I need some constructive criticism ...

[KillebIsBeast]

Im not really what you would call a advance artist .... I play college football , but i love drawing . Tell me what you guys think . I will color it when I'm done fixing some things .. Anyway tell me what you think!

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[Atalaya]

Volleyball>Basketball>Football
lol sorry, it looks amazing to me, maybe add some sort of tbb there?U_U

 

[Asu Be]

looks cool but drawing it bigger would have ben better

 

[-Punk-]

Practice makes perfect .

 

[KillebIsBeast]

Volleyball>Basketball>Football
lol sorry, it looks amazing to me, maybe add some sort of tbb there?U_U

Haha football is defiantly a man sport i understand why you wouldn't like it ! Awesome! i appreciate it! ill do that once i figure how to throw it in there.. haha

Practice makes perfect .

im not sure if i follow lol.... is it bad ?

looks cool but drawing it bigger would have ben better

Yeah i could have done that ...

 

[Clouds]

if u really want to

be sure to make him a bit more solid he seems a bit fluid at his arms and legs
also be sure to make his eyes round since thats the way he is supposed to look.

furthermore his tails are a bit too fluffy. :c

 

[Cruciatus]

Refine the shape some. Even though its a cartoon, harsh and soft lines still have their place. I'd like to see the final product though. :yayy:

 

[Erin]

Basketball>Football
lol sorry, it looks amazing to me, maybe add some sort of tbb there?U_U

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[Mercer]

looks like shit

 

[KillebIsBeast]

if u really want to

be sure to make him a bit more solid he seems a bit fluid at his arms and legs
also be sure to make his eyes round since thats the way he is supposed to look.

furthermore his tails are a bit too fluffy. :c

Defiantly! Thanks so much!

 

[Wolfus]

It's good, but you should just study a little bit of anatomy proportions, because some parts of the body are disproportional(the head and the arms, for exemple). This is just an advice, because your drawing is good.

 

[Sir Blades]

Practice and you will improve, i think it looks silly but in a good way. Like part of a comical version of naruto.

 

[KillebIsBeast]

Refine the shape some. Even though its a cartoon, harsh and soft lines still have their place. I'd like to see the finale product though. :yayy:

Ill be sure to make a thread when I'm finished !

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Hahaha i can agree!

It's good, but you should just study a little bit of anatomy proportions, because some parts of the body are disproportional(the head and the arms, for exemple). This is just an advice, because your drawing is good.

Hey i wouldn't have asked from criticism if i didn't need it! thanks for the info!

Practice and you will improve, i think it looks silly but in a good way. Like part of a comical version of naruto.

Hahah i see that ... Shit how do i fix that..

 

[Joon]

Its awesome. Keep working on it.

 

[KillebIsBeast]

Its awesome. Keep working on it.

Thanks man!

 

[Atalaya]

Haha football is defiantly a man sport i understand why you wouldn't like it ! Awesome! i appreciate it! ill do that once i figure how to throw it in there.. haha

Lol just throw a fuzzy ball in there ლ(́◉◞౪◟◉‵ლ)
Jk I don't know how to drawU_U
I like football, but I only watch the super bowlXD

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I still agree yo
:bouncy:

 

[foxyladyland]

looks nice and you know you could add something Lol

 

[KillebIsBeast]

Lol just throw a fuzzy ball in there ლ(́◉◞౪◟◉‵ლ)
Jk I don't know how to drawU_U
I like football, but I only watch the super bowlXD

I still agree yo
:bouncy:

Hahaha I might just do that! If my team doesn't play then whatever haha

looks nice and you know you could add something Lol

What can I add!