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Couple of things, you post the techniques in order of use.
Two more detail on how you cast me in the genjutsu, detail is the key for genjutsu, as well when using taijutsu, and kenjutsu.

So try it again, but using detail when explaining the genjutsu side of things. ^^
IDK if i get this right but . . . i'll try something :(



Omoi gets ready and tries to attack his Sensei again this time differently, he runs towards the Sensei's clone and punchs him in his stomach and with his left leg he kicks him in the chin knockong him down in the ground and in the moment that he tries to get up, Omoi gets his sword and waves it back and forth confusing and sending chakra at the opponent's brain casting him a Genjutsu where he believes that he's seeing several arms wavering, some of them towards him confusing and stuning him and leaving him open and Omoi gets this opportunity and grabs the sword and runs towads the opponent stabbing his chest and making him disperse.

(Konoha-Ryū: Yanagi) - Leaf Ninja Art: Willow
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 35
Description: The user waves their sword back and forth, which when seen by the target locks them in a genjutsu which causes them to hallucinate multiple waving arms. The movement resembles that of a willow tree blowing in the wind. With the enemy off guard, the user is free to cut them down.



Is this good enough O_O
 
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I've made a minor mistake, you don't send chakra into the brain; you send chakra everywhere around the target, thus starting the genjutsu. I just wanted to make that clear. So, sorry about that. Moving onto the next technique.

(Genjutsu: Ingemame Ketsugō Sakkaku) - Illusion Technique String Bean Binding Illusion
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: Similar to Illusion Technique: Tree Binding Death, where the user first disappears, while the target sees several bean vines growing from the ground. These vines bind the target body, lifting them into the air. Then a bean pod rises from the ground to reveal the user, ready to strike. In reality, the opponent is immobilized by the illusion, allowing the user to strike.

Similar to the last technique you learnt, but with small changes, as you just disappear I'd think like the latter. That starts the genjutsu, the target will see bean vines grow from the ground, and grabbing the target lifting them up into the air, then a bean pod emerges from the ground showing the caster, about to start the target. Seems what rather again obvious imo. I wouldn't use it, but if you were in a area with plants that big you could maybe pull it off.
 

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I've made a minor mistake, you don't send chakra into the brain; you send chakra everywhere around the target, thus starting the genjutsu. I just wanted to make that clear. So, sorry about that. Moving onto the next technique.

(Genjutsu: Ingemame Ketsugō Sakkaku) - Illusion Technique String Bean Binding Illusion
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: Similar to Illusion Technique: Tree Binding Death, where the user first disappears, while the target sees several bean vines growing from the ground. These vines bind the target body, lifting them into the air. Then a bean pod rises from the ground to reveal the user, ready to strike. In reality, the opponent is immobilized by the illusion, allowing the user to strike.

Similar to the last technique you learnt, but with small changes, as you just disappear I'd think like the latter. That starts the genjutsu, the target will see bean vines grow from the ground, and grabbing the target lifting them up into the air, then a bean pod emerges from the ground showing the caster, about to start the target. Seems what rather again obvious imo. I wouldn't use it, but if you were in a area with plants that big you could maybe pull it off.


One/three advantages:
  • 1. It has low chakra cost
  • 2. It can "bind" the opponent leaving him open
  • 3. Doesn't requires any hand seal to use
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. The jutsu is very obvious since the beans suddenly start to grow from the ground
  • 2. If the user in not in a area with plants then it would have been more that easy to notice that this is a Genjutsu
  • 3. It's a useless jutsu and doesn't deals any damage
How you would use it in battle: Well as you suggested i wouldn't have used this in battle without a big plant area but if i needed to use the jutsu then i would have used this to immobilize the opponent leaving them open.

How you would counter it: As you said it's a very obvious jutsu since the beans suddenly appear and the user emerges from a bean pod and i would have noticed that this is a Genjutsu since there was no plant and the opponent didn't wave any hand seal to emerge from the ground also with my other bio i would have used Byakugan to see my chakra flow and i would have noticed that this is a Genjutsu then i would have used Genjutsu: Kai or take a Kunai from my pouch to cut my hand a little enough that blood starts coming from my hand and then i would have been released from the Genjutsu.

