If anyone's interested..

[uhmusddy]

I'm making a EP. It's RPG themed. Don't ask what that means but it's alternative hip hop. This is the intro track. Be brutally honest, at least you listened.

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[Pumpkin Ninja]

I felt like it was all over the place. I can't really understand what you're saying either.

 

[Jiraiyathesannin]

I think it went too far, but didn't go far enough. You know? Like, it was too loud while being too quiet?

i think it needed a faster tempo, but i also felt that you needed to slow it down a bit. Hope that helps, sorry if i'm being a bit harsh here