If Kishi told you to take over the manga what would you do?

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Well the title says it all if Kishi tells you to take over the manga from him
Also you has the same idea of writing the manga as him
what would your first answer be

Mine will be yes because it's kinda fun to see people having fun reading one of my manga's and if they really like it I would be continue it till the story has comes to it ends or it would be just my time to stop it
 

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Calvin would solo every strong character and then enslave the NV.
 

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Kill off Naruto would be my number 1 priority
 

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Orochimaru would be gaining one of three Uchiha bodies.
 

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See my latest thread 'Everything you know is fake'

Make some people mad as hell.
 

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genma in all the panels
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Do more with the female characters.
Sakura and Hinata's lives wouldn't revolve around men.

Inb4 KILL SAKURA LOL
 
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Kill off Hinata and Sakura like they have never existed; make it seem like Neji never died and give him some panel time alone with Lee; stop the panel hogging of Naruto-Sasuke-Minato-Obito in the latest chapters.
 

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Madara and Obito are defeated then we see a UFO come down and out walks Frieza.

Frieza says " ahh yes this planet will be perfect practice before I head to destroy namek. "
 

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In short I would make the company bigger maybe bring in some new people/artist/writers for different arcs maybe? I would definitely show Naruto as newbie Hokage but skip forward that people can see an older experienced Naruto; show some flashbacks just to give a feel how it was for that skipped time period and progress from there ??????
 

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bring back the much deserved, the honorable, the most worthy, Setsuna Uchiha

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Involve the alliance in the war.


Re-write to where Neji uses an Arial rotation like the DAMN GENIUS HE WAS.


Following that, re-write Madara giving Nagato his eyes (ruined Nagato)

And then have a collaborated effort to defeat Obito.

End with Sasuke vs Naruto and a epilogue to see what happened




If I had to go with no changes.

1. Involve the alliance.

2. Obito uses a large blast to kill Tenten and other shinobi who have kept into the air.

3. Gai goes 8 gates to buy time. "I will not allow another one of my precious students to die. GATE OF DEATH OPEN!"

3. Despite buying time...Obito is unaffected. Some combination of Hiashi, Kiba, and Shino dying.

4. The above advances Hinata's eyes

5.Have Hashirama, Tobirama, Hiruzen, and Minato fight Madara to show the past is in the past...it also shows the power of combining Madara with Mokuton, EMS sharingan, and the Rinnegan. Their actions counter Madara's trump card.

6. The Go-Go-Kage Rangers arrive to help fight Obito

7. Hinata, Shikamaru, and Lee manage to co-ordinate to defend Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura respectively.

8. Hinata uses some form of her Lion fist to take away Obito's ability to tank everything. He still has his speed and his chakra control.

9. Following that, Hinata is KO'd from the fight (that way Sakura takes over for her Heroine roll).

10.Shikamaru developed a winning strategy....one that doesn't suck.

11. Using an initial Ino-Shika-Cho for temporary disruptions....the strategy uses the Gokage Rangers, Lee's 7th gate, Naruto, and Sasuke to leave him completely open for a Sakura punch.

12. Despite his extremely injured condition, Obito survives.

13. Orochimaru is a **** to Uchiha. He arrives to body snatch Obito. Becoming the final villain we deserve, but not the one we've had. Basically one of pure unadulterated evil.

14. By this time the Hokage manage to defeat/seal Madara.

15. Orochimaru releases Edo Tensei causing the Hokage to begin disappearing.

14. Tobirama makes a final sacrifice...using some forbidden Edo Tensei technique to force the other Hokage to make the seals needed to break the contract. He sadly doesn't have time for himself.

15. Orochimaru begins his assault, but Hashirama and Hiruzen press him back.

16. Minato takes this time to transfer his Kurama chakra.

17. Finishing the transfer, he pushes Naruto out of the way and he gets human pathed by Orochimaru.

18. Through subsequent events, Hashirama leaves protecting Sakura. Hiruzen leaves protecting Sasuke.

19. Eventually, the alliance has been mostly defeated except for the Gokage Rangers, and Team 7.

20. With some final blast dealeo...Sakura and Tsunade are out as they use their medical prowess to keel the alliance from vaporization. Tsunade dies, but Sakura lives because Tsunade uses some of her chakra to also protect her student.

21. Naruto and Sasuke are all that's left...by combining their teamwork or through the Hyuga clan before they are all defeated. They get the Rikkudo staff and sword. Naruto: staff....Sasuke: sword.

22. Like the Sage had wanted for his son's...elder and younger work together to best Orochimaru.

24. Naruto manages to free the tailed beasts which aggravates Sasuke.

25. Our alliance losing many members is victorious.

26. We return to peaceful times...Kakashi (managed to live...I guess saved by Minato from the other dimension...say Kakashi carried the FTG kunai st all times) is currently Hokage. We have the closing of the K11 members left alive (Hinata, Lee, Choji, Ino, Shikamaru).

27. As a battle for Hokage and for the destruction of the tailed beasts....Naruto vs Sasuke at the Valley of the End.

28. They basically wreck the area forming a larger valley of the end and waterfall.

29. Sakura who followed them, manages to heal them both or only one of them (your preference)

30. Epilogue. We see who Sakura could save and we find our the final pairings and we find out about how they go on.

Whether Naruto is Hokage or a traveler, Sasuke a wanderer or Hokage. Sakura medical chief or Hokage....
 

