[CJ] Ice for ice

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Alright then, let's start right away.

Hyouton: Akuma no yōna kōri no meikyū | Ice Release: Demonic Ice Labyrinth
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short/Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user takes out a pre-made scroll and channels chakra into it. After that he slams it on the ground and a labyrinth rises all around the battlefield. It's shaped as a circle and its walls are 3m tall and 0.5m thick with a ceiling of the same thickness and properties. It appears to be transparent but the walls can be distinguished after carefully looking at them. The labyrinth forms around the opponent, with him being in the epicenter (look at image for reference). This technique is similar to the Demonic Ice Mirrors. Barney, being a passionate ice user decided to take it to a new level and to give it a bit of his touch. When the labyrinth forms, its radius is equal to the distance between the user and the opponent. As the labyrinth forms in front of him he leaps into the walls and once in there, he can only move through them. On the other hand, the opponent can move only where there is no walls. The labyrinth, having the same properties as the ice mirrors allow him to move very quickly through the labyrinth, around the opponent from where he can freely attack. A huge drawback from this technique is that the user can only use ice jutsus while inside the walls of the labyrinth and while in there, only one per turn. The walls also serve as a resource for other ice techniques. Once formed on the battlefield, it stays, until completely demolished or until the user decides to collapse it with the Ice Release: Collapsing Ice Labyrinth technique.
Note: Only one jutsu can be used per turn while the user is merged with the labyrinth, due to the huge amount of chakra being used for creating the labyrinth
Note: The user can't use ice jutsus 2 complete turns after emerging/destroying the labyrinth
Note: This jutsu can be performed only once per battle
Note: Only McRazor can teach this

Ok, so take these scrolls. They're premade, with the picture of the labyrinth. All you have to do is channel chakra into it and slam it onto the ground. Immediately a giant labyrinth will rise from the ground and encase your opponent. It's hardly visible, but still not completely invisible. The height of the labyrinth is 3 meters with a ceiling on top of it, so that it prevents the opponent from simply jumping out. Once you create the labyrinth you can leap into its walls and move through the walls at incredible speed, while the opponent can move only where there are no walls. While you're in the walls you can, however, use only ice jutsus, and only one per turn. If you decide, you can escape out of the labyrinth and make it explode, leaving a massive crater behind, using this technique:

Hyouton: Kōri no meikyū o oritatamu | Ice Release: Collapsing Ice Labyrinth
Type: Attack
Rank: S rank
Range: Short/Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user, after re-emerging from the labyrinth created using the Ice Release: Demonic Ice Labyrinth technique, can make the ice particles in the Demonic Ice Labyrinth to shatter and create a huge explosion similar to how Haku destroys his Demonic Ice Mirrors. The explosion is caused by the shattering of the ice which causes friction in between the ice particles. This is where the users chakra comes into place. He simply uses it as a trigger.
Note: Usable only after the user leaves the labyrinth walls
Note: This jutsu can be performed only once per battle
Note: Only McRazor can teach this

You can use both techniques in the same turn as it's an ice technique and it's only 1, so it follows the restrictions of the labyrinth. Remember that you can use these only once per battle, so make sure you can kill your opponent with this, because it's designed to do so. Also make sure to get away from the explosion quickly so that you avoid being caught within it, yourself.
 

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Alright then, let's start right away.

