Ijatu Yamaki

[maxhawk91]

BASIC INFORMATION
Name: Ijatu Yamaki
Nickname: Dimension Sage
Gender:Male
Age:23
Clan:Yamaki

Looks: Ijatu has blonde hair that has red triangular curves.He has a v-neck shirt. Ijatu wears white boots with white bandages.
PERSONALITY:
A very happy and comical person that can get serious in a matter of seconds.
RANK//CHAKRA INFO:
Ninja Rank:Anbu
Specialty: Space/Time
Elements:Lightning(Raiton)
Wind(Futon)
Your Ninjutsu:None
BACKGROUND
History:Ijatu was born in the Land of Wind and traveled to Konoha.

 

[Aura]

Could do with alittle, spicy flavour

 

[-Logic-]

It's not enough, it also needs pictures.

 

[Aura]

Needs pictures, as stated above,
Needs colour for an awesome effect
Needs more History, that doesn't look like enough
And so on, nice try though

 

[maxhawk91]

GUYS!>.< I ran out of space plus everything I am doing is on meh PSP!

 

[-Albel-]

You need 50 posts to make a bio and you should really read all the rules and guidline for the rp.

 

[maxhawk91]

Anyway Ijatu is from a comic I made.

 

[maxhawk91]

tjpgj

 

[maxhawk91]

well i will make 50 posts TODAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[maxhawk91]

okay pace out

 

[-Albel-]

Dude, do not multi post it's against the rules and you could get an infraction.

 

[maxhawk91]

great later

 

[Shinobi Train]

Needs pictures, as stated above,
Needs colour for an awesome effect
Needs more History, that doesn't look like enough
And so on, nice try though

I will agree that it needs some more history (which I can help with BTW, if that's allowed), but color and pictures are so passé in my opinion. If I really try my best, I can paint a better pic with words that burrows into the imagination more than any artist could ever do. Plus I don't think they're necessary, not stated so in the rules from what I can tell.

Color, well, I guess that's more personal taste, but as a writer I've never had a use for it...

Just do what you want, maxhawk, don't let them intimidate you. It has no bearing on the actual battles that take place...speaking of which, we should spar sometime in the future when our bios are approved.