How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): Omoi gets ready and starts gathering his chakra and after gathering a considerable amout of it he focuses it at his opponent and caughts him in a Genjutsu where he believes that he's grabbed by some bean vines and that Omoi emerges from a bean pod, in reality the opponent is immobilized from the Genjutsu and Omoi uses this opportunity to stab him with a Kunai in his chest making him disperse (it was Sensei's clone).
 

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One/three advantages:
1. It has low chakra cost
3. Doesn't requires any hand seal to use


One/three disadvantages:
3. It's a useless jutsu and doesn't deals any damage

Nope, not accepting these, try again.
 

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One/three advantages:
1. It has low chakra cost
3. Doesn't requires any hand seal to use


One/three disadvantages:
3. It's a useless jutsu and doesn't deals any damage

Nope, not accepting these, try again.

Sorry :'|



Advantages

1. The opponent is binded and is restricted to move from the vines leaving them open for the user to attack him.

2. This jutsu can be used as a combo with a fast jutsu since it doesn't require any hand seal and the user can perform a fast jutsu, this is a fine example because it sends a fast spiralling ball of wind at the opponent.

(Fūton: Rasen Kazedan) - Wind Release: Spiralling Wind Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: This technique allows the user to breathe wind-infused chakra into the palm of their hand, shaping it into a small, whirlwind-like ball. Then the user will shoot it at their opponent. This technique seems to be very fast and powerful, as it is capable of smashing through thick rock. They can be launched in rapid succession.



3. The jutsu goes up to mid-range even though the range of the jutsu is limited the user can take this opportunity to run away from the opponent, for example: the opponent is trying to perform a sequence of hand seals he doesn't have enough time to perform all the hand seals so i cast him the Genjutsu stunning him, then i take this opportunity and run in long-range and i have time to perform some hand seals before he is released from the Genjutsu/if he.



Disadvantages

1. As i said this jutsu is very obvious because the beans suddenly approach before me and immobilize me, i didn't see the opponent wave any hand seal nor slamming the ground to summon any bean or something so i realize that this is a Genjutsu and i release from it.

2. As i said again this jutsu doesn't deals any damage and can't hurt the opponent and cause him mentally damage because the user doesn't strikes the opponent he just binds them and suddenly approach from a bean pod :|.

3. The opponent can easily break out from him, more experienced RPers can think 100+ ways to get released from this, i know how to be released from it too: just take a kunai and cut my finger a little[not deeply] and i see myself in the real world :heh:
 

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Good.

(Genjutsu: Oshitsubusu Hebi Kubire) - Illusion Technique: Crushing Snake Constriction

Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user puts the opponent into a genjutsu which has snakes appear beneath the opponent to constrict them and with the users command, they crush the opponent. In reality, the opponent is immobilized and takes damage due to the stress on his mind.

With this one all you need to do is look at your target or clap your hands, either one. Once you do one of those two, your target will be placed in the gen, he will see snakes appear from the ground, and with your command the snakes start to crush and hold back the target from attacking you, and crushing them also. The target will take metal damage. This is one of the more used techniques, since it is handy and less obvious.
 

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Good.

(Genjutsu: Oshitsubusu Hebi Kubire) - Illusion Technique: Crushing Snake Constriction

Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user puts the opponent into a genjutsu which has snakes appear beneath the opponent to constrict them and with the users command, they crush the opponent. In reality, the opponent is immobilized and takes damage due to the stress on his mind.

With this one all you need to do is look at your target or clap your hands, either one. Once you do one of those two, your target will be placed in the gen, he will see snakes appear from the ground, and with your command the snakes start to crush and hold back the target from attacking you, and crushing them also. The target will take metal damage. This is one of the more used techniques, since it is handy and less obvious.

Sorry for the late reply :(



One/three advantages:
  • 1. No hand seal is required to perform the jutsu and this is a big advantage
  • 2. It will leave mental damage to the opponent.
  • 3. The opponent is immobilized and unable to move.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. Requiring no hand seal can be a disadvantage too since the opponent will see that i didn't made any hand seal and realize that this is a Genjutsu.
  • 2. The Snakes suddenly appear behing the opponent so he'll notice that this is a Genjutsu.
  • 3. It can reach only up to mid-range, its range is limited.
How you would use it in battle: I Would have used it to immbilize the opponent and then attack the opponent, he would have been open, and if he don't notice the Genjutsu soon i'll finish him off.

How you would counter it: I would have noticed that this isn't a Summoning jutsu since he didn't use the process of the summoning so i would have Kai-ed.