Hyouton: Akuma no yōna kōri no meikyū | Ice Release: Demonic Ice Labyrinth
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short/Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user takes out a pre-made scroll and channels chakra into it. After that he slams it on the ground and a labyrinth rises all around the battlefield. It's shaped as a circle and its walls are 3m tall and 0.5m thick with a ceiling of the same thickness and properties. It appears to be transparent but the walls can be distinguished after carefully looking at them. The labyrinth forms around the opponent, with him being in the epicenter (look at image for reference). This technique is similar to the Demonic Ice Mirrors. Barney, being a passionate ice user decided to take it to a new level and to give it a bit of his touch. When the labyrinth forms, its radius is equal to the distance between the user and the opponent. As the labyrinth forms in front of him he leaps into the walls and once in there, he can only move through them. On the other hand, the opponent can move only where there is no walls. The labyrinth, having the same properties as the ice mirrors allow him to move very quickly through the labyrinth, around the opponent from where he can freely attack. A huge drawback from this technique is that the user can only use ice jutsus while inside the walls of the labyrinth and while in there, only one per turn. The walls also serve as a resource for other ice techniques. Once formed on the battlefield, it stays, until completely demolished or until the user decides to collapse it with the Ice Release: Collapsing Ice Labyrinth technique.
Note: Only one jutsu can be used per turn while the user is merged with the labyrinth, due to the huge amount of chakra being used for creating the labyrinth
Note: The user can't use ice jutsus 2 complete turns after emerging/destroying the labyrinth
Note: This jutsu can be performed only once per battle
Note: Only McRazor can teach this

Ok, so take these scrolls. They're premade, with the picture of the labyrinth. All you have to do is channel chakra into it and slam it onto the ground. Immediately a giant labyrinth will rise from the ground and encase your opponent. It's hardly visible, but still not completely invisible. The height of the labyrinth is 3 meters with a ceiling on top of it, so that it prevents the opponent from simply jumping out. Once you create the labyrinth you can leap into its walls and move through the walls at incredible speed, while the opponent can move only where there are no walls. While you're in the walls you can, however, use only ice jutsus, and only one per turn. If you decide, you can escape out of the labyrinth and make it explode, leaving a massive crater behind, using this technique:

Hyouton: Kōri no meikyū o oritatamu | Ice Release: Collapsing Ice Labyrinth
Type: Attack
Rank: S rank
Range: Short/Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user, after re-emerging from the labyrinth created using the Ice Release: Demonic Ice Labyrinth technique, can make the ice particles in the Demonic Ice Labyrinth to shatter and create a huge explosion similar to how Haku destroys his Demonic Ice Mirrors. The explosion is caused by the shattering of the ice which causes friction in between the ice particles. This is where the users chakra comes into place. He simply uses it as a trigger.
Note: Usable only after the user leaves the labyrinth walls
Note: This jutsu can be performed only once per battle
Note: Only McRazor can teach this

You can use both techniques in the same turn as it's an ice technique and it's only 1, so it follows the restrictions of the labyrinth. Remember that you can use these only once per battle, so make sure you can kill your opponent with this, because it's designed to do so. Also make sure to get away from the explosion quickly so that you avoid being caught within it, yourself.
Do I have to state where the walls are? Maybe draw a map in ms paint? Also anyway I could combine this with wind chill field?

Vegito takes out a scroll with a pre determined pattern already draw on it. He slams it onto the ground and summons a large labyrinth around himself and mc razors clone. Vegito enters the walls of the labyrinth and quickly moves from one side of the labyrinth to the other. He escapes at long range from the clone and blows up the labyrinth killing anyone inside.

Its very useful, since the mirrors can be escaped from or can't comepltly cover the enemy it works better then the mirrors. Since it also is long range the labyrinth doesn't have the same restriction as the mirrors either. The speed of the movement doesn't decrease like the mirrors either. I suppose someone could shatter the walls but to break the whole thing at once I can only see lighting pulse doing that. Only draw back would be

Note: Only one jutsu can be used per turn while the user is merged with the labyrinth, due to the huge amount of chakra being used for creating the labyrinth
Note: The user can't use ice jutsus 2 complete turns after emerging/destroying the labyrinth
Note: This jutsu can be performed only once per battle

Even then My own forbidden ranks are much more harmful in the long run from their draw backs.


