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Rei's R&R
Customs: Yes
Killing: Yes but doesn't count towards the bio
Stealing: No
Terrain: Generic field with forest long range away from the field

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post your bio and ill make the first move

~please dont spam~

~this fight is open so if your willing to help me improve not just lob nukes feel free to post~​
 

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I will needs updating
 

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where are you up to on training?

because im looking for someone with bit more experience.. dont mean to offend if I have
 

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B earth and fire and lightning.C water and wind.D gen and tai.C nin
Edit:Fight somebody else
 
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Eh, okay. Mid range
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Byakugan Activated

*As I notice you stood mid range from me I push Doton chakra through the ground causing a tremor which knocks you off balance and causes you to fall backwards*
(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.


*I then quickly weave a few handseals and slam my hands on the floor, creating two jaw-like sections of earth that come from either side of you and engulf you as you are on the floor*
(Doton: Musaborudzuchi) – Earth Release: Devouring Earth
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: 50
Description: The user performs the Ram → Horse → Tiger → Rabbit → Snake and slams their palm on the ground. Instantly, the ground to the sides of the opponent take the shape of huge jaws and attempt to crush and stab him between them.


*I then make two shadow clones who stand either side of me (C1 left and C2 right)
(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.


Edit: okay if anyone else wants to face me that will be my first move​
 

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Hey partner, mind if Gabriel gives it a shot?
 

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Go for it :D my first move is above
 

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Eh, okay. Mid range
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Byakugan Activated

*As I notice you stood mid range from me I push Doton chakra through the ground causing a tremor which knocks you off balance and causes you to fall backwards*
(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.


*I then quickly weave a few handseals and slam my hands on the floor, creating two jaw-like sections of earth that come from either side of you and engulf you as you are on the floor*
(Doton: Musaborudzuchi) – Earth Release: Devouring Earth
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: 50
Description: The user performs the Ram → Horse → Tiger → Rabbit → Snake and slams their palm on the ground. Instantly, the ground to the sides of the opponent take the shape of huge jaws and attempt to crush and stab him between them.


*I then make two shadow clones who stand either side of me (C1 left and C2 right)
(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.


Edit: okay if anyone else wants to face me that will be my first move​

As the earth begins to shake below me and I stumble to the ground, I notice you making a series of seals and I quickly channle my doton chakra beneath me and as you slam your palms on the ground, I create a pillar of earth beneath my feet which launches me at an angel forwards and upwards towards you.

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

As I fly towards you at an angle I clap my hands making the snake seal, focusing in on my raiton chakra and I release a powerful spear of lightning down towards you just as your clones are created. As the spear of lightning leaves my hands they split into several spears of lightning which head for you and both of your clones.

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri

Immediently after ejecting my spears of lightning, I make two horse and tiger seal and I expell and enormous ball of flame, the size of a meteor down towards you and your clones.

(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Great Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user after performing the Horse → Tiger hand seals exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.

Summery:
I do succum to some minor damage because of your tremor, however as I notice you make your seals I channel my own doton chakra beneath me and I have a small pillar of earth rise quick just as you place your hands down on the ground and I'm propelled upwards and forwards towards you as the earth jaws are formed. This should work, even though the jutsu is fair game from all ranges, the focus is on my immedient position and if I'm propelled out of the mid sections of the earth that rise up, I should at least make it out of this jutsu (note I'm not on the pillar, the pillar rose and shot me fast and far into the air). The moment after I'm launched into the air, as I'm no longer preforming the Doton technique I make the snake seal and release my false darkness spear down towards you just as your clones appear and the spear splits so that it would come down to you and your clones. Immediently after I make two seals and launch my flame meteor down towards you. I should be mid ranged in the air from you and your two clones at this point.
 

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As the earth begins to shake below me and I stumble to the ground, I notice you making a series of seals and I quickly channle my doton chakra beneath me and as you slam your palms on the ground, I create a pillar of earth beneath my feet which launches me at an angel forwards and upwards towards you.

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

As I fly towards you at an angle I clap my hands making the snake seal, focusing in on my raiton chakra and I release a powerful spear of lightning down towards you just as your clones are created. As the spear of lightning leaves my hands they split into several spears of lightning which head for you and both of your clones.

