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Chapter One Two Three Four Five!​
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'Training Field' - 14:47pm

As the final day of training passed by, Flaw and Gats' trained the skills they learnt on the training field, with Mizutoki observing them from a tree nearby.

Gats' runs towards the static Flaw with fierce pace.

Gats: You fat bastard, evade this!

Gats tosses a few kunai towards Flaw which only end up exploding half-way. Gats, still running, zips through the smoke and shouts.

Gats: TRANSFORMATION TECHNIQUE!

Out of the smoke, comes a giant Ox-like beast that charges towards Flaw with it's clenched fist poised to strike Flaw.

Flaw: Idiot! You really think a cheap trick would work on me? I lol at your english a**. Change of body stance!

Flaw's body quickly erupts in a burst of smoke and a stump from a tree. Moments later, he appears from behind another tree to address Gats'.

Flaw: I think we've mastered all we've learnt yesterday.

Gats: Hmph, chickening out after i nearly killed you?

Flaw: You arrogant ****, i'm not wasting energy on you.

Mizu: Sheesh, hearing your constant voices wants me to kill you both...

Mizu strides onto the field with Missy alongside of him in a red dress.

Mizu: Gats' it's time to fill your end of the bargain, you have to take this young lady out on her date.

Gats: What!? I thought romantic dates are done through the night not during the day?

Mizu: I know what late-night dates turn into. I don't want my daughter pregnant. It's during the day or no date at all, Baka!

Gats: >.>'' Doesn't this world know of such a thing called a condom? *sigh* Nevermind, i'm sure it will be fun nonetheless.

Missy walks towards Gats' and wraps her arm around his and strolls off back to the main city of konoha to start their date while Mizu calmly approaches Flaw.

Mizu: Although Gats' is not here. It doesn't mean that your training ends. I've got something else to teach you...

Flaw: Tell me more ;D

~~~
'Hokage's Mansion' - 15:09pm

Meanwhile at the Hokage's mansion, Akiza has summoned various anbu members for a talk, they stand infront of her in a line. Listening to her every word.

Akiza: So!, we're going to need our strongest troops to fight against this vigilante, he'll more than likely come to us next, so be prepared during the next week or so.

Anbu: Aye! anything else ma'am?

Akiza: Hmmm...

Akiza takes out a letter out of a draw next to her and hands it to one of the men.

Akiza: Deliver this to Mizutoki ASAP, we might need his services as well.

Anbu: Yes madam.

The anbu disperse out of the room, leaving Akiza to ponder about the situation at hand.

~~~​

'Konoha main city' - 15:35pm

Missy: Oh! Isn't that sweet!!! :3

Gats: Yeah...

Missy: AND THAT ONE TOO!!!

Gats: Sure is...

Missy: I WANT IT!!! *_*

Gats' and Missy stand outside of the konoha pet shop, with their arms still linked together, Missy points out the various cute looking pets.

Missy: ...G-Gats'...

Gats: >.> Hmmm?

Missy: =3 Could you get me it?

Gats: u_u i have no money anyway

Missy: WHATTTTTTTTT!?!?!? you go on a date with no money!? What kinda of man are you? ):

Gats: Can't we like... Go to a park or something. -_-''

Missy: Hmmm, well i have some money... I guess we could share. ^.^

Missy gets out her purse to check how much money she has. Gats' takes a peak inside and notices bundles of cash inside.

Gats: >.>' <.<' >.>'...
Missy: *Takes out a note of cash* I guess this can buy us one meal... ~.~


Gats: B-b-but you have...lots of cash...O_O''

Missy: But a woman knows how to handle her money.

Gats: >.> <.< Yoink~!

Gats grabs into her purse, snatching the cash and runs away but with Missy chasing after him.

Missy: Get back here!!! >.<

~~~​

'Mizutoki Ramen Shop' - 15:40pm​

Anbu: Hello? anyone home?

The anbu member checks around the shop and the kitchen, trying to find Mizutoki to deliver the letter.

Anbu: Mr. Mizutoki!? Anyone? :/ seems like no one is home...

Failing to find Mizutoki, the Anbu member decides to leave it on the counter in the kitchen.