How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): Omoi gets ready and hears the instructions, . . . [after 2 mins] after doing that he starts gathers chakra and inserts it at his opponent capturing him in a Genjutsu where he gets captured by the Snakes and is unable to move, in reality he is immobilized and Omoi takes this opportunity and takes 2 kunais that stab through the opponent's heart.


Question: Can i feel the Snakes when they swirl around my body ???
 

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Yes.

How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): Omoi gets ready and hears the instructions, . . . [after 2 mins] after doing that he starts gathers chakra and inserts it at his opponent capturing him in a Genjutsu where he gets captured by the Snakes and is unable to move, in reality he is immobilized and Omoi takes this opportunity and takes 2 kunais that stab through the opponent's heart.

With this, please explain to me when the snakes come from, how they stop your targets movement etc?
 

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Yes.

How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): Omoi gets ready and hears the instructions, . . . [after 2 mins] after doing that he starts gathers chakra and inserts it at his opponent capturing him in a Genjutsu where he gets captured by the Snakes and is unable to move, in reality he is immobilized and Omoi takes this opportunity and takes 2 kunais that stab through the opponent's heart.

With this, please explain to me when the snakes come from, how they stop your targets movement etc?

They appear beneath him and crush and restrict him from his back making him unable to move :)
 

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Good.

Last B-rank till A-ranks!

(Genjutsu: Hanaoka) - Illusion Technique: Flower Hill
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons up illusionary purple flowers from the ground in front of them, damaging enemies with a chance to paralyze them.
Note: Paralysis lasts one turn.

This technique leaves people a bit unsure, I think you perform a single hand seal which then places the person in the genjutsu, they will see some purple flowers grow from the ground in front of them, somehow damaging them, with a chance of paralysing them. If they do get paralysed it last for one turn.
Range is meh, seems obvious unless you're in a forest or whatnot.
 

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Good.

Last B-rank till A-ranks!

(Genjutsu: Hanaoka) - Illusion Technique: Flower Hill
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons up illusionary purple flowers from the ground in front of them, damaging enemies with a chance to paralyze them.
Note: Paralysis lasts one turn.

This technique leaves people a bit unsure, I think you perform a single hand seal which then places the person in the genjutsu, they will see some purple flowers grow from the ground in front of them, somehow damaging them, with a chance of paralysing them. If they do get paralysed it last for one turn.
Range is meh, seems obvious unless you're in a forest or whatnot.

One/three advantages:
  • 1. It can paralyze the opponent for 1 turn
  • 2. Only 1 hand seal is required to perform this jutsu, making it a very fast Genjutsu
  • 3. N/A
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. If the user is not in a forest when performing the jutsu it'll be very obvious that he's caught in a Genjutsu
  • 2. Shitty range :| only short-range making it a very restricted jutsu
  • 3. No damage is dealed at the opponent.
How you would use it in battle: Well the opponent would have realized that this is a Genjutsu, and since it's a fast one he'll be pretty confused so i would have used a very fast jutsu to beat the crap out of him.

How you would counter it: It would have been very obvious, especially in a non-forest terrain so Kai or a full body surge like Earth Armour would have done the job.

How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): Omoi starts by performing the required hand seal and channeling chakra at the opponent catching him in a Genjutsu where he sees purple flowers emerge from the ground and start attacking him until he's paralyzed, in reality Omoi takes this opportunity to launch a barrage of kunais and shurikens at the opponent cutting and stabbing every part of his body until he's dead.
 

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2. Shitty range only short-range making it a very restricted jutsu
3. No damage is dealed at the opponent.

Stop giving me so obvious ones; I want you to give me ones that make you think.
 

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2. Shitty range only short-range making it a very restricted jutsu
3. No damage is dealed at the opponent.

Stop giving me so obvious ones; I want you to give me ones that make you think.
Sorry Lol :(

2. The opponent is paralysed only for 1 turn and the range is very restriced, this jutsu is one of the most obvious ones too :|.

3. There are not many jutsus that make flowers grow suddenly from the ground so the opponent can notice it and release himself from it :).
 

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Better.

Moving onto A-ranks now!

