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First in a series of challenges I'm setting for myself to improve...

Rei's Rules and Restrictions.
I will be using only two elements: Raiton and Doton
You can use three elements.
Nin/Tai/Genjutsu is fine.
Killing won't count
No stealing of any kind
Terrain: An empty quarry

Bio is "Keotsu" in my sig - post your bio, and I'll make the first move.
 

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i want to imporove too i start by spitting a huge fire ball at then i slam my hands on ground and lighting come underneath you


(Katon: Gokakyu no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, a ninja inhales air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally.







Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.
 

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i want to imporove too i start by spitting a huge fire ball at then i slam my hands on ground and lighting come underneath you


(Katon: Gokakyu no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, a ninja inhales air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally.







Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.
im usingf my sasori bio
Don't you already have another spar with me?

Anyway, I said I wanted to start - if you wanna spar with me, go ahead and make another thread.
Sempai, can i try to spar with you...? i'm also wants to improve my self with my shadows
if you accepted, Shikaku bio in sig
Sure - I don't think I've ever sparred with you. And that's fine.

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*I start the battle off by quickly forming a single handseal, causing multiple sections of rock to erupt around you, and then engulf you, attempting to crush you.

(Doton: Ganban Kyu) - Earth Style: Bedrock Coffin
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This jutsu allows the user to control multiple sections of rock and move them around their opponent. The user then forms two gigantic sections that crush the opponent.

However, the jutsu was mainly coverfire for me to use:

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.

Unleashing the lightning that cuts through the ground, snaking through all of the area in front of me, intended on striking you.

Then, quickly rushing towards you, arcing to my left, to close the distance, I finally cast:

(Doton: Ganchuusou) - Earth Style: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user creates spikes of earth that come up from the ground to stab the enemy.This jutsu can be made in a short or mid distace but the jutsu its self is made of a 6 foot radius of spikes.

Using the handseal-less jutsu to skewer you.*

(HP: 1250, CP: 1140)
 

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OK then, I’m gonna use Wind, Water and also lighting for the element then ninjutsu and my specialties shadows (if you allowed it) and one other rule, can I use my summons…? Only my summons sempai but CJ’s not…?
And I add one more rule Mid Range as we start ^_^
*as we stands face to face each other and this is my first time facing my Suiton sempai and flash back memories in my mind when he teach me how to manipulate water and now… I’m gonna use it to him and I won’t hold back my power to show him that his knowledge are very useful for me.*
*then I feel the earth I steps on start to shacking and multiple section of rock strat to form surround me and I quickly transfer my lightning chakra within my feet to boost my speed and I perform serial handseal to forming a chidori and manipulated it into a lightning blade then extend into 10 meters away while I’m jump up to the sky towards the top of the multiple section of rock and aiming the the top side and perform the random move to destroyed the multiple section of rock before it crush me*
(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.

*and while I’m in the air I see an electrical racing through the earth and I cast it away from mid air with a vortex of wind aiming below where the area I’m about to landed and this fist also push me up to sky again*

Fuuton: Senpuuken (Wind Style: Hurricane Fist)
Type:Attack
Rank: B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: A vortex of wind shot out of the users fist wind he/she punches.



*And when I’m about to landed I see earth spike emerge from the ground I quickly performing a small sequences of hand seal and then I sends an enormous bolt of electricity from mid air that cuts through the ground which the spikes emerge and destroy them then move the bolt of electricity diagonally keep continue aiming where your stands and try to shock you with it*

(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.

*then I landed on the ground on mid range..phew… what an opening sempai*
 

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OK then, I’m gonna use Wind, Water and also lighting for the element then ninjutsu and my specialties shadows (if you allowed it) and one other rule, can I use my summons…? Only my summons sempai but CJ’s not…?
And I add one more rule Mid Range as we start ^_^
*as we stands face to face each other and this is my first time facing my Suiton sempai and flash back memories in my mind when he teach me how to manipulate water and now… I’m gonna use it to him and I won’t hold back my power to show him that his knowledge are very useful for me.*
*then I feel the earth I steps on start to shacking and multiple section of rock strat to form surround me and I quickly transfer my lightning chakra within my feet to boost my speed and I perform serial handseal to forming a chidori and manipulated it into a lightning blade then extend into 10 meters away while I’m jump up to the sky towards the top of the multiple section of rock and aiming the the top side and perform the random move to destroyed the multiple section of rock before it crush me*
(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.