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri

Immediently after ejecting my spears of lightning, I make two horse and tiger seal and I expell and enormous ball of flame, the size of a meteor down towards you and your clones.

(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Great Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user after performing the Horse → Tiger hand seals exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.

Summery:
I do succum to some minor damage because of your tremor, however as I notice you make your seals I channel my own doton chakra beneath me and I have a small pillar of earth rise quick just as you place your hands down on the ground and I'm propelled upwards and forwards towards you as the earth jaws are formed. This should work, even though the jutsu is fair game from all ranges, the focus is on my immedient position and if I'm propelled out of the mid sections of the earth that rise up, I should at least make it out of this jutsu (note I'm not on the pillar, the pillar rose and shot me fast and far into the air). The moment after I'm launched into the air, as I'm no longer preforming the Doton technique I make the snake seal and release my false darkness spear down towards you just as your clones appear and the spear splits so that it would come down to you and your clones. Immediently after I make two seals and launch my flame meteor down towards you. I should be mid ranged in the air from you and your two clones at this point.

(sorry for the late reply I went inactive for a bit)

*as the lightning spear and fireballs come towards me and my clones I focus my Doton chakra into the ground beneath me and push the ground beneath me and my clones up and out of the way of the two attacks*
(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.


*Just as the two attack fly into the raised ground beneath me and my clones we both jump of the raised earth as it is destroyed by the two attacks. We jump at a diagonal angle towards you and as we are flying through the air C1 quickly performs the Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger handseals and creates a great blinding light behind me and the other clone which blinds you as you fly through the air*
(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will then create a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users body and blind the target/s.


*Now at short range C2 raises his hands and lightning shoots down from above you and strikes you down (we are both in the air so the time for this jutsu would be drastically reduced as we are closer to the sky)*
(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Flying Thunder God
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air to draw in lightning chakra from the sky and then shoot the lightning energy at the enemy target.




 

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(sorry for the late reply I went inactive for a bit)

*as the lightning spear and fireballs come towards me and my clones I focus my Doton chakra into the ground beneath me and push the ground beneath me and my clones up and out of the way of the two attacks*
(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.


*Just as the two attack fly into the raised ground beneath me and my clones we both jump of the raised earth as it is destroyed by the two attacks. We jump at a diagonal angle towards you and as we are flying through the air C1 quickly performs the Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger handseals and creates a great blinding light behind me and the other clone which blinds you as you fly through the air*
(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will then create a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users body and blind the target/s.


*Now at short range C2 raises his hands and lightning shoots down from above you and strikes you down (we are both in the air so the time for this jutsu would be drastically reduced as we are closer to the sky)*
(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Flying Thunder God
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air to draw in lightning chakra from the sky and then shoot the lightning energy at the enemy target.





Your earth section raises both you and your clones as both of my attacks come shooting down towards you.

Gabriel: *annoying*

As the spears of lightning and fire makes contact with your section of earth, I quickly manifest my chakra into my hand creating a high frequency vibration that imitates the sounds of chirping birds. The moment you're forced to leap off the earth section towards me, I swing my hand around in a semi circle releasing several small senbon constructed of lightning. Their small size, plus the momentum generated by my arm and the natural high speed of lightning have the needles travel fast towards you and your clones just as you leap towards me.

(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.

As you and your clones would be forced to deal with my senbon, I inhale deeply and emit a powerful jet stream of wind from my mouth out in front of me, propelling me back quickly and keeping me distant from you as you travel towards me, keeping me at the edge of mid-range from you.

(Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement

The moment I reach mid range I quickly make the ram seal and hold my hand up in the air and I channle my lightning chakra through the atmosphere above and a large electrical discharge descends all over you and your clones and, as you said yourself, being in the air decreases the time needed for this technique.

(Raiton: Dai Denki hōden no Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Large Electrical Discharge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.

Summery:
You state that both my attacks are coming towards you as you make the section of earth rise between you. As my two jutsu come into contact with your earth section I use my technique and since you and your clones have leaped towards me, the high speed of my jutsu plus the simple fact that you're coming right into the fire, the senbon should make contact with you and your clones rather quickly, which would force you to deal with them before you can use your flash pillar or your discharge techinique. Just as a precaussion I keep myself distant from you at mid-range and I make the ram seal and use my own electrical discharge technique.
 

