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Nice place to train o_o

Okay now seeing that you are more used to battle oriented training style, I would like you to do a 3 move combo for me and it should consist at least 2 fire jutsu that you have learned so far, the purpose being that I want to know about your over all knowledge in the given element and as to how good are you with it.

Is fire one of your liked elements?
 

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Law begins by forming the tiger hand seal and releasing several fire ghosts that hold the look of heads with yellow eyes and horns.He manipulates them to attack the enemy from the sides as he forms 2 more hand seals releasing a meteor sized sphere of fire that heads straight towards his opponent and blocks his vision of Law do to its size.Law then slams his hand against the ground summoning a large amount of water 20 meters in the sky in the case of the enemy using an airal manouver to dodge the fire projectiles.

( Katon: Onidōrō ) - Fire Release: Demon Lantern
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra releasing several fire ghosts that are like heads with horns and yellow eyes that then attack the target/s in a swarm.

( Katon: Gōenkyū ) - Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user after performing two hand seals Horse → Tiger exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.

(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Stormy Blockade
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will slam their hands against then ground allowing him/her to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.

Fire is cool but I just find its jutsu to sometimes be a bit repetetive and tbh I dont think I ever used 2 fire jutsu in one move which is why this one is a bit.....bad :mad:_@:

I feel like I mostly rely on Earth/Water/Lightning although who knows.Maybe fire will be better for me when I finally learn few more jutsu :p
 

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Okay Fine.

I would like you to use this template every time you reply to a technique.
Try to be as detailed/descriptive as possible. All you have to do is copy the PHP code.

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[B]Weak points[/B]

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[B]Combinations-strategies[/B]

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[B] IMG [if you can find one][/B]

[B] Any question [/B]
Also, I will post how all of the techniques work. I want you then, in your own words, to describe to me what you are doing to get the desired result.

The more efficiently you respond like you have already been doing, the quicker I take away the template as I know that you understand what you are doing. ^_^

You ready.
 

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( Katon: Hinotama no Mai ) - Fire Release: Fireball Dance
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will attack the opponent with a series of slashes with their sword and then finish up with jumping into the air above the target and releasing a powerful fireball down upon them.
Note: Requires a Sword.

>.< Nothing to explain if you know how to read xD, Well this is a good short range attack in which you land multiple slashes of sword and then go on to jump in mid air and shoot out a strong fireball right towards your enemy.
 

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Strong points

  • - A good attack who favours kenjutsu alongside the elements -
  • - If you connect the slashes in the first place its hard for the enemy to do anything else about the rest of the move -
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Weak points

  • - The fact its short range -
  • - Requires a sword -
  • - Since you would need to draw out the sword in short range it could easily backfire on you. -
Combinations-strategies tbh I am not a fan of this technique at all for multiple reasons.
One would be I dislike going into the short range.Secondly I find it that if you actually can hit the enemy with a few slashes before the actual fire jutsu comes into play you might aswell just chop off there head in the first place...

But in retrospect I guess its a good combo with kenjutsu and taijutsu moves since they can rly play into each other and setup for next close up attacks.Taijutsu moreso then kenjutsu since kenjutsu is more lethal.

Ways to counter:

Stop the enemy from entering short range,if they have found themselves in it already you can raise a pillar of earth from under them,counter the sword part with your own sword play...
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Any question
How often do you think this is used? It just doesnt seem all that intresting to me and as I said if I can slash the enemy once with my sword why not kill them with it regularly by aiming for the head with an actual kenjutsu move or basic freeform
 

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Very well done, I am so happy you saw its cons so very well, I also like as to how properly you used the template.

How often do you think this is used? It just doesnt seem all that intresting to me and as I said if I can slash the enemy once with my sword why not kill them with it regularly by aiming for the head with an actual kenjutsu move or basic freeform
Like I said, I totally agree if I can attack him with a sword why not chop him into pieces, As for its usage I will say you can use it while in a ken battle he avoids your slashes using his sword and then you go on to shoot the fire ball but frankly speaking I will never use it in this fashion for two reason.