*and while I’m in the air I see an electrical racing through the earth and I cast it away from mid air with a vortex of wind aiming below where the area I’m about to landed and this fist also push me up to sky again*

Fuuton: Senpuuken (Wind Style: Hurricane Fist)
Type:Attack
Rank: B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: A vortex of wind shot out of the users fist wind he/she punches.



*And when I’m about to landed I see earth spike emerge from the ground I quickly performing a small sequences of hand seal and then I sends an enormous bolt of electricity from mid air that cuts through the ground which the spikes emerge and destroy them then move the bolt of electricity diagonally keep continue aiming where your stands and try to shock you with it*

(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.

*then I landed on the ground on mid range..phew… what an opening sempai*
*As your lightning comes towards me, I simply create a pillar of stone underneath my feet, jettisoning me to my left, allowing me to dodge your lightning, since it comes to a point near me, due to its triangular shape.
(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Style Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth
Taking back to approaching you, I open my mouth, and a spear of lightning comes shooting out, separating into six different branches that try and enclose on you.
(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.
At the same time, though, I also focus my Doton chakra, causing a large amount of mud to fall from the sky, creating a force that would bring you back down to the ground if you try to jump, allowing my spears to hit you.

(Doton: Doro Kakou) – Earth Release: Mud Fall
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.
*

(HP: 1250, CP: 1090)
 

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*I see you managed to dodge my jutsu with just a small pillar blast you then I saw a lightning spear with 6 branch coming from your mouth then I quickly perfom a single handseal and release a huge wind blast then repel your lightning spear as they launches from your mouth then the huge blast of wind like an F4 wind storm keep continue headed your presents and try to suck you in it*

Fuuton: Atsugai (Wind Style: Pressure Damage)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast
moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.



*then not so long after I release the huge blast of wind I heard some loud noise coming from the sky and I look up which the sky start to opened and I knew something will falls down from the sky then I quickly make the necessary handseal and release a huge ball of energy into the opened sky and hits it with that ball and creating a huge explosion and stops whatever would come out from it

(Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user concentrates a lot of lightning chakra into their hand and compressing it into a ball of energy and then releases it at once, causing a huge explotion.

Then I jumps back and makes us a long range then I created 3 shadow clone the 01 in my right 02 in my left and 03 infront of me then I told 01 to run towards you and make him a mid range between you and the 03 and he drew 5 explosive kunais tag and throw them into towards you which got trap the atsugai and the kunais got sucks into the wind storm and when it hits you, surely will explode while you got trap inside the storm and hits you brutally.

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja�s chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
 

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*I see you managed to dodge my jutsu with just a small pillar blast you then I saw a lightning spear with 6 branch coming from your mouth then I quickly perfom a single handseal and release a huge wind blast then repel your lightning spear as they launches from your mouth then the huge blast of wind like an F4 wind storm keep continue headed your presents and try to suck you in it*

Fuuton: Atsugai (Wind Style: Pressure Damage)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast
moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.



*then not so long after I release the huge blast of wind I heard some loud noise coming from the sky and I look up which the sky start to opened and I knew something will falls down from the sky then I quickly make the necessary handseal and release a huge ball of energy into the opened sky and hits it with that ball and creating a huge explosion and stops whatever would come out from it

(Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user concentrates a lot of lightning chakra into their hand and compressing it into a ball of energy and then releases it at once, causing a huge explotion.

Then I jumps back and makes us a long range then I created 3 shadow clone the 01 in my right 02 in my left and 03 infront of me then I told 01 to run towards you and make him a mid range between you and the 03 and he drew 5 explosive kunais tag and throw them into towards you which got trap the atsugai and the kunais got sucks into the wind storm and when it hits you, surely will explode while you got trap inside the storm and hits you brutally.

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja�s chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
*As your wind attack blows through my lightning and quickly comes towards me, I quickly for three handseals, and a giant wall of earth appears, stopping the wind attack dead.

(Doton: Dosenki) - Earth Release: Mudslide Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a sequence of three hand seals the user then creates a small wall of earth to rise up from the ground infront of them and cause a mud slide to form from the wall and directs it towards the enemy target/s to try engulf them.

However, as you go to use the Thunder up to strike my mudfall, I also use:

(Doton: Fukusuu no Dorosandan) - Earth Release: Multiple Mudshot Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage point: 40
Description: This jutsu is basically a widespread version of the Mudshot Technique; allowing the user to fire at multiple targets.

