[Fantasy] I Will Be Dreaming On And On Till I Die.....

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Kishi Uzumaki

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I always wonder about this world ,
potential it hold and what it unfold ,
we humans always had ability to be evil ,
but i want to believe ,
there's still good in their heart ,
that won't come out but hidden deep inside ,
many would say , I'm been a fool and naive ,
but i know the realities of this world.....

I wish nothing but best for this world ,
dreams of everyone rise as one ,
but it seems , we are walking around ,
forgetting things , we must truly achieve in life ,
maybe before we change the world ,
we need to look deep inside ,
and try to fight against the evil inside ,
who knows , we find all the answers we seek......

will it be a dream of yours or mine ,
it will always be decided by time ,
we just have to do our best ,
so the new moon can shine ,
there will be times , you will fall ,
and feel there no courage to stand tall ,
i will be there , even though i be alone ,
i will be dreaming on and on till i die.....
 

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