1. It is cheap and against the spirit of sportsmanship to use such a dirty trick.

2. If your opponent has good reflexes it can always back fire.

( Katon: Yūgana Honoo ) - Fire Release: Graceful Flame

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their fire chakra releasing a flamethrower that shoots at the opponent and then lifts them into the air in a column of intense heat. Sasori can replicate this technique through the usage of his fire launcher

Self explanatory, You release a flame out of your mouth which goes on to hit the opponent and then lift them into mid air while holding them in a column of intense heat, It is really hard to avoid if you are at mid range of your opponent because most of water techniques require a good amount of hand seal [few exception are there], using a pillar to escape is a bad idea in this situation as the pillar won't be that fast.
 

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Strong points

  • - Since it lifts the opponent into the air it sets up for the next attack pretty nicely -
  • - It does not require hand seals and it acts pretty quickly -
  • - Once the enemy is lifted into the air realisticly the heat from the jutsu should rly affect the way they perform certain techniques making it all the more deadly -
Weak points

  • - First off its the range that bugs me once again.Like I said short range always seems suicidal for me since I dont have all that much expenirence in it -
  • - From what I understand it cant kill the enemy,just harm them and setup for the killing blow which can backfire since the enemy can always do something sneaky -
  • - Since I cant find an image of the move this is a guess but would the technique blocks your vision even slighty? Fire in your face is never a good thing xD -
Combinations-strategies
There is no need for super strong jutsu to finish the enemy off after this is used but for instance the lightning spear (False Darkness I believe) would do wonders here.Since it requiresa s single hand seal and it moves rly fast its not easy to dodge it,especially in this situation
Ways to counter:
There are certain water jutsu fast enough for you to block it,some to intercept the fire such as the water gun where you basicly blow out a sphere of water.It covers a good area so it can stop this jutsu too.
There is also the option of going underground but I believe it is just setting yourself up for death.
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I googled it but no luck :/
Any question
You say "It is really hard to avoid if you are at mid range of your opponent..." but the technique is short range.Am I missing something or.. xD? I am probably reading what you said wrong but it doesnt hurt to ask
 

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You say "It is really hard to avoid if you are at mid range of your opponent..." but the technique is short range.Am I missing something or.. xD? I am probably reading what you said wrong but it doesnt hurt to ask


I am so sorry, I meant short range............ the 8 hours of traveling is taking its toll. :mad:_@:

- Since I cant find an image of the move this is a guess but would the technique blocks your vision even slighty? Fire in your face is never a good thing xD -
It will be blocked to certain extent but once caught with in it I don't think there will be anyway out in which you will not be able to observe it.

Now, have you signed the Toad contract, also have you learned Lightning Release: Sixteen Pillar Bind and Earth Release: Mud Fall, as the next two jutsu requires you there prior knowledge.

The Jutsus are.

(Katon: Gamayu Endan) - Fire Release: Toad Oil Flame Bomb

Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu is used in conjunction with Toad Oil Bullet to launch a streaming fireball toward the opponent after performing the following hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger. This jutsu can cover a huge area with fire.

(Katon: Shageki Bisuketto) – Fire Release: Firing Biscuit technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat → Dragon → Boar the user then creates powerful flames inside the giant oven created by Lightning Release: Sixteen pillar bind, cooking the opponent until their burnt. Its normally used together with Earth Release: Mud fall to harden the mud covering the enemy, immobilizing them.
Note: Can only be used in the collaboration of Lightning Release: Sixteen Pillar Bind and Earth Release: Mud Fall
 

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I have not signed the Toad contract but have learned both the earth and lightning jutsu.
And its ok about the mistake,where are you traveling from/to?