So that as you jump back, trying to form your clones, several more portals open up all around the sky, dropping mud all over the battle field and covering you and your clones, the force of the dropping mud dispersing them instantly.

As I rush towards, now, everything out of the way and my mud falling from the sky, I throw two explosive kunai at you, one at your feet and one aimed at you, so that if you try and jump back, it would land at your feet a little further away.

I then finish my attack by using:

(Raiton: Rai Ryouken) - Lightning Release: Lightning Hound
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting.

Creating a beast of lightning that I direct towards you, which I can direct due to it's leash, which is tied to my hand.*

(HP: 1250, CP: 1020)
 

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*01 on my right heard some loud noise again from above then look up and see’s several opening within the sky then he immediately generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from his body then spread them into the air and stops the several opening and prevent the muds to falls down*

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

* then I see a beast of lightning coming towards me and my clone then the 03 which infront of me quickly release a vortex of wind and destroy your beast, cast it away*

Fuuton: Senpuuken (Wind Style: Hurricane Fist)
Type:Attack
Rank: B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: A vortex of wind shot out of the users fist wind he/she punches.



*at the exact same time the 03 release a senpuuken then I jumps to the front next to 03 and perform a tiger handseal then grow my shadows beneath the senpuuken and headed your direction then trap your shadow with mine then pound and squeezes you until you can’t breath*

(Kagegijin) - Shadow Impersonation
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Shadow forms to replicas of the user that pound the opponent and squeezes them to finish them off.

I like the HP and CP method on battling so I also do your method but according to my current rate I make it below your HP and CP ^_^

(HP: 1000, CP: 1000)
 

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*01 on my right heard some loud noise again from above then look up and see’s several opening within the sky then he immediately generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from his body then spread them into the air and stops the several opening and prevent the muds to falls down*

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

* then I see a beast of lightning coming towards me and my clone then the 03 which infront of me quickly release a vortex of wind and destroy your beast, cast it away*

Fuuton: Senpuuken (Wind Style: Hurricane Fist)
Type:Attack
Rank: B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: A vortex of wind shot out of the users fist wind he/she punches.



*at the exact same time the 03 release a senpuuken then I jumps to the front next to 03 and perform a tiger handseal then grow my shadows beneath the senpuuken and headed your direction then trap your shadow with mine then pound and squeezes you until you can’t breath*

(Kagegijin) - Shadow Impersonation
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Shadow forms to replicas of the user that pound the opponent and squeezes them to finish them off.

I like the HP and CP method on battling so I also do your method but according to my current rate I make it below your HP and CP ^_^

(HP: 1000, CP: 1000)
*As your clone blows the vortex of wind at my lightning beast, which the wind would continue through, I simply ignore the wind vortex as it's not on the same trajectory with me as I was not lined up with my beast. However, I continue with my throwing of my two explosive kunai, altering the trajectory of the two so that they land at your and 03's feet respectively, making you choose between using your Shadow jutsu and getting killed or dodging the explosion.

However, just as well, I also use:

(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: after performing the following handseals the user will then create a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users body and blind the target/s.

Quickly forming four handseals, making a bright light emanate form my body that momentarily disperses my shadow, so that there is nothing for your jutsu to affect, should you choose to continue with it. The genjutsu part of the technique makes it appear as if I quickly made three clones during the flash (a shared illusion amongst you and your clones, since the technique would blind all of you), and that they are running at the real you, firing off Atsugai, Intense Pain, and False Darkness, individually, and simultaneously.

What really happens, though, is that I quickly focus an absurd amount of Doton chakra, and cause what are basically mountains to form on both sides, enclosing you and your clones. The mountains would slam together, killing you.

(Doton: Yama Eikyō) - Earth Release: Mountain Smash
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user creates two enormous rock formations that close in on the opponent from two opposing sides with tremendous force, smashing everything caught in between. Both of these formations are capable of dwarfing even the Demonic Statue of the Outer Path in size. This is one the most strongest Earth based techniques, standing as a testament to both this ability's destructive potential and its difficulty.
Note: Can only be used once due to scale of technique

Due to the fact that the jutsu is so large that destroying and dodging it will be a problem for you, it's also hard for me to also use a lightning jutsu to supplement it, so I simply use:

(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.