Hyouton: Tou Ue)- Ice style: Freeze up
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: After many years living in the mist alongside the Hozuki the Yuki had seen their unique ability to become completely water. The Yuki sought out a way to replicate that power but with their own kekki genkai after many years they figured out a way to become ice itself. The user will focus their ice chakra throughout their body merging it into every cell and constantly will pump the chakra in and out the user will begin to take the appearance of ice and will continue this process until the user is solid ice. Unlike the Hozuki who are unable to maintain human shape, the user will maintain their shape due to ice being solid. While the user is like this they will also take the properties of ice being resistant to wind and water neutral to fire and weak to earth and lighting. The user will still be able to move around while they're ice and if shattered the user will still be alive unless they return to their human form but will still be able to perform ninjutsu if the jutsu used as long as they don't require handseals. If shattered (as in into pieces not just an arm or a leg) the user will not die unless they turn back to their human state but even if shattered into pieces the user will be able to preform water wind and ice jutsu still as long as they don't require handseals. (once again that wouldn't count it just a leg was shattered you would still be able to make handseals if your arms are intact). While this is active, the user can only use Ice, Wind, Water and any KG/CE combinations of the aforementioned elements as well as non-elemental abilities (Nin, Gen, Tai, Ken, etc).

Note: User can remain as ice for four turns
Note: can only be used thrice per battle

Ok Now just focus on making every cell in your body into ice The detail is really more in the description about the process but its meant to mimic the Hozuki hydration.

Hyouton: Koori Koukai)-Ice Release: Ice reform
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a sister jutsu to Ice release: freeze up, and is used only after the user has been shattered either by alittle bit like losing an arm or alot like being completely turned into little pieces of ice. The user will focus his chakra into one piece of the Ice which will become the center piece or the brain the chakra spread will out from the center piece like a spider web one string of chakra attached to each piece of ice. Then using his chakra he'll pull the pieces back together and using the spider web like chakra will repair cracks reforming the jutsu to how it was before breaking.

Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: The user can use this for a single limb or their entire body,meaning if you lose an arm last turn and the next turn you shatter completely this jutsu will bring everything back together.


Now say you've been shattered just focus your chakra to every piece and force them back together to reform yourself.
 

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Do I have to state where the walls are? Maybe draw a map in ms paint? Also anyway I could combine this with wind chill field?

Vegito takes out a scroll with a pre determined pattern already draw on it. He slams it onto the ground and summons a large labyrinth around himself and mc razors clone. Vegito enters the walls of the labyrinth and quickly moves from one side of the labyrinth to the other. He escapes at long range from the clone and blows up the labyrinth killing anyone inside.

Its very useful, since the mirrors can be escaped from or can't comepltly cover the enemy it works better then the mirrors. Since it also is long range the labyrinth doesn't have the same restriction as the mirrors either. The speed of the movement doesn't decrease like the mirrors either. I suppose someone could shatter the walls but to break the whole thing at once I can only see lighting pulse doing that. Only draw back would be

Note: Only one jutsu can be used per turn while the user is merged with the labyrinth, due to the huge amount of chakra being used for creating the labyrinth
Note: The user can't use ice jutsus 2 complete turns after emerging/destroying the labyrinth
Note: This jutsu can be performed only once per battle

Even then My own forbidden ranks are much more harmful in the long run from their draw backs.


Hyouton: Tou Ue)- Ice style: Freeze up
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: After many years living in the mist alongside the Hozuki the Yuki had seen their unique ability to become completely water. The Yuki sought out a way to replicate that power but with their own kekki genkai after many years they figured out a way to become ice itself. The user will focus their ice chakra throughout their body merging it into every cell and constantly will pump the chakra in and out the user will begin to take the appearance of ice and will continue this process until the user is solid ice. Unlike the Hozuki who are unable to maintain human shape, the user will maintain their shape due to ice being solid. While the user is like this they will also take the properties of ice being resistant to wind and water neutral to fire and weak to earth and lighting. The user will still be able to move around while they're ice and if shattered the user will still be alive unless they return to their human form but will still be able to perform ninjutsu if the jutsu used as long as they don't require handseals. If shattered (as in into pieces not just an arm or a leg) the user will not die unless they turn back to their human state but even if shattered into pieces the user will be able to preform water wind and ice jutsu still as long as they don't require handseals. (once again that wouldn't count it just a leg was shattered you would still be able to make handseals if your arms are intact). While this is active, the user can only use Ice, Wind, Water and any KG/CE combinations of the aforementioned elements as well as non-elemental abilities (Nin, Gen, Tai, Ken, etc).

