I have writers block.. help!?

[Chihaya]

It's a rommmaannnceee story.

The 1st chapter is about a girl waking up next to her best friends stepbrother. And she has to end up staying at their house for awhile. and they have to keep the fact that they had *** a secret. they also don't really like each other. they weren't sober when they slept.. with.. each other. W.E DON'T JUDGE ME.

and ya. idk how to WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER.

help? ideas? nothing huge or anything like a kiss. just stubble things to get the story started? ;_;

 

[CurseSealofEarth]

Batman swoops in and saves such a shitty story.

 

[TheSageOfNinetails]

Use the next chapter to express their discomfort with their drunken mishap.

Also, throw in curiousuty from other characters who have yet to know.

 

[Erebus]

clicheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Lol, just read some romance novels, it'll all come to you, there isn't much diversity in drama

But who i'm i to say, after all i think Twilight is a horrible piece of shit :|

 

[Yuse]

the girl starts to feel guilty and tells that she will tell his sister because she cant keep the secret anylonger but the boy tries all thats in his power to stop her what ya think chapter number 2 haha

 

[SusanooKyuubi]

Batman swoops in and saves such a shitty story.

XD

and the Joker reveals his new plan!

OT: Come back to the story later, start something new, getting your mind off it will allow you sometime to think, working on long spanning story right now and I need a scenario that would reasonably instigate a fight. Left it for now, and I'm going to start a three book story, done with book one's plot.

 

[Mark Sanchez]

Add some back story

A flashback would help

 

[hixa kuogame]

Let someone find evidence that there was possibly something going on between them to raise the suspense. Let the MC and the step brother establish their feelings.

 

[Markus Uchiha]

I would say add some awkwardness, if she has to stay at the home, then shes more then likely going to feel strange, guilty, akward around the boy and his sister.

 

[Joker]

The stepbrother is actually gay, and the girl is a lesbian in denial, so they go on a journey of acceptance.

 

[chopstickchakra]

Act 1: I know it's not a movie or play so there aren't technically acts but shut up

Ok so Act 1: Girl wakes up next to the guy in question, disgusted expression on her face she stumbles to the bathroom where she sees herself in the mirror disheveled and a mess.

Act 2: Flash back to the day leading up to the night from the girls perspective.

Act 3: While girl is in bathroom man wakes up hears shower running. Wonders who's there then remembers last night. Expose on the events that happened between them once back at the house.

Act 4: 1st encounter after night together. One angry one ashamed or happy depending on how you feel and who you choose. Have one character(either or doesn't matter who) tell the other not to say anything.

Act 5: Guy with friends talking about the night. Show his perspective of the day leading into the night.

Act 6: Guy and girl start messing with each other acting as if they will tell the sister/friend.

Act 7: Sister realizes they are acting weird and presses the issue. Girl finally tells her.

Act 8: Eventually girl and guy end up together.

 

[LogicnoJutsu]

After they wake up and have their initial shock have it be a monolouge of the Girls backstory, Who she is, where shes at, have a setting, and why she has to stay at the house. Then have it go to the bar scene where they got drunk and then slept together. Introduce other characters in the meantime. Like the parents or her best friend.

 

[Aim64C]

The stepbrother is actually gay, and the girl is a lesbian in denial, so they go on a journey of acceptance.

That would be a hit with the LGBT community.

I can see the flame reviews, now.

 

[Jazzy Stardust]

Nazi vampire zombies attack and they're forced to work together to help the dwarves reclaim their home in the mountain, while searching for freedom after being a slave for 12 years.

 

[Poptart]

chapter 2: they're actually siblings.

 

[ShishaMastah420]

Plooooovplooo oloooobbbb plot twist

Girl has a weiner.

Boy has a vagina.

o_o dun dun dunnn duuuunnn

 

[ShishaMastah420]

Plooooovplooo oloooobbbb plot twist

Girl has a weiner.

Boy has a vagina.

o_o dun dun dunnn duuuunnn

 

[Sage Moonblood]

The best way to get over writers block is to keep writing. Just keep writing whether it makes any sense or not and eventually nee ideas will awaken just dont dtop writing

 

[Ldude]

If the story starts on the presumption that they've already had ***, there's nothing to build up to, which is very important for a romance story to have interest... In comparison, a kiss will seem like nothing. Ultimately it's your story, but if you plan on putting a lot of time into it, you might want to rework the initial conditions a bit.. or something so the readers have something new to expect/not expect. Some sort of surprise?

 

[chopstickchakra]

If the story starts on the presumption that they've already had ***, there's nothing to build up to, which is very important for a romance story to have interest... In comparison, a kiss will seem like nothing. Ultimately it's your story, but if you plan on putting a lot of time into it, you might want to rework the initial conditions a bit.. or something so the readers have something new to expect/not expect. Some sort of surprise?

That's not necessarily true. If you start the story with the physical interaction then you just need to tell the story backwards. It's actually a rather common technique.