Creating an earthquake strong enough to cause problems for you, and complicating your escape/dodging of my mountain smasher.*

Yeah, I generally don't use the HP part (due to there being only a few jutsu of high rank that you can survive) except for self damaging moves, but I like to keep track of my chakra, as I do abide by that rule.

(HP: 1250, CP:925)
 

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*as I see you didn’t get hit by the 03 wind and I saw you throw 2 explosive kunais direct at us (me and 03), I undo my shadows tech and the exact time 03 quickly make the necessary handseal and spit out mud from his mouth then created a protective wall of earth infront of us, the 2 explosive kunais hits the walls and didn’t effected, if you still trying to do the “Lightning Illusion Flash” then it’ll not affect us because the protective wall of earth blocked it up and also block your vision out of me*

(Doton: Doryuheki) - Earth Style: Mud Wall Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user spits out mud from their mouth onto the ground. The mud then solidifies into a large, protective wall of earth.

*because we didn’t effected by your lightning illusion flash so we didn’t caught by your illusions, then 01 and 02 behind us see’s a giant mountain form on both sides tries to enclosing me and 03 then the 01 and 02 release two powerful lightning blast each two the both mountain and destroyed the mountain into pieces before the mountain approach*

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(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

*After that the 01 and 02 run towards me and 03 then we make some random move so you can’t predict which the real of us, then we scramble… two of us go to the right and left sides of the protective walls and one jumps up to the top of the walls and each of the three of them throw 5 explosive kunais towards you and the last one go jumps backward in long range behind the wall*
 

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*as I see you didn’t get hit by the 03 wind and I saw you throw 2 explosive kunais direct at us (me and 03), I undo my shadows tech and the exact time 03 quickly make the necessary handseal and spit out mud from his mouth then created a protective wall of earth infront of us, the 2 explosive kunais hits the walls and didn’t effected, if you still trying to do the “Lightning Illusion Flash” then it’ll not affect us because the protective wall of earth blocked it up and also block your vision out of me*

(Doton: Doryuheki) - Earth Style: Mud Wall Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user spits out mud from their mouth onto the ground. The mud then solidifies into a large, protective wall of earth.

*because we didn’t effected by your lightning illusion flash so we didn’t caught by your illusions, then 01 and 02 behind us see’s a giant mountain form on both sides tries to enclosing me and 03 then the 01 and 02 release two powerful lightning blast each two the both mountain and destroyed the mountain into pieces before the mountain approach*

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(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

*After that the 01 and 02 run towards me and 03 then we make some random move so you can’t predict which the real of us, then we scramble… two of us go to the right and left sides of the protective walls and one jumps up to the top of the walls and each of the three of them throw 5 explosive kunais towards you and the last one go jumps backward in long range behind the wall*
Sorry bud, you just made life a bit more difficult for yourself.

*As your mudwall forms, blocking the kunai, and my Illusion Flash Pillar, the two mountains do indeed form. However, your error was in trying to stop them with that particular lightning jutsu. As they're rather concentrated attacks, when you strike the mountains, specifically being on the inside of them, all the rubble falls in towards you, so that, while you may have stopped the mountains movement, you basically just made much of them fall down on you anyway.

And because I carry on with my World Shaking, not only does your Mudwall collapse, but you and your clones, who are trying to scramble, have your balance disrupted, making it difficult to stay on your feet, while the large amount of rubble is falling towards you.

However, to further increase my powerful onslaught, I use:

Raiton: Chidori Raimei (Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm)
Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

After rushing towards you, causing a massive electrical storm that decimates you. As a final precaution, though, I use:

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This jutsu causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the center, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated.

Causing a massive swirling pit of earth to form, that drags you and your clones (if they are still active) under, the damage of the jutsu being increased as there are large chunks of stone from the mountain crusher inside the dirt.*

(HP: 1250, CP: 865)
 

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*I forgot the world shacking though sempai ^_^*

*then I felt the ground I steps on start to shake and imbalance all of us and I also saw some of big rocks start to rumble tries to hit me then I quickly drops my body like push up stance but my hand infront together and I spread my feet to the side left to right like a tripod and making myself balance while the ground still shacking (as my clone also doing the same thing to make them balance. then I active my lightning armor to prevent the rocks which rumble could injured me*

(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.

