I Named her Brit.

Nocturne

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Due to my bad quality mobile camera i had to post both version for u guys to see the pik...plz other than the quality critics...i'll be accepting all critics regarding my drawing...made it in an hour...approximately...

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Overall good.
The teeth seem a little bit off and without a scanner a drawing is always gonna look bad to the naked eye.
 

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The teeth seem a little bit off and without a scanner a drawing is always gonna look bad to the naked eye.

First of all....glad ur helping....secondly yes....it does look bad....thts y i scan my aotm submission....xd....nywayz i dun have a scanner temporarily so this is all i can give....i'll try to take more appropriate snaps till monday...^^
 

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Plz edit her teeth
 

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I like your Brit alot!!
It's sooo beautiful!!=DD


You insist on criticising o_O????

I guess doing two things might help alot,...
1-Widen the teeth.
2-Give the nose a bright spot(oval shaped, whatever you like) to make it pop out,
that would help show the face's structure/anatomy.

ThnQ :)
 

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arite i'll update her tday....thnx for ther feedback...^^
 

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the teeth are too tightly packd!!
nice work btw
and cut that low quality camera crap plz :D xd
 

Houssem Uchiha

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nice drawing Bro but i think the teeth are a little bit wrong fix em up and it'll be 9,5/10
for now it's 8/10
 
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