Improvement #1 [Open]

[Bruce Banner]

They say i need some improvement so here goes.

Open for all, for fun but also serious fight.

Rei's Rule and Restriction
All you know
Mid Range
No Stealing nor killing
Sandy Field like when Hiruko against Kankuro scene

I use Sasori bio, puppet in sig and i'm in form of Hiruko's
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Hiruko

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Created by Sasori, Hiruko is the ultimate defensive puppet, hence why Sasori often stays inside of it, being hollow on the inside. From the inside of the puppet, Hiruko can still be freely controlled. Hiruko looks a lot like a normal human when wearing the Akatsuki outfit, his eyes even seeming realistic. Hiruko’s most notable feature is his extremely long iron tail, that Sasori, from inside the puppet, can extend, questionably allowing it to reach an opponent from almost all ranges. The tail extends from the mouth of what seems to be a mask on Hiruko’s back. Hiruko rarely moves in battle, however, during the brief fight with Kankurou, it has been shown that he has decent speed, though it is short-lived, having had sidestepped his attack easily. Hiruko cannot be broken by normal weapons. When he had been impaled by approximately eight of Crow’s knives, they failed to make even a scratch on him. When outside of the Akatsuki uniform, when he seems to take a more spider-like appearance, Hiruko’s speed is greatly increased, allowing him to scurry across the battlefield. Hiruko can only be destroyed by an attack of at least A rank, or by someone with strength such as Sakura’s, Tsunade’s, or Kakuzu’s. Hiruko’s left arm is shaped like a torpedo, and can be shot out towards the opponent, exploding and releasing needles in all directions when it does so.
Note: Only Usable by a Sasori character

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Post your bio and make your move/s

Note : i hate arguing, please argue via VM's

 

[Baldy]

If it's for noobs, I doubt you'd be wanting any random noob here
I hope I can prove a challenge xD

Ikkaku M. Kaguya bio in sig. You can go first, I haven't had much experience yet fighting a puppet user so it'll be fun.

 

[Bruce Banner]

If it's for noobs, I doubt you'd be wanting any random noob here
I hope I can prove a challenge xD

Ikkaku M. Kaguya bio in sig. You can go first, I haven't had much experience yet fighting a puppet user so it'll be fun.

Make your move, this is my second time to fight with Kaguya's after badly defeating by Goro Kaguya so i hope i can learn more about those bone xd

 

[Baldy]

Make your move, this is my second time to fight with Kaguya's after badly defeating by Goro Kaguya so i hope i can learn more about those bone xd

I tend to write very long replies, so knowing that you don't really like them, I'll keep them to a minimal. After all, I'm in a lazy mood so I won't bother writing much anyways xD First time for me writing little for my move.
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An old hunchback, horribly weird, come out of hiding, whoever you are inside. Don't hide inside a marionette, that doesn't look anything like a human with that tail!

- Quickly, Ikkaku sends his chakra throughout the ground and causes a small tremor that throws you off balance

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.

- Then, I perform the Bird hand seal and through overlapping hands, release a thin gust of wind from my mouth. Veering it downwards, I make it so it grazes the ground, taking a swirling curved path vertically towards you, a very minor parabola curve. The currents within the air are rapidly rotating, though it continues towards you in a linear direction, as the thin gust of wind. Having come into contact with the ground, the gust would pick up lots of sand particles and send them towards you, combined with dust and sand, which buffets into your face, the potency and power of my attack not only increases, but obscures your vision of me.

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the Bird hand seal the user creates a stream of high velocity wind combined with scouring dust. The completed technique is directed through overlapping hands.

- Note that this technique comes from a slightly lower angle, targeting you from beneath. Also, the technique said is extremely fast, easily reaching you between moments when the tremor has shaken your balance.

With that said, I materialize a huge volume of water 8 meters above your head, descending with great force and the aid of gravity, crushing Hiruko to bits as the wind gust connects at roughly the same time. The motion of the wind combines with the water falling in a slightly spiralling manner, controlled by me, turning into a small water vortex that spins around you, crushing Hiruko and slicing it to bits. As it is destroyed, you have nowhere to run. Do remember that the effect desired is the water-wind combining at the base of your body, or roughly around the middle, turning it into a small vortex that would crush the puppet, not the crushing effect of the water alone. In fact, 8 meters is sufficient for enough force to put it under pressure, combined with the wind, it's more than enough.

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.

- As that is done, I start running in a wide arc towards the right, keeping my distance as I anticipate your actions.

Kept it as short as possible o.o