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Hey, guys. As the title suggests, I've got an idea for a story that I wonder if you people like. Here is the general plot:

Shortly following the invasion of Pain, Naruto is sent on a mission along with Kiba to retrieve a stalled shipment of wood that is critical in helping Konoha's rebuilding. Upon their return, they find that Konoha is once again being invaded, this time by Tobi and Kabuto. Unable to best Tobi in combat, Naruto wakes up to find everything destroyed. In a fit of rage, he goes on a rampage in his six-tailed form and wakes up yet again in a forest. He takes on Nagato's ideals of 'peace through pain', though as the story rages on, he loses sight of his original goals in his quest to defeat Tobi.

Here is where the story gets a little iffy. But hearing the general plot, would you guys be interested in reading more about it. Now, this isn't the final plot, and I'll probably make some more changes to it. Criticism and ideas are both accepted.

Thanks in advance. :)
 
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