I'm back! And I return bearing a teaser! (Full of original material!)

[Shinobi Train]

I'm sorry! :T_T:
This was very admittedly rushed.

I had somewhere to be while I was writing so I just ended it and posted. My sentences are always funky. I really need to start doing more revisions.

But yaaay! Especially since I was hitting the wall trying to help you out. You're the best person to write your stuff. I was drawing blank.

(And on a more minor note...there's another one I just put up. Tell me how much the shat stinks if you have the time.)

No rushing, not allowed. Yes, you need to work on editing and stuff...of course, the smell would be unbearable if you did, so maybe I shouldn't be pushing you to do that. xd

Yeah, I know I'm the best person to write my stuff...I was just so stuck I was desperate and wanted some help.

Alright, I'll check it out in a bit...but I shouldn't even be on NB right now...too much work to do. Currently your chapters are the only ones I'm reading anyway. ^_^

 

[Germanicus]

No rushing, not allowed. Yes, you need to work on editing and stuff...of course, the smell would be unbearable if you did, so maybe I shouldn't be pushing you to do that. xd

Yeah, I know I'm the best person to write my stuff...I was just so stuck I was desperate and wanted some help.

Alright, I'll check it out in a bit...but I shouldn't even be on NB right now...too much work to do. Currently your chapters are the only ones I'm reading anyway. ^_^

Don't let the base keep you from your responsibilities! It's bad!

But yaaaay, thank you Train. My shit wouldn't stink nearly so bad if not for your crits.

 

[King Cobra]

Don't let the base keep you from your responsibilities! It's bad!

But yaaaay, thank you Train. My shit wouldn't stink nearly so bad if not for your crits.

No ones shit would be bearable if it wasn't for S. Train