(Magen: Chō Shinka) - Demonic Illusion: Butterfly Evolution
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user makes one handseal, placing the opponent in a genjutsu. The user then tosses a large number of explosive tags at the opponent. To the opponent, it looks as if they are countless butterflies. The opponent then believes they are sinking into the ground, in reality making them immobilized; this allows the user to place one final exploding tag on their forehead before detonating all the tags simultaneously.

This one is nice. Perform the one seal, then with that seal placing my clone in your genjutsu, you will throw a good amount of explosive tags at my clone, he will see in the illusion an undefined amount of butterflies flying towards him, my clone will think the butterflies are sinking into the ground [wot] but outside the genjutsu, he is getting stunned, this allows you to walk up to him and place a single exploding tag on his forward. Once you have done that walk away from him, and then detonate them all at once.
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1. Requires only 1 hand seal making it a very fast jutsu
  • 2. It has a pretty good range for a Genjutsu
  • 3. It constricts the opponent but at the same time it deals damage to him
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. He will notice that something is going wrong since the butterflies suddenly appear before him and also if he was a Sensory or a Doujutsu user he could notice that his chakra flow is disturbed by someone that he would have Kai-ed
  • 2. Also the sinking to the ground part is quite obvious, i mean who would think that the clone is suddenly sinking
  • 3. If the user is in mid-way of detonating and placing the tags on the opponent he could react if he's released and attack him catching him in a surprise.
How you would use it in battle: Well i would have used it as a finisher or maybe as a distraction to constrict him then attack him with all i've got.

How you would counter it: As i said i would have noticed that something is wrong so i would have used Genjutsu: Kai or any other body surge as Hardening jutsu to counter it.

How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): I begin by making the needed hand seal and then channeling my chakra at the opponent's pathway to disturb his chakra flow and catch him in a Genjutsu where he believes that a big number of butterflies is going at him but they suddenly gets sucked in the ground, that leaves me enough time to attack him with a explosive tag that after i detonate it, a explosion occurs and i see my opponent in the ground dead.
 

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Two more techniques till we're done. ^_^

(Nehan Shōja no Jutsu) - Temple of Nirvana Technique
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes one handseal, placing all the targets in the area under an illusion where feathers appear to fall from the sky. This slowly puts the opponents to sleep after one turn.

This one has poor range, but yeah; perform the single handseal, with that handseal traps everyone but yourself in the genjutsu, of course within the said range, from there the target will see feathers falling from the sky placing said targets in a deep sleep, but only when one turn passes. Not the most used technique here, nor one of the most useful ones.
 

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Two more techniques till we're done. ^_^

(Nehan Shōja no Jutsu) - Temple of Nirvana Technique
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes one handseal, placing all the targets in the area under an illusion where feathers appear to fall from the sky. This slowly puts the opponents to sleep after one turn.

This one has poor range, but yeah; perform the single handseal, with that handseal traps everyone but yourself in the genjutsu, of course within the said range, from there the target will see feathers falling from the sky placing said targets in a deep sleep, but only when one turn passes. Not the most used technique here, nor one of the most useful ones.


One/three advantages:
  • 1. Requires only 1 hand seal making it a very fast jutsu.
  • 2. The user will be put to sleep if the jutsu suceeds
  • 3. It can trap a large number of opponents as seen being used by Kabuto in Chuunin Exams Final Battle
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. It can reach only up to short-range meaning that this is a very limited jutsu in range.
  • 2. The jutsu takes 1 turn to affect the opponent.
  • 3. No damage is dealed to the opponent :|.
How you would use it in battle: I wouldn't have used it but if i did then i would have used to make the opponent sleep then attack with anything i can u__u.

How you would counter it: I would have used Genjutsu: Kai as seen by Sakura and Shikamaru using it to Kai Naruto and other Konoha-nins, also it's pretty obvious since the feathers can't just fall from the sky :|.

How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): I beging by performing the needed hand seal of and then after doing the hand seal, a barrage of white feathers will rain from the sky, and making the opponent fall asleep also leaving him vulnerable to any jutsu or attack, to take the advantage i donate a barrage of explosive notes at the opponent's body, and then making a crossed hand seal i make a shadow clone go near the opponent and then using Kai on him i release him only for him to see himself in Hell by the detonated explosive tags and taking the clone within the explosion too.
 

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No damage is dealed to the opponent
It can reach only up to short-range meaning that this is a very limited jutsu in range.

We've gotten up to that point, where I think you are creative enough to think of better ones then these.
 
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