Iron Fist: Chapter 1.

[Shinobi Train]

Thank you S. Train, that paragraph of attitude decimation I actually find very helpful. Okay, so maybe it was wrong to think I could just waltz in and write as well as I wanted because this was a side project.

I will, will, will, will, will, will, will, WILL edit the next chapter. Thoroughly.

Bro hug. :hug:

I'm only hard on you because you have a chance, you could actually do something great in literature, but not without the proper attitude. ^_^ You even have a better chance than I do at writing a book, but you'd need my brother's determination to do so, and it's all up to you to be that way. xd

 

[~Uzumaki~]

It's not about god damn Tekken. I don't care if Iron Fist is what Tekken means in Japanese. I'll name my titles whatever the hell I want. If that's all you have to say, refrain from commenting.

LOL!!!!!!!!!! xd

 

[Sir Aaron]

Great story!

 

[Germanicus]

Great story!

Preciate the read chap. Glad you enjoyed it.

 

[Hori]

impressive work. mark a true genious

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[Sir Aaron]

When's the next chapter?

 

[Germanicus]

When's the next chapter?

Been trying to wipe the dust off lately. I expect I'll have another chapter done within the week. Maybe tonight or tomorrow. Thursday if not one of those two.

 

[Sir Aaron]

Been trying to wipe the dust off lately. I expect I'll have another chapter done within the week. Maybe tonight or tomorrow. Thursday if not one of those two.

Sounds good!