If you were Kishi

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Part One Changes

- Leaving Part one the way it was, except orochimaru vs Hiruzen. I would have had Hiruzen use more hidden leaf jutsu to confirm hype earlier.
- History on uzumaki clan

War Changes

- Had Jiraiya resurrected in final war to help Minato in naruto fight obito.
- Had hiruzen ressurected in his prime, and given enma more screen time.
- Had Edo Jiraiya, Tsunade, Orochimaru reunite as trio to help attack Juubi and display more feats, while hokages contained it.
- Given hiruzen more feats while attacking miniture buhdah.
- Not nerfed Kaguya
- Allowing Karin to show more uzumaki feats, such as the seals that were so feared throughout the land.
 

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Part One Changes

- Leaving Part one the way it was, except orochimaru vs Hiruzen. I would have had Hiruzen use more hidden leaf jutsu to confirm hype earlier.
- History on uzumaki clan

War Changes

- Had Jiraiya resurrected in final war to help Minato in naruto fight obito.
- Had hiruzen ressurected in his prime, and given enma more screen time.
- Had Edo Jiraiya, Tsunade, Orochimaru reunite as trio to help attack Juubi and display more feats, while hokages contained it.
- Given hiruzen more feats while attacking miniture buhdah.
- Not nerfed Kaguya
- Allowing Karin to show more uzumaki feats, such as the seals that were so feared throughout the land.
Prime Hiruzen will be too OP though... I mean that old guy brought an extinction to a clan or two (Uzumaki and Uchiha) and he didnt even get to dirty his hands.
 

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i see -_________-

give minato a flashback of him training with the toads to foreshadow his sm, and toad sage gives him a prophecy like jman and naruto got about his students to foresgadow tobito. make obito the legit dark child of prophecy to better paralel naruto instead of the naruto sasuke prophecy transmigrant crap. no ootsusuki since their plothole rushed story sucked. keep juubi as mad shinju like it was supposed to be. it can still manipulate people :]
well like i said, which ones will you revise?
i couldn't leave out the ootsutsuki since thats where the Sage backstory is from so theres a lot of his story and how the Shinobi world came to be. I couldnt just leave that alone. So you wouldn't add more into it and just drop it? Also I'd like to know how you would wrap up the series. If I were to leave it with just Juubito, Id just have him sealed and thrown into space.
 

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a chapter or two more to wrap up the war
timeskip ending to show Naruto becoming Hokage - no next gen, Gaiden, etc
 

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I'd revise some of the fights and make certain characters who were plot no jutsued last longer and do more damage. I would also extend the Kaguya fight and show her "personality". I would also completely change obito who started everything because of a crush.

Probably more but I don't remember now
 

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All that you stated is the reason why this manga/anime shouldn't be finished an we shouldn't know the outcome yet. With what you talked about this manga/anime should be another 3 400 chapter atleast. I think he should rest up for a few years because he's still young and come back with a Naruto kai like deal were he ads more content to what's already there.

If done right it could be a good thing that could fill in the blanks on characters that got left out in the original. Not filler but based off the original story.

I think it could work...I mean people watch DBZ kai and that has no extra content it's just speed up with less talk an more battle...they could do the same with Naruto just with the extra content.
 

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If I was kishimoto I would of made narusaku cannon after the war.....

HERS HOW: I would of never made SASUKE leave the village on a journey after the war, I would of had sakura start dating SASUKE and going on dates to ichiraku, on there dates I would of had SASUKE quiet and boring as usual and sakura tryin to spark conversations.....I would of had sakura get frustrated with his blank attitude......and one night go on a friend date with Naruto were she relizes he's way more entertaining and easier to talk to....then I would of had them go on a mission similar to the last were sakura goes in a genjustu like Naruto and sees everything he's done for her/ his feelings......then narusaku would be cannon

The reason I would do this is due to kushina wanting Naruto with a girl simple to her....and Minato entrusting Naruto to sakura......plus NARUTOS feelings the entire manga......IF HE HAD DONE IT THIS WAY NO ONE WOULD BE UPSET OVER THAT FORCED PAIRING THAT HAS LITTLE DEVELOPMENT

KISHI would of ended the story smother and with NARUTOS ORIGIONAL wants and dreams met.....but this is just me..
 

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Also I would of had jirayia resurrected during the war.......

And I would have him KISS tsunade and tell her how he feels since he never got to.....

Plus help out Naruto and the army...
 

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I have many versions of what I would change.

Most of them are too different to write. The sooner in the story you change something, more the story changes. But I will write one that I was thinking about recently.

I would make fight against Obito even longer and have Naruto and others defeat him differently. After that, Madara is revived. He does well like he did in Manga but instead of things happening the way they did, everyone faces Madara and defeat him. Or Tobirama defeats him with his attack.

Or if Madara becomes Jinchuriki, Tobirama is revealed to be the creator of 8 gates. He uses them and defeats Madara. It was hinted that maybe Tobirama created gates. At that time it was one possibility. It would make more sense that Hokage in 8 gates could fight Juubi Jinchuriki than Guy in 8 gates, in my opinion.

After that only Sasuke is left and he uses all the powers of Bijuu. Minato gives Naruto the other half of Kurama's chakra. Naruto meets Hagoromo, who would be different. Hagoromo gives him the Chakra of Bijuu he did not have. After that Naruto and Sasuke fight and Naruto wins. He becomes Hokage.

I admit, the fact that I am a fan of Naruto and Tobirama makes the story in their favor.
 
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