Note: User can remain as ice for four turns
Note: can only be used thrice per battle

Ok Now just focus on making every cell in your body into ice The detail is really more in the description about the process but its meant to mimic the Hozuki hydration.

Hyouton: Koori Koukai)-Ice Release: Ice reform
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a sister jutsu to Ice release: freeze up, and is used only after the user has been shattered either by alittle bit like losing an arm or alot like being completely turned into little pieces of ice. The user will focus his chakra into one piece of the Ice which will become the center piece or the brain the chakra spread will out from the center piece like a spider web one string of chakra attached to each piece of ice. Then using his chakra he'll pull the pieces back together and using the spider web like chakra will repair cracks reforming the jutsu to how it was before breaking.

Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: The user can use this for a single limb or their entire body,meaning if you lose an arm last turn and the next turn you shatter completely this jutsu will bring everything back together.


Now say you've been shattered just focus your chakra to every piece and force them back together to reform yourself.
I used to have a picture of the labyrinth back when I submit it. I'll try to find it and I'll show you how it's supposed to look like. But without the image, it gives you a bit of freedom to define the margins yourself, which is more in the lines of a roleplay aspect to the battle, when you can control it to a degree.

This is more or less how I see it.

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Basically, the labyrinth forms around the opponent, so he's in the center and you are at the edge of the lab, ready to leap into the ice. The added advantage is that the labyrinth has a ceiling.

Barney focuses on his KG chakra and channels is throughout his body, like he's always done. Afterwards, he shape manipulates that same chakra in order to force his body to turn into ice, in the same fashion as the Hozuki do when turning into water.

I have a question though, what happens if the ice is hit by a strong fire technique? I know that fire is neutral with ice and that the melted ice would douse the fire, but still, the ice would be melted and not shattered. I suppose the second technique can't bring you back if you're not shattered into pieces. Correct?
 

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I used to have a picture of the labyrinth back when I submit it. I'll try to find it and I'll show you how it's supposed to look like. But without the image, it gives you a bit of freedom to define the margins yourself, which is more in the lines of a roleplay aspect to the battle, when you can control it to a degree.

This is more or less how I see it.

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Basically, the labyrinth forms around the opponent, so he's in the center and you are at the edge of the lab, ready to leap into the ice. The added advantage is that the labyrinth has a ceiling.

Barney focuses on his KG chakra and channels is throughout his body, like he's always done. Afterwards, he shape manipulates that same chakra in order to force his body to turn into ice, in the same fashion as the Hozuki do when turning into water.

I have a question though, what happens if the ice is hit by a strong fire technique? I know that fire is neutral with ice and that the melted ice would douse the fire, but still, the ice would be melted and not shattered. I suppose the second technique can't bring you back if you're not shattered into pieces. Correct?
When I made Ice reform I didn't consider the possibility of a fire jutsu, if it melts you then theres no pieces to reform maybe I'll update this in the future to add that in, if I do I'll be sure to tell you. You Can however use this if you've for example only lost an arm you could use it for just that arm, however at that point I'd just use the shatter jutsu on myself from the Aisugakure user group and then reform.

One more question am I able to use a jutsu besides the labyrinth in the same turn I use it?
 
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When I made Ice reform I didn't consider the possibility of a fire jutsu, if it melts you then theres no pieces to reform maybe I'll update this in the future to add that in, if I do I'll be sure to tell you. You Can however use this if you've for example only lost an arm you could use it for just that arm, however at that point I'd just use the shatter jutsu on myself from the Aisugakure user group and then reform.
It's a big drawback, but maybe rightfully so. Maybe the checker wouldn't approve it otherwise, considering that it's actually a rather powerful combination. Anyway, I think that's it, I don't have any further questions and if you don't have any as well, then we're done for now.
 
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