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1.in next chapter Minato saves Naruto and Sasuke and Kakashi's return
2.Kakashi wil explain everything to Minato some screen time for Madara vs Hashirama ,Hashirama foughts on equal grounds with Madara and the fight wil be interupted by Minato while Kakashi tryng to TNJ Obito
3.Minato vs Madara and other Kages and team 7 vs Obito
4.Gokage wil show up,
5.Oro's sage mode
6.Sasuke wil get PS along with Yata as wel as Totsuka
7.Minato defeats Madara high dif,
8.Obito fodderizes everyone and kills Sakura in front of Naruto and Sasuke
9.Sasuke attacks Obito while Naruto holding Sakura ,Obito fodderizes Sasuke's PS and breaks both Yata as wel as Totsuka
10.Obito charges at Naruto while he is cryng for Sakura,Hinata wil try to save Naruto from Obito's attack by sacrificing her own life but someone appears infront of Hinata and solo's Obito's attack he is non other than leafs blue beast as wel as the worlds strongest Taijutsu user rock Lee......
11.Lee vs Obito(Lee: I wont forgive anyone who fodderizes Sakura chan) Obito beats Lee and almost kill's Sasuke and then Naruto gets his next powerup and soloes Obito and TNJ's him after defeatng him then Obito user RT to revive the ppl died during the war ........All bijju's are under the control of Naruto and he wil become Hokage and all hokages admits that Naruto is the greatest Hokage ,Sasuke wil be the leader of leaf's Jounin....or commander general of shinobi ,Hinata wil be Naruto's wife and thire kid wil be named after Jiraya.............The END
 

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^man these guys are writing essays over here..

i would just kill off juubito and be done with it. he cant cater to both the lore-hungry narutobase members AND the casual anime viewers at the same time. the power scaling is getting crazier by the week. its time for the series to start coming to a close...
 

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Involve the alliance in the war.


Re-write to where Neji uses an Arial rotation like the DAMN GENIUS HE WAS.


Following that, re-write Madara giving Nagato his eyes (ruined Nagato)

And then have a collaborated effort to defeat Obito.

End with Sasuke vs Naruto and a epilogue to see what happened




If I had to go with no changes.

1. Involve the alliance.

2. Obito uses a large blast to kill Tenten and other shinobi who have kept into the air.

3. Gai goes 8 gates to buy time. "I will not allow another one of my precious students to die. GATE OF DEATH OPEN!"

3. Despite buying time...Obito is unaffected. Some combination of Hiashi, Kiba, and Shino dying.

4. The above advances Hinata's eyes

5.Have Hashirama, Tobirama, Hiruzen, and Minato fight Madara to show the past is in the past...it also shows the power of combining Madara with Mokuton, EMS sharingan, and the Rinnegan. Their actions counter Madara's trump card.

6. The Go-Go-Kage Rangers arrive to help fight Obito

7. Hinata, Shikamaru, and Lee manage to co-ordinate to defend Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura respectively.

8. Hinata uses some form of her Lion fist to take away Obito's ability to tank everything. He still has his speed and his chakra control.

9. Following that, Hinata is KO'd from the fight (that way Sakura takes over for her Heroine roll).

10.Shikamaru developed a winning strategy....one that doesn't suck.

11. Using an initial Ino-Shika-Cho for temporary disruptions....the strategy uses the Gokage Rangers, Lee's 7th gate, Naruto, and Sasuke to leave him completely open for a Sakura punch.

12. Despite his extremely injured condition, Obito survives.

13. Orochimaru is a **** to Uchiha. He arrives to body snatch Obito. Becoming the final villain we deserve, but not the one we've had. Basically one of pure unadulterated evil.

14. By this time the Hokage manage to defeat/seal Madara.

15. Orochimaru releases Edo Tensei causing the Hokage to begin disappearing.

14. Tobirama makes a final sacrifice...using some forbidden Edo Tensei technique to force the other Hokage to make the seals needed to break the contract. He sadly doesn't have time for himself.

15. Orochimaru begins his assault, but Hashirama and Hiruzen press him back.

16. Minato takes this time to transfer his Kurama chakra.

17. Finishing the transfer, he pushes Naruto out of the way and he gets human pathed by Orochimaru.

18. Through subsequent events, Hashirama leaves protecting Sakura. Hiruzen leaves protecting Sasuke.

19. Eventually, the alliance has been mostly defeated except for the Gokage Rangers, and Team 7.

20. With some final blast dealeo...Sakura and Tsunade are out as they use their medical prowess to keel the alliance from vaporization. Tsunade dies, but Sakura lives because Tsunade uses some of her chakra to also protect her student.

21. Naruto and Sasuke are all that's left...by combining their teamwork or through the Hyuga clan before they are all defeated. They get the Rikkudo staff and sword. Naruto: staff....Sasuke: sword.

22. Like the Sage had wanted for his son's...elder and younger work together to best Orochimaru.

24. Naruto manages to free the tailed beasts which aggravates Sasuke.

25. Our alliance losing many members is victorious.

26. We return to peaceful times...Kakashi (managed to live...I guess saved by Minato from the other dimension...say Kakashi carried the FTG kunai st all times) is currently Hokage. We have the closing of the K11 members left alive (Hinata, Lee, Choji, Ino, Shikamaru).

27. As a battle for Hokage and for the destruction of the tailed beasts....Naruto vs Sasuke at the Valley of the End.

28. They basically wreck the area forming a larger valley of the end and waterfall.

29. Sakura who followed them, manages to heal them both or only one of them (your preference)

30. Epilogue. We see who Sakura could save and we find our the final pairings and we find out about how they go on.

Whether Naruto is Hokage or a traveler, Sasuke a wanderer or Hokage. Sakura medical chief or Hokage....

actually i just read that. nice one.
 
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