i want your opinion of my book idea

[Fair Warning]

Was eating some ice cream and this came into my mind


so its modern times and this kid discovers that a cell in the body contains all of the brains info, so when you die, the cell can be replicated with medication.

So shit goes down and the world turns to chaos because everyones doin shit because they can't die.

Only he knows the "cure" to make people die for good. But if he cures everyone, his father will die of his sickness.


so wut do? cliff hanga *****

 

[FemmeFatale]

Lol, its...different.
but it sound kind of boring it need something special, something fatal, something heart breaking,

 

[Fair Warning]

Lol, its...different.
but it sound kind of boring it need something special, something fatal, something heart breaking,

A useless pink haired sidekick?

 

[Syareoo]

A useless pink haired sidekick?

hahahahahahahahaaa!!!

 

[SpiderRider89]

It has potential!!

 

[lilzay2kay]

I like it

Only thing though is that it seems like it'd be difficult to write a prolonged story about it

My suggestion is make the main conflict more extreme, and if you do decide to write a book about this, add in a lot of subplots to keep it interesting, but make them relevant


Just my suggestion

 

[The Necromancer]

It's a good concept. Flesh it out and it could have potential.

 

[Fair Warning]

I like it

Only thing though is that it seems like it'd be difficult to write a prolonged story about it

My suggestion is make the main conflict more extreme, and if you do decide to write a book about this, add in a lot of subplots to keep it interesting, but make them relevant


Just my suggestion

eh, it'd be about 300 pages at most. Probably a subplot of the Army trying to weaponize it and maybe an immunity/race war idk

it was all conceived from a sherbet consumation grind

 

[gutSy Sage]

dude I'm not gonna lie, I always wondered if one cell/atom holds our cognition and "brain's info"

Go with it brah.