~~~

'Konoha Bakery' - 16:45pm

Gats: Ohhh~! I don't know what to pick >.< i want some....DOUGHNUTS!! *drools*

Loud stomps are heard from outside, coming closer and closer with each step. Gats' decides to investigate by poking his head out of the door, noticing Missy walking towards him with a fierce look on her face.

Gats: U-uh...what am i going to do...shit, shit, shit!...OH! Transformation Technique!

As Missy enters the bakery, she looks inside, only to notice an elderly man with a walking stick and a woman behind the counter, although the elderly man looks suspicious...

Missy: ...Hmm...

Gats (As old man): Ah, young lady, you're sure pretty ~_~'' (hope she doesnt notice me >_<)

Shop Keeper: *Pokes Gats'* I don't know why you used the transformation technique but here are your orders sir.

Gats remains still with sweat dripping from his face and frozen still. Knowing that the shop keeper gave him away.

Missy: BAST*RD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gats: O_O Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit!

Gats runs to the corner with the bag of doughnuts while Missy chases after him. Gats, with nowhere to go, squats down in the corner, opening his bag.

Gats: My last meal... I didn't know it was gonna be dougnuts T_________T

Missy: *Takes a doughnut from the bag* You're lucky i'm a nice person or else i would of killed you.

Missy laughs while eating as Gats is still tremoring from his near-death experience but nervously laughs after a while.

Shop Keeper: U_U children these days....

~~~​

'Training Fields' - 18:05pm​

Back at the training field, Mizutoki stands on the egde of a large crater, while in the middle of the crater, Flaw stands in a fighting pose next to one of Mizu's clones.

Mizu: Flaw! That's enough! You've reached your limit and i say its a job well done.

Flaw: *Collapses on the floor* I've... Never b-been so exhaused... In my life...

Mizu's clone carries Flaw out of the crater and towards him.

Mizu: It's time for you to go home and tomorrow will be mission day. I hope i've taught you well enough.

Flaw: Heh. with this, it'll be a piece of cake. Speaking of cake...

Flaw's stomach rumbles loudly.

Mizu: ...We're going home, don't die in the next couple of minutes.

Flaw: This clone sure looks tasty...

Mizu: I'll take that as a compliment. O_O

~~~

'Road leading to Ramen shop' - 18:15pm

Gats: I sure am stuffed.

Missy: So am i ^^ although you stole my money, it has been quite a fun day.

Gats: Yeah, it's alright to get away from training for a bit.

Missy: I'm sure you'll do well in the mission, Gats'.

Gats: Eh. I have my doubts...

They both arrive back at the Ramen shop and enter the seating area, noticing Flaw chowing down on a bowl of ramen with empty bowls all around him.

Flaw: THAT HIT THE ****ING SPOT! *streches backwards and falls off his chair*

Gats' tramples over him and takes the bowl and throws it onto Flaws head while Missy goes into the kitchen to check for Mizu, eventually finding him reading a letter with loud squabbling in the background between Flaw and Gats'

Mizu: Hmm, this is interesting...

Flaw (In background): You bastard!! You will die a horrible death!!!

Mizu: Seems like the hokage wants me back

Gats: (In background): Why did you eat all the ****ing ramen, you Romanian wh*re!!!!

Mizu: But something must be wrong... Why would they want me back unless its utterly important...

Flaw (In background): I worked up an appetite from your mom sucking my ****, you English **** muncher!

Mizu: Either way, It seems like Mizutoki is out of retirement!!!! Yahooo~!

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Author's Notes
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Longer chap than usual but i had to put a lot in it >_< i doubt if it even all fits and unlike last chap, thanks for lawliet for proofreading this chapy ;D much appreciated. :hug:
Not much else to say really xD apart from the FF is finally picking up some pace.
How do chinese people name their children?
They throw a frying pan down the stairs.

<- i have no idea who this guy is but spam him like hell.

lolwut

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lol xD what a nice date ..now I know I'd never take my purse with me if I'm gonna go out with you D:
was funny and me likes it ^-^
 

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No Fight Club reference?? Son i'm disapoint U_U
Awesome chapter.
When you start reading the awesomeness of my work?
lol i've only watched fight club the once :/ got it on dvd. Can't remember much of it to really use as references xD

Meh, i tried getting into it but >.> i'm not a fan of reading for pleasure O_O
 
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