I need help seriously

Loki d

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Maybe about my mentor or how everyone depends on me when it comes to their devices and the router.
 

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Maybe about my mentor or how everyone depends on me when it comes to their devices and the router.

Seems self centered, but when something this big comes up, I guess you'd find a flaw in everything.
But I rather do like the part about your mentor.
I don't feel a stretch in the statement you typed in either about how you've helped, and your mentor.
So that's pretty good.

But that's my 2cents.
 
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Write about a small act you do that affects building your integrity or character and that has nothing to do with anyone else (unless it's a selfless act for others)

A+ paper right there.
 

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Write about a small act you do that affects building your integrity or character and that has nothing to do with anyone else (unless it's a selfless act for others)

A+ paper right there.

^ ^ ^ Dat's gud.
 

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Write about a small act you do that affects building your integrity or character and that has nothing to do with anyone else (unless it's a selfless act for others)

A+ paper right there.

Like speaking formally.
 

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Like speaking formally.

That would work. Connecting it at a personal level of how it helped you overcome something, made you a better person, etc. Just go into the details of what it made a difference about to you specifically that nobody else would be able to see.

Deliver the experience to someone, how it felt, and what it uniquely and personally meant to you. I think that's a strong way to go about this.
 

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Bruh, idk how to write mine either. I hate college apps. :|
 
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