Strong points

  • - If the technique is sucesfull its a sure kill since the magnitude of flames inside the oven is so great -
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Weak points

  • - This technique has quite a few and the biggest one is that it cant be done solo,it requires 2 other jutsu -
  • - Since it is restricred to be only used in colaboration with the other 2 jutsu if you even counter one part of the 3 jutsu the whole thing breaks apart -
  • - The fact it also requires 3 hand seals gives the enemy an opening for a counter.Its never a good idea to give the enemy time to counter -
Combinations-strategies
The move is basicly one big combo so its not much to add.I cant use it with anything else and if it works it kills the enemy.
Ways to counter:
I would always stop the mud fall from happening so this technique also doesnt happen.The enemy can still raise the pillars but since im not binded by the mud its not all that difficult to escape.

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None,I am sorry for the lack of strong points but the techique is too risky to use and with that does not come with many good points....
 

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You actually performed it >.<, at least you could have waited so that I could have explained it.

I was traveling to Delhi from my home town [Jaipur], the trip was via road and therefor tiring.

None,I am sorry for the lack of strong points but the techique is too risky to use and with that does not come with many good points....
I understand, it most likely useful when you have 2 clone/allies.

You have missed the below part for the previous techniques, I was going to tell you about it but you already replied so much can't be done now, I won't make you right for all the previous technique so just describe me the fiery biscuit one and the one I am going to teach you now and then continue using it and if I found you to be good with it I will most likely tell you to stop doing so, I did the same with noni as he was describing the techniques very well.

I want you then, in your own words, to describe to me what you are doing to get the desired result.
(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Release: Intelligent Hard Work
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Rat → Dog → Tiger fires a small fireball that erupts into a giant fire-storm after making contact with a surface, causing widespread destruction to the area. Since the flames travel along the ground, and cover such a wide area this is a difficult technique to evade. When combined with Wind Release: Pressure Damage, this technique is amplified to the point of being able to evaporate a large amount of water in an instant.

All fire techniques are so straight forward xD, Now this technique required you to weave 3 hand seal and once done you go on to release a small fireball from your mouth, as soon as it makes contact with the surface it bursts out into a giant firestorm, this covers quite a large area and can harm multiple enemies, remember you shoot the small fireball where ever your enemy is and you can only shoot it up to mid range.
 

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After I perform the Lightning Release: Sixteen Pillar Bind and Earth Release: Mud Fall jutsu and trap the enemy I perform the hand seals Rat → Dragon → Boar creating powerfull flames inside the oven I created with the Sixteen Pillar Bind.The flames cook the enemy medium to well done o_O

Strong points

  • - Hard to evade with the way it travels -
  • - With the wind jutsu combo it can evaporate water -
  • - Good area of effect -
Weak points

  • - This is a pretty good move so the only thing I can think off is that the flames being so high block my view of the enemy -
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Combinations-strategies

As the jutsu desc. says it can be combined with Wind Release: Pressure Damage creating all sorts of hell

Ways to counter:

Creating a sphere of water that covers a big area when it explodes,I ran into this jutsu a few times.

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Any question

nope

I gather chakra in my mouth and form the hand seals Rat → Dog → Tiger.As the final seal is formed I release a small fireball from my mouth and as it comes into contact with the earth it turns into a giant firestorm that travels towards my enemy
 

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Nothing to add so good work.

(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, making an underground tunnel form between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire to turn into lava as it travels. With a single hand seal, the lava will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them in lava.

Well I think this technique has been updated as it was not only restricted to long range in the past, well that gives you your first weak point and that is that it is only restricted to long range and given the fact that this technique is not much fast in terms of speed it quite a big problem, Now moving on to its working well it is quite simple all you need to do is first stomp the ground and create an underground tunnel between you and your opponent and once done you breath out fire into that tunnel and as the fire travels from your side opening to the the other side it takes on the property's of lava and with the use of a single hand seal you can make that lave explode outwards and thus completely engulf your opponent with it.

One of its pro is that it to certain extent can be used as a surprise attack that is if your opponent did not see you stomping the ground and expelling that fire into it.
 
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