*at the same time after doing the tripod stances to make my clones balance, then the 01 with just one hand release an F5 storm toward your lightning and cast them away*

Fuuton: Tatsuno Ooshigoto (Wind Style: Severing Pressure)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user sends wind into the sky to darken the clouds and make the envoronment stormy. These clouds will create These clouds will create a cutting tornado that comes down as a F-5 tornado with slicing wind.
Use with severing wind pressure.



*when the earth shake stops then suddenly something try to suck us and the 02 see’s a hole in the middle of us sucks anything down, then 02 rushes to that hole with turn his body 180° in his face towards the hole and from distances he spit a mud and a large of mud and it become a solid protective wall and shut the hole then the 02 jumps to the top of the wall while the 01 03 and I nearly got sucks and our feet was on the walls while we still on the ground*

(Doton: Doryuheki) - Earth Style: Mud Wall Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user spits out mud from their mouth onto the ground. The mud then solidifies into a large, protective wall of earth.

Phew… that’s was close… *then the 3 of us standing infront of the wall and waiting what move you are about to do…?*
 

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*I forgot the world shacking though sempai ^_^*

*then I felt the ground I steps on start to shake and imbalance all of us and I also saw some of big rocks start to rumble tries to hit me then I quickly drops my body like push up stance but my hand infront together and I spread my feet to the side left to right like a tripod and making myself balance while the ground still shacking (as my clone also doing the same thing to make them balance. then I active my lightning armor to prevent the rocks which rumble could injured me*

(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.

*at the same time after doing the tripod stances to make my clones balance, then the 01 with just one hand release an F5 storm toward your lightning and cast them away*

Fuuton: Tatsuno Ooshigoto (Wind Style: Severing Pressure)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user sends wind into the sky to darken the clouds and make the envoronment stormy. These clouds will create These clouds will create a cutting tornado that comes down as a F-5 tornado with slicing wind.
Use with severing wind pressure.



*when the earth shake stops then suddenly something try to suck us and the 02 see’s a hole in the middle of us sucks anything down, then 02 rushes to that hole with turn his body 180° in his face towards the hole and from distances he spit a mud and a large of mud and it become a solid protective wall and shut the hole then the 02 jumps to the top of the wall while the 01 03 and I nearly got sucks and our feet was on the walls while we still on the ground*

(Doton: Doryuheki) - Earth Style: Mud Wall Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user spits out mud from their mouth onto the ground. The mud then solidifies into a large, protective wall of earth.

Phew… that’s was close… *then the 3 of us standing infront of the wall and waiting what move you are about to do…?*
*As you are forming your mudwall, defending against my antlion technique, I use:

(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

Creating a powerful lightning dragon that launches at you, blowing through the center of your wall, while making it's electricity jump to all three of you, stunning you long enough for me to form two handseals and activate:
(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique creates a swamp beneath the target (relative to them) that immobilizes them. If the swamp is made deep enough it will kill the target. The size of the swamp is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

Creating a pit around you and your clones, which you fall into and sink into, as any remnants of your mudwall sink into it.

I finish by, once again, using:

Raiton: Chidori Raimei (Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm)
Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

Creating another gigantic lightning storm - however, it causes electricity to flow through the liquid of the swamp as well, increasing it's lethality.*

(HP: 1250, CP: 765)
 

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*as we see a powerful lightning dragon towards us the 01 quickly perform a single handseal then relase a huge blast of wind once again to cast and repel your lightning dragon*

Fuuton: Atsugai (Wind Style: Pressure Damage)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast
moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.



*at the same time after the 01 release a wind tech, the 02 create a 3 earth pillar each beneath our feet and manipulate his doton chakra to make the pillars move dash back to long range and spread the 3*

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Style Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

*when we begin to dash back to long range, I release :*

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

*into the grond to stops the swamp completely forming beneath us while still dash, I spread the non-focused electrically charged so the swamp will never reach our present….*

*And now we all at the long range and your gigantic lightning storm will never reach us because it’s a short mid jutsu, we are now standing once again in the pillars and I told them to scramble to the right and your left… the 01 goes dash with his pillars to your right in long range while throwing 3 explosive kunai’s in three different angle one at the time, then the 02 dash also with his pillars goes to your left and also do the same thing like 01 but from your right side in long range while I standing infront of you in long range drew release 100 shurikens imbue with wind chakra which make them very fast towards you*
 

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*as we see a powerful lightning dragon towards us the 01 quickly perform a single handseal then relase a huge blast of wind once again to cast and repel your lightning dragon*

Fuuton: Atsugai (Wind Style: Pressure Damage)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast
moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.



