I made a manga!

[SumnNarutoRelated]

Well I should say making as the first issue isn't done yet, but i have finished the first 18 pages.


I would really love to hear what you guys think!!

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It's a WIP and I'm doing it all alone but you can expect the official release of issue 1 August 30th!

 

[FunkyFatal]

Interesting art style you got. So whats the manga going to be about?

 

[Ciao]

[SUP]i have no idea what's happening[/SUP]

 

[FemmeFatale]

nice, but let me guess,
This is one of those, Last son of kyrpton sent to earth, most powerful sayian sort of stories.

 

[Umnipotent]

go ahead, take your time

 

[TenseiganFTW]

[SUP]i have no idea what's happening[/SUP]

This ^^
So true but it's only the beginning it can be good
Also please try to write abit better,that feet you wrote........was so ugly(mutant)?
Only that foot was bad lol,you are better at writing than me,continue ^^

 

[SumnNarutoRelated]

Interesting art style you got. So whats the manga going to be about?

What u see so far in the first 18 pages is a prologue that leads up to the actual story. It's about an event that occurs on April 13th in the year 2029, where an asteroid named Apophis is on a collision course with earth. Though this potential cataclysm is thwarted, its inception marks the moment where a bunch of people with a united past, crosses each other's paths again given rise to familiar battles and relationships that once ended on a very bad note.

There are themes of friendship, heroism, terrorism, and just about anything u can get in an action oriented manga. It's heavy in hand to hand combat with amazing displays of agility and martial arts.

It's like DBZ fighting without the flying and powers or like rock lee va Gaara without the sand and gates

 

[Ciao]

it looks like some sort of tron thing then there's a placenta surrounded by bees at the end.

 

[SumnNarutoRelated]

nice, but let me guess,
This is one of those, Last son of kyrpton sent to earth, most powerful sayian sort of stories.

Haha absolutely not!!! God I hate those. These pages are hardly representative of the actual story. I wrote a brief synopsis ^^^^

 

[SumnNarutoRelated]

it looks like some sort of tron thing then there's a placenta surrounded by bees at the end.

Haha we won't see much of this from stuff after this issue. 99% of the manga takes place on Earth. I just wanted to introduce a certain character in the beginnjng

 

[FunkyFatal]

What u see so far in the first 18 pages is a prologue that leads up to the actual story. It's about an event that occurs on April 13th in the year 2029, where an asteroid named Apophis is on a collision course with earth. Though this potential cataclysm is thwarted, its inception marks the moment where a bunch of people with a united past, crosses each other's paths again given rise to familiar battles and relationships that once ended on a very bad note.

There are themes of friendship, heroism, terrorism, and just about anything u can get in an action oriented manga. It's heavy in hand to hand combat with amazing displays of agility and martial arts.

It's like DBZ fighting without the flying and powers or like rock lee va Gaara without the sand and gates

Nice i wish you the best. :bouncy:

 

[SumnNarutoRelated]

This ^^
So true but it's only the beginning it can be good
Also please try to write abit better,that feet you wrote........was so ugly(mutant)?
Only that foot was bad lol,you are better at writing than me,continue ^^

Lol that's interesting hearing considering there's no dialogue for the first 17 pages. I promise more than anything, the story is the most wnthralling characteristic. And yes it is hard to follow but it becomes
Much more simplified from henceforth!!

 

[Complex]

pretty interesting, nice work man

 

[SumnNarutoRelated]

pretty interesting, nice work man

Thank u man. That means a lot to me. It's only going to get better from here I promise

 

[SumnNarutoRelated]

Nice i wish you the best. :bouncy:

Thank you love