In love that was lost

izinagi54

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This one is actually... is gonna be a tear jerker


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When her eyes was blue and my red.
the dread and the hope filled the void.
i hoped and dread that i succeeded or failed.

I want to dance with you into the moonlit nights.
you wished that i was graceful.
i wanting to be able to look upon you're eyes.
Like god made the crystal blue ice.
The beauty suttle and yet divine.

Quintessence of purity lies within the eyes of the women you lover.
the dove that will take flight you're hearts.
yet never bother to drop them back.
like the theives that keep what they take.
the love i wish for us is not that of lust.
i long for you to be happy.
i long to be happy.
maybe the sadness that clouds me is my inability to bring you back.

I lost you...
i was the one to blame.
i failed and was led astray.
they came and took you away.
the blood on the roses still lays in the pedals.
What a feeble thing life is.
LOve should be that of the adamantine that binds the world.
yet will give under way to the lightest floral touch.

my eyes burn and i feel nothing...
all the things i see are nothing.
the black of night
drowns out my light.
my inner demons make their plights.

the bottle and the drink the only thing to be put me in sleep.
drunken nights spent cursing.
drunken days spent wondering and looking on the stone that bares thy name.
blood becomes violoatile like the poison that leers with cyanide.
the fact of the thing i once held and saw with my eyes now dead and gone.... died
by the things i cannot protect you from.

the heart ripped into the two halfs.
the thread and seams split in between the lines.
the eyes that have seen i call lies.
there is no love and peace.
the only thing that keeps me in my dreams is my drink.
they have you now...
they will always.
i was wrong
i was horribly wrong.

now i sit and railish upon a dry and dead hill top.
the tip of the passion i once shared.
when and where did i go wrong.
the abadoned love.
the scorned lover.
the cuts that i suffer.
the blood that must be repaid.
 

izinagi54

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I am fine
im not sad i am just writing wats on my mind.
 

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Beautifully tragic: are the words I think describe this one best. Again, plus rep to you sir.
 

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Poetry is the thing i can really call my speciality
never again will the reality of my literacy
will be the same Oh lord some body help me

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Just listen to bruno mars when i was your man dude.. i thinks it fit ur poet well now..
 

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Good poem, nice thoughts. But seriously, I don't like that you doN't care about spelling and stuff...also you should Center the text.
 

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Impressive work, please send me your future works also.
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