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Your earth section raises both you and your clones as both of my attacks come shooting down towards you.

Gabriel: *annoying*

As the spears of lightning and fire makes contact with your section of earth, I quickly manifest my chakra into my hand creating a high frequency vibration that imitates the sounds of chirping birds. The moment you're forced to leap off the earth section towards me, I swing my hand around in a semi circle releasing several small senbon constructed of lightning. Their small size, plus the momentum generated by my arm and the natural high speed of lightning have the needles travel fast towards you and your clones just as you leap towards me.

(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.

As you and your clones would be forced to deal with my senbon, I inhale deeply and emit a powerful jet stream of wind from my mouth out in front of me, propelling me back quickly and keeping me distant from you as you travel towards me, keeping me at the edge of mid-range from you.

(Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement

The moment I reach mid range I quickly make the ram seal and hold my hand up in the air and I channle my lightning chakra through the atmosphere above and a large electrical discharge descends all over you and your clones and, as you said yourself, being in the air decreases the time needed for this technique.

(Raiton: Dai Denki hōden no Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Large Electrical Discharge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.

Summery:
You state that both my attacks are coming towards you as you make the section of earth rise between you. As my two jutsu come into contact with your earth section I use my technique and since you and your clones have leaped towards me, the high speed of my jutsu plus the simple fact that you're coming right into the fire, the senbon should make contact with you and your clones rather quickly, which would force you to deal with them before you can use your flash pillar or your discharge techinique. Just as a precaussion I keep myself distant from you at mid-range and I make the ram seal and use my own electrical discharge technique.

*As we are flying towards you and you create the chidori in your hand I watch your movements and when you spin your arm and fire the senbon at me I breathe in and exhale a great blast of wind that takes out all of the senbon and continues towards you slightly weaker*
(Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.


While this is happening C1 and C2 are continuing their jutsu's, thus blinding you and striking you with lightning from the sky

*then as C1 and C2 are preforming their jutsu's I infuse wind chakra into several shuriken causing them to spin rapidly and I launch them directly at you*
(Fūton: Kaiten Shuriken) - Wind Release: Rotating Shuriken
Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: This technique will infuse wind-based chakra into bladed weapons. The user can than manipulate the blades in a spinning manner to attack the target.


*Then as the shuriken are flying towards you I form a single handseal and the shuriken greatly multiplies*
(Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shuriken Shadow Clone Jutsu
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Projectile Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that uses Kage Bunshin to create multiple physical clone copies from one thrown projectile.


 

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*As we are flying towards you and you create the chidori in your hand I watch your movements and when you spin your arm and fire the senbon at me I breathe in and exhale a great blast of wind that takes out all of the senbon and continues towards you slightly weaker*
(Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.


While this is happening C1 and C2 are continuing their jutsu's, thus blinding you and striking you with lightning from the sky

*then as C1 and C2 are preforming their jutsu's I infuse wind chakra into several shuriken causing them to spin rapidly and I launch them directly at you*
(Fūton: Kaiten Shuriken) - Wind Release: Rotating Shuriken
Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: This technique will infuse wind-based chakra into bladed weapons. The user can than manipulate the blades in a spinning manner to attack the target.


*Then as the shuriken are flying towards you I form a single handseal and the shuriken greatly multiplies*
(Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shuriken Shadow Clone Jutsu
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Projectile Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that uses Kage Bunshin to create multiple physical clone copies from one thrown projectile.



My needles of lightning are disrupted by your preassure and unable to maintain their form and they disperse, however your preassure damage is weakened. I'm sent flying back because of the preassure of your wind and I do sustain some significant damage because of the harshness that still resides within the technique. However as I'm thrown back in the air I'm propelled outwards still into mid-ranged and your lightning discharge does miss me as your clone is no longer in range, however I'm still blinded by your light pillar.

Out of apprehension of the loss of my sight, as you throw your shuriken and I hear the blades whistling towards me, through the air and I continue to propell myself by exhaling a gust of wind from my mouth, which should propell me into long range.

(Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement

As I'm out of range of your shuriken and my sight begins to come back into play, I do admit my eyes are still adjusting to the situation and I don't have 100% clarity as of yet however I still manage to decipher some areas as I'm still in flight. I preform the horse and tiger seal focusing on my katon chakra and I exhale an enourmous ball of flame the size of a great meteor towards you

(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Great Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user after performing the Horse → Tiger hand seals exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.

