I thought i lost you

[DarkSandss]

Today, is a sad day in
a way because i thought i
lost you my jenny pooh
Your parents yell at you
but they don't realize that they
are hurting and i thought i lost
you when i called you and called you
but you never answered I thought
I lose you the one girl that
means the Entire World no
Galaxy to me

 

[Yo pappy]

lmfao

 

[Urda]

Its alright, I guess. Its a little bit confusing as in why and really.

 

[Scooby Doo]

Too much 'you' and 'I' and 'thought'. Otherwise its ok

 

[AP2k]

You write some sad poetry, but i dig it anyway

 

[~MC117~]

Lol nice

 

[DarkSandss]

thanks

 

[Zeref]

its not funny,pretty good i like it

 

[DarkSandss]

thanks Zeref