*at the same time after the 01 release a wind tech, the 02 create a 3 earth pillar each beneath our feet and manipulate his doton chakra to make the pillars move dash back to long range and spread the 3*

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Style Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

*when we begin to dash back to long range, I release :*

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

*into the grond to stops the swamp completely forming beneath us while still dash, I spread the non-focused electrically charged so the swamp will never reach our present….*

*And now we all at the long range and your gigantic lightning storm will never reach us because it’s a short mid jutsu, we are now standing once again in the pillars and I told them to scramble to the right and your left… the 01 goes dash with his pillars to your right in long range while throwing 3 explosive kunai’s in three different angle one at the time, then the 02 dash also with his pillars goes to your left and also do the same thing like 01 but from your right side in long range while I standing infront of you in long range drew release 100 shurikens imbue with wind chakra which make them very fast towards you*
*As a way to take defense against your Fuuton jutsu which I may still be in range of (albeit it is weakened some after dispersing my dragon), I simply use:

(Doton: Iwa no Hogo) - Earth Release: Earth Shelter Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will surround themselves in a rock shaped dome. This is done by raising up the surrounding earth over themselves. The terrain isn't altered by this technique as the grass and tree in the immediate area weren't displaced when ittan used this technique.

Creating a dome of earth around me, from under which I use:

(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach.

Using the jutsu from underneath my dome - because of this, you have no way of knowing I left the dome, so I simply move underground, using the vibrations to sense where you are. This goes on as you and your clones shoot your kunai at the dome, and release your entire onslaught on it.

However, I actually moved about mid-range to the right of you and your clones.

Taking advantage of the moment where you don't know where I am, I quickly form five handseals, and launch a large and powerful dragon of earth at you.

(Doton: Dosenkiryū) – Earth Release: Earth Dragon Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals will create a large dragon of earth erupt from the ground and direct it towards the enemy with devastating force. This technique much resembles the Water Release: Water Dragon technique.
*

(HP: 1250, CP: 690)
 

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*as the dome created i think to my self that something fishy goin on inside then to prevent what ever happen later on then after the dome completely forming i turn my and my clone surrounding area (right, left, front and rear side) become a swamp and i manipulate my doton chakra to extended the swamp even wider including reaching your dome in just a few seconds and sink who ever inside*


(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique creates a swamp beneath the target (relative to them) that immobilizes them. If the swamp is made deep enough it will kill the target. The size of the swamp is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

*because i didn't know your presents whether you died or still survive, then once the dome sink then to make the swamp even lethal me and 01 then use :*

2x
(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Style: Intense Pain
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A huge burst of fire that turns into a huge fireball and can cover a large area, burning all in its path.

*coming towards the dome and diagonally left side of the dome and the 01 release the intense pain to the dome also but cover the right side diagonally of the dome and turning the swamp into a hot lava then the fire tech destroy the dome into pieces and kill anyone inside*

*after release the fire tech then the 02 and 03 throw 3 smopke bomb each to cover our presents*
 

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*as the dome created i think to my self that something fishy goin on inside then to prevent what ever happen later on then after the dome completely forming i turn my and my clone surrounding area (right, left, front and rear side) become a swamp and i manipulate my doton chakra to extended the swamp even wider including reaching your dome in just a few seconds and sink who ever inside*


(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique creates a swamp beneath the target (relative to them) that immobilizes them. If the swamp is made deep enough it will kill the target. The size of the swamp is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

*because i didn't know your presents whether you died or still survive, then once the dome sink then to make the swamp even lethal me and 01 then use :*

2x
(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Style: Intense Pain
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A huge burst of fire that turns into a huge fireball and can cover a large area, burning all in its path.

*coming towards the dome and diagonally left side of the dome and the 01 release the intense pain to the dome also but cover the right side diagonally of the dome and turning the swamp into a hot lava then the fire tech destroy the dome into pieces and kill anyone inside*

*after release the fire tech then the 02 and 03 throw 3 smopke bomb each to cover our presents*
I believe you have this one. ^_^ I don't think UFP allows free movement through a swamp, so I don't have a way to get out of this that's not questionable at best.

Thanks for the battle - I got alot our of this like I wanted.
 
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