I finish water bending with Heister

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Ok, I see you've started the basics and are currently up to:

(Suiton: Suishōha) - Water Style: Water Shock Wave
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: This technique allows the user after claping their hands together to make a spiralling vortex of water out of knowhere. The vortex then proceeds to explode from the top in the form of a wave. The user can also control the direction the wave goes with hand movements.

Now I want you to perform this jutsu for me as you did in the previous thread, and I will see if you are performing it right. After that we will begin training in my method. I just want to see what you've learned from Toku ;)
 

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Ok!

I begin to gather up my chakra and concentrate. Then after a few seconds I clap my hands together and create a spiraling vortex of water. The vortex begins to explode from the top creating a wave of water which I direct at a few trees near us.
 

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Hmm.. good, but be a bit more descriptive.

How does the water just come out of no where? You need to explain.

Try this:

Focus you suiton chakra and then disperse it into the air directly above and in front of you, out of this suiton chakra materialize water and manipulate it in the vortex.

*Hits you on the head with a pamphlet*

Now try again!

Also give me an advantage, a disadvantage, and how you could use this in conjunction with another jutsu. I know it's a lot to ask, but I want to make sure my students know how to use these techniques.
 

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Ok. and its ok.

I start to focus on my water chakra Then after a few moments I disperse it into the air above me and in front of me. I then clap my hands together and by doing so Materialize water from the chakra in dispersed into the air. It then appears as spiraling water vortex which proceeds to erupt from the top creating a wave of water that I direct with my hands towards several trees in front of me.
 

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Great job! You are learning ;p

Now just give me one advantage and one disadvantage of this jutsu. And also give me a way in which you would use this jutsu in battle, whether it be in conjunction with another jutsu or how you would use it by itself to catch an opponent off guard.
 

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Advantage: An advantage of this jutsu is that since it requires no hand seals it can be done quickly thus it is very helpful in speed battle.

Disadvantage: A disadvantage is that a strong enough fire jutsu could just easily evaportate the water.

I would use this jutsu in a fight in a combination with lightning techniques. since The technique is easy and fast to make and combined with a lightning jutsu its power could be devastating. I would also use it as a distraction for a more powerful jutsu or assault.

I'm not very good at the advantage/disadvantage thing so if you see a flaw feel fre to help me out ^^
 

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Good good, moving on.

(Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with the users own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to the users senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone the existence of the target can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until the user uses the seal to cancel it.

For this jutsu I want you to concentrate on your suiton chakra and disperse it into the skies. In doing so form clouds in which you rain down water onto your opponents. See if you can feel the presence of my clones after doing so.

*Creates 2 clones*

Also once again, give me a disadvantage and advantage of this jutsu. Battle use is fairly obvious, so I don't need it for this one.
 

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Ok!

I begin by focusing. I then start to gather my water chakra throughout my body and begin to think about rain, how rain is formed. I then send my chakra to the sky and I use it to form rain clouds. Then rain begins to fall down on us. I then try and use the chakra infused in the rain I created and sense Heister clones. At first I feel nothing but them I begin to feel someones chakra disturbing my own. I then detect Heister's clones.

Advantage: Its a great jutsu to seek out a hiding enemy and helps you have a better domination in the battlefield.

Disadvantage: The technique can sense out an existing chakra that doesn't belong to the user but it doesn't show its whereabouts. (I'm not sure about this one so if its just something stupid feel free to let me know)
 

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Good, good.

Although that necessarily wasn't the disadvantage I was looking for, you could have said something along the lines of it's easily counter-able, and if you are facing a rain user then performing this technique means your death is imminent x_x

Moving on,

(Suiton: Suirou No Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Prison
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is used to trap a victim inside a virtually inescapable sphere of water. The only downside to this technique is that the user must keep at least one arm inside the sphere at all times in order for the victim to remain imprisoned. This technique requires a sufficient amount of water, which can be provided by expelling it from one's mouth. Once trapped the target is unable to move while within it due to the heaviness of the water. Because of the density of the water it can be used, to a limited extent, for defensive purposes if performed on oneself. Water clones can be used in preparation for the technique, which block an opponent's attack and trap the attacker in the prison using the clone's own water.

For this technique I need you to mold your suiton chakra and materialize water, having it come from your mouth. After doing this manipulate the shape of the water into a sphere and make sure to keep your hand in contact with it or it will dissipate.

Once again - advantage, disadvantage, and a battle usage for this.
 

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Ok and sorry. O_O

I begin by listening the instructions given to me by Heister sempai. Then once he's finished I start to mold my water chakra after a few moments I materialize water from the chakra I have gathered releasing it from my mouth. I then use shape manipulation to transform the water in a sphere shape while I place my hand on the sphere creating a water prison.

Advantage: It is a good jutsu to unmoblize your opponent leaving open for an attack. Its also a good jutsu cause it can be used for defensive purposes.

Disadvantage: Seeing that the jutsu requieres one hand contact. It not only leaves your opponent unable to move but yourself as well leaving you open for an attack by a clone or summon.

Battle Usage: I can use this jutsu in battle to trap an opponent and then use my free hand to slice there throat or deal some damage. I can also use it on myself for protection of incoming attacks.
 

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A different battle usage would be to have a clone perform the jutsu, this way you can keep them in the water prison and your real body is free to do what it wants.

Moving on,

(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form.

Focus your water chakra and focus it throughout your body, manifest the water chakra and make it so you can turn different parts of your body into water. While in this form you cannot attack, but it does help in avoiding damage.

Once again, a disadvantage, advantage, and battle use for this jutsu.
 

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Ok.

I begin to focus on my water chakra throughout my whole body. Then after a few moments I begin to channel my chakra and start to think about water. How water is and whats it like, having the image on my head I try to channel the chakra and turn my body into water, my body then begins to liquefy and turn into a small body of water that allows me to negate any physical damage. After my body is transformed I begin to feel numb and heavy.

Advantage: Its a good jutsu that allows you to nullify any damage.

Disadvantage: If your hit by a lightning or fire jutsu in this form your pretty much toast.

Battle Usage: If lets say My opponent throws a shuriken at me and uses the Shuriken Shadow clone jutsu I can use this jutsu to turn my body into water and avoiding the physical damage that the shurikens can cause seeing that they would just pass through the water.
 
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Sorry man, more description is needed on how you perform the technique.

Everything else is fine though. Just re-do the description, be more descriptive. Where do you focus your chakra? How does your body react to this technique?
 

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Good job, moving on:

(Suiton: Suishū Gorugon) - Water Release: Powerful Blasting Rain Trench
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user after performing Dragon → Tiger will summon a large amount of water that will then be used to strike at the opponent in several versatile ways. It has been known to transform it into a dragