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Amassing a portion of my chakra, I form Raiton chakra within my body, which I then channel into my right palm, crackling jovially. As I infuse my palm with lightning chakra, I quickly lean forwards and position my body downwards, as I plant my left foot very close to the clone, before striking upwards with my right palm, dealing an uppercut infused with lightning chakra to the Gin clone's jaw and sending it into the air.

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As the clone stands in front of my awesome self, I begin spinning in a ballet like manner which causes me to look like a -censored by NB- as I spin on one leg(left one) and I gain more momentum, I suddenly kick with my right leg, the kick is a back kick that connects to the clones gut.
 

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Good, better descriptions for these last ones

(Toripuru Dainamikku Entorii) -Triple Dynamic Entry
Rank:B
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user uses Dynamic Entry on the opponent and then appears behind them to use it again. They are blasted into the air where they use a third Dynamic Entry to knock the enemy to the ground with great force and speed

Dynamic entry three times with the last one knocking them to the ground.

(Senkō Jūjiki) -Flash Cross Sever
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user delivers multiple punches to the foe before he slashes them with his chakra blades in a cross-style.

you first hit my clone with a bunch of punches. Afterwards take out a kunai or a sword and run chakra through it. Slash my clone up cross style.

Do these together in a combo. It's pretty basic, I want to see your wording.

(Konoha Shippūdan) - Leaf Hurricane Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will launch a succession of high and low kicks dealing a several continuous kicks to the chest region alternating between both legs.

(Doroppu Kikku) - Drop Kick
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 35
Description: The user will jump into the air or be airbourne and delivers a powerful drop kick that sends the opponent flying.
 

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I run towards your clone and once I near him I jump and position my right foot forward, my right foot will hit the clone in the face sending him flying in the opposite direction, as the clone is flying in that direction I appear in front of him and deliver yet another dynamic entry, also hitting him in the face in a manner that sends him into the air, I then appear above him (via jump) and deliver a third dynamic entry, this last one sends him towards the ground with great speed and force.

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I take out a kunai and hold it tightly in my right hand, I then concentrate chakra to my right hand, once it builds up I channel it to the kunai, I keep channeling it to the kunia until it(my chakra) begins to build on the kunai, and it even gets dense and visible, once that happens I charge at the clone, once I near le gin clone I begin to deliver punches and slashes to it, hitting him in the head, stomach, and various body parts. I end it by delivering a horizontal slash to the head, cutting it off

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as your clone is infront of me I begin to kick him, the kicks are being alternated between my left & right legs, while also shifting my weight so I don't fall, the first kick will be a high one to the chest while the second will be a low kick, this process continues on for a while until I finally end it with a right kick that sends him a few feet backwards. As he stumbles backwards I run towards your clone, once I near him I jump high and extend my left foot, as I fall and gain speed from gravity I direct my foot towards his right shoulder, the kick will connect to the shoulder and cause excruciating pain.
 
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