[Mystery] In My Hand

[Goetia]

In My Hand

As my presence fades, I feel a painful longing,
A longing to stay, to learn more about you,
With you, I feel a sense of belonging,
A sense that I can learn more about the heart, and if it’s true.

In place of a heart, a hole lies within my chest,
A testament to how empty I truly am, a darkness that swallowed me whole,
Though I think it’s time I confessed,
that I believe you are the being that can fill this hollow hole.

Despite our allegiances, the time we shared wasn’t that of antagonism,
It was one of education, an opportunity to see where we would stand,
I’m not one for attachment or romanticism,
but I realized that is was your heart that was in my hand.

 

[Nonomi]

Beautiful.​

 

[Goetia]

Thank you.

 

[Kazehime Seirin]

woah...............................you're talented

 

[Goetia]

Thank you.

 

[Ryu Kishi]

It was so good :T_T:

 

[Goetia]

Thanks .

 

[Byron123]

That was a truly beautiful poem, it had a lot of meaning.

 

[Princess Kaguya]

Sweet! :T_T:
Incredible work!

 

[Goetia]

Thanks guys.

 

[fiend]

Mesmerising poem. Amazing work and a splendid job.!!!

Did you write keeping in mind the moment Ulquiorra died?

 

[Goetia]

Thank you.

I did, though you can't really write romance for Ulquiorra, so it was somewhat challenging writing this.

 

[fiend]

Thank you.

I did, though you can't really write romance for Ulquiorra, so it was somewhat challenging writing this.

I thought so, and you really did a great job in capturing the essence of Ulquiorra's final moments, he had one of the best deaths in Bleach.

 

[Goetia]

I thought so, and you really did a great job in capturing the essence of Ulquiorra's final moments, he had one of the best deaths in Bleach.

Thank you. I agree, his death was one of my favourite moments in Bleach.