In a way or another (A NaruHina fanfic) Chapter 2

[Maina Deah]

Awesome chappie!

thanks!

 

[Naruto loves Hinata]

great work!

 

[Maina Deah]

great work!

thank

 

[Kyoto Samurai]

awesome

 

[Maina Deah]

awesome

Thank you!

 

[Dragonfly X]

I'm crying from happiness that you know the difference between "They're" and "Their". Also, a few minor grammatical errors, and you seem to switch tenses in the middle of a paragraph, though scarcely. All in all, really nice!

 

[Maina Deah]

I'm crying from happiness that you know the difference between "They're" and "Their". Also, a few minor grammatical errors, and you seem to switch tenses in the middle of a paragraph, though scarcely. All in all, really nice!

Lol, of course I know..my chapter 1 I know..but my succeeding chaps, there's improvement but I won't edit my 1st chap anymore.

Thanks!

 

[Mante]

Thats cool. lol

 

[Maina Deah]

Thats cool. lol

why lol xd
anyway, thanks for reading