I then focus my chakra back to wind and I release a powerful gust of wind intended to augment the flames of the meteor outwards increasing it's width and height (vertical and horizontal).

(Futon: Ressenpū) - Wind Release: Violent Whirlwind
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user gushes a powerful stream of wind from their mouth towards their enemy.

As the augmented flames head towards you I re-gain full access to my vision back as I see the flames clearly traveling in the direction towards you where I last saw you.

Summery:
Now my explination of me moving out of range of your discharge based on the your justu I thought would be reasonable considering your wind technique is still packing a hell of a punch. I'm in the air where there is no base of me standing so me being airborn and being pushed back based on your technique is why I figured that would be reasonable an explination since your technique is still powerful. Also, even if it's not I still have the wind stream which should take care of that problem. If that were the case, when you launch your shuriken and I make my two seals to cast the fire technique, it's up against C-ranked wind, since the shuriken shadow clone doesn't add to the power of the jutsu they're just weapons spread out and my meteor should blast through them no problem and the arugmented flames of the wind are still present. Also based on the way Cee used his flash pillar it seems like the flash doesn't continue to have a lasting affect so taking that into account my vision returning at the end of my turn seems reasonable. I hope. If you find any problems tell me.
 

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My needles of lightning are disrupted by your preassure and unable to maintain their form and they disperse, however your preassure damage is weakened. I'm sent flying back because of the preassure of your wind and I do sustain some significant damage because of the harshness that still resides within the technique. However as I'm thrown back in the air I'm propelled outwards still into mid-ranged and your lightning discharge does miss me as your clone is no longer in range, however I'm still blinded by your light pillar.

Out of apprehension of the loss of my sight, as you throw your shuriken and I hear the blades whistling towards me, through the air and I continue to propell myself by exhaling a gust of wind from my mouth, which should propell me into long range.

(Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement

As I'm out of range of your shuriken and my sight begins to come back into play, I do admit my eyes are still adjusting to the situation and I don't have 100% clarity as of yet however I still manage to decipher some areas as I'm still in flight. I preform the horse and tiger seal focusing on my katon chakra and I exhale an enourmous ball of flame the size of a great meteor towards you

(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Great Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user after performing the Horse → Tiger hand seals exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.

I then focus my chakra back to wind and I release a powerful gust of wind intended to augment the flames of the meteor outwards increasing it's width and height (vertical and horizontal).

(Futon: Ressenpū) - Wind Release: Violent Whirlwind
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user gushes a powerful stream of wind from their mouth towards their enemy.

As the augmented flames head towards you I re-gain full access to my vision back as I see the flames clearly traveling in the direction towards you where I last saw you.

Summery:
Now my explination of me moving out of range of your discharge based on the your justu I thought would be reasonable considering your wind technique is still packing a hell of a punch. I'm in the air where there is no base of me standing so me being airborn and being pushed back based on your technique is why I figured that would be reasonable an explination since your technique is still powerful. Also, even if it's not I still have the wind stream which should take care of that problem. If that were the case, when you launch your shuriken and I make my two seals to cast the fire technique, it's up against C-ranked wind, since the shuriken shadow clone doesn't add to the power of the jutsu they're just weapons spread out and my meteor should blast through them no problem and the arugmented flames of the wind are still present. Also based on the way Cee used his flash pillar it seems like the flash doesn't continue to have a lasting affect so taking that into account my vision returning at the end of my turn seems reasonable. I hope. If you find any problems tell me.

*As you go to spit out the fireballs I summon a mass of water directly in front of your mouth so as you spit the fireballs then collide with the water and create a boiling steam which scolds your face and further impairs your already impaired vision*
(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Storm Upheaval
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.


*I then spit a lightning bolt that splits into three separated bolts aimed for your heart your right lung and your stomach*
(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.


*While im doing this me and my clones are falling. So using the force of gravity to aim him C1 drops down quickly and stamps on the floor, creating a tunnel underground which he then inflames with his Katon chakra, this ignited tunnel the erupts right under you and sends burning hot lava up that engulfs you as the lightning spears reach around short range of you*
(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, making an underground tunnel form between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire to turn into lava as it travels. With a single hand seal, the lava will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them in lava.






 
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