two.

(Jiton: Satetsu No Jutsu) - Magnetism Release: Iron Sand Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user creates small weapons and defenses out of iron sand. The sand can be released from sand in the users possession or from the ground nearby.

Alright this is the equivilant of every basic elements D-rank technique. It let's you form anything out of the iron sand but you're restricted to keep yourself within the rank given and chakra points. While it may be so it still comes in use when faces with shadow shurikens or a barrage of regular ninja tools. You can form shields, you can use it to temporarily blind your opponent by scattering it into his eyes etc.

( Jiton: Satetsu Niwakaame ) - Magnetism Release: Iron Sand Scattered Showers
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user by manipulating their iron sand will create several large senbon about one meter and half long in the air that then rain down upon the opponent piercing them. The sand can be released from sand in the users possession or from the ground nearby.

A more specific technique than the previous one. Here you create pretty large senbons. Hell they'er almost as big as a grown human, this said they're quite heavy which means they deflect regular ninja tools with ease but at the cost of moment speed.

Now perform.
 

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*Summoning his Kazekage puppet, Sasori channels earth and wind chakra, mixing it to form Jiton chakra and allowing it to manipulate the iron powder already present in the puppet. Its human puppet form allowed it to retain its abilities. Iron sand started floating and seeping out of the crevices and holes of the puppet as it moved around as if it were a living thing, when it was actually being controlled by the Jiton chakra. Applying shape manipulation, Sasori created a variety of tools composed of Iron Sand, ranging from simple kunais to large swords and a shield that looked vaguely like Captain America's z.z*

Perhaps I could use the shuriken shadow clone jutsu to create hundreds of copies of the Iron Sand tools, but I don't know if that would work or not. This is pretty basic technique, good for blocking basic weapons like you said.




*Repeating the process of the first technique, Sasori now allows the Iron sand to turn into a looser, more natural form, before reshaping it into countless senbons which he then fires towards a bunch of trees, ripping them apart.*

This would be cool if they were poison-tipped, plus the senbons create a nice spread attack. One thing I saw in the technique was that the sand could rise from the ground up, which makes it great for a sneak attack :snick:
 

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Perhaps I could use the shuriken shadow clone jutsu to create hundreds of copies of the Iron Sand tools, but I don't know if that would work or not.
That's actually interesting, i don't personally see why not. That said it was a while i looked into the description of it(the shadow clone jutsu).

technique was that the sand could rise from the ground up, which makes it great for a sneak attack
Good thinking, commonly it's used to repel similar attacks from what i've seen/used myself. The fact that many Jiton moves can be released from the ground makes them very hard to foresee as they don't cause much tremor to the ground as a ground based move. Nor do you have to slam your hands on the ground(which usually indicates it's a ground-based move).

Up next:

We're skipping this one because it's the same move as you just performed but with more chakra put into it.

Jiton: Satetsu Shigure) - Magnetism Release: Iron Sand Shower
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user transforms iron sand into multiple senbon and launches them toward the enemy. The sand can be released from sand in the users possession or from the ground nearby.

(Jiton: Satetsu No Tate) - Magnetism Release: Iron Sand Shield
Rank: C
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A shield made of iron sand that is perfect for defense from lesser attacks. The sand can be released from sand in the users possession or from the ground nearby.

Pretty much a shield that has no statement in the description how big it is nor it's form so i assume you can make it however you want. Form it like a cocoon to defend yourself from all angles(except from ground) but fortifying your eyesight or create a hand-held shield like you had as an example in your above post. This shield could also be used for more convenient placed iron sand sources(if used strategic enough).

( Jiton: Satetsu Chēn ) - Magnetism Release: Iron Sand Chain
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: By manipulating their iron sand, the user creates several spikes of iron sand to rise up from the ground that surround them and reaches up to several meters tall. These spikes can act as both an attack and defense against enemy or certain incoming attacks such as Taijutsu or ninja tools.

Great sneak attack if you ask me. It can act as both a defense and offensive move at the same time when you create the spikes(unkown number, which pretty much makes it pretty OP if you ask me). Only drawback is the range, but it's still a very cool move to perform against incoming taijutsu moves or just close-combat in general.
 

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Welp... I thought I replied to this ;_;

*Manipulating the Iron Sand puppet, Sasori creates a buckler-shaped shield that blocks some pesky flies that were flying around him. Swatting the iron sand shield around, he laughs a little as if enjoying their demise :snick: *

Seems easy enough. Can defend from pretty much any C-ranked or below technique.

*Then, allowing the Iron sand to become loose once more, Sasori makes the puppet form spikes which impale those flies with frightening accuracy huehuehue*

This one is awesome, it addresses the weakness of puppeteers: short-range combat. Taijutsu masters and users will think twice before getting up close. I could even form them as an enemy charges up to short range, forcing them to defend.
 

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So did i my dear Frodo.. >_>

*Manipulating the Iron Sand puppet, Sasori creates a buckler-shaped shield that blocks some pesky flies that were flying around him. Swatting the iron sand shield around, he laughs a little as if enjoying their demise *
Don't swag over your flies or Shino will keeel u U___U

*Then, allowing the Iron sand to become loose once more, Sasori makes the puppet form spikes which impale those flies with frightening accuracy huehuehue*
Impaling flies? You have too much freetime ~_~



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( Jiton: Satetsu Sanmyaku ) - Magnetism Release: Iron Sand Mountain Range
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: By manipulating their iron sand the user can then create a wall of iron sand in front of them and then cause several small variable spikes to protrude from the wall and striking the opponent.

Pretty nice jutsu tbh, shame it's low-ranked. So you gather up your jiton chakra and channel it through your body to take control of sand from your pouch or the ground under you. I always chose the ground personally as it's more unpredictable. Anywho, the sand will then take the form of a wall that you place either between you and your opponent or behind them(surprise for cookiemonsters indeed..). The wall could take a hit while coming towards your opponent with spikes that protrude from it. Great defensive/offensive jutsu.

(Jiton: Satetsu Supaiku) Magnetism Release: Iron Sand Spike
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Nearby iron sand begins to gather and create a long spike that can easily pierce through an enemy at short range or hurled at a close target at mid-range.

Very basic but quite powerful. You channel your jiton chakra to control iron sand that would shape like a large spike that you either send flying towards your opponent with magnetic forces or you hurl it towards them. Doesn't really matter as long as it rapes your victim rl.. It's range limited, don't forget that.

Now perform these two.
 

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*Once again manipulating the Iron Sand, Sasori forms a large wall in between himself and the Kazekage. This emerges from the ground up Small spikes protrude from it, which would surely hurt anyone who came too close to it.*

Seems simple enough. I would form it around an opponent or one that's charging towards me. The wall wouldn't really damage, but the subsequent spikes would.

*Then, using more Iron Sand, Sasori forms a large spike in front of him that spikes in a upward diagonal fashion, piercing the wall*

There's a simple elegance to this, really.

I have to wonder, Kazekage... you must have had quite the penchant for penetrating techniques, eh? *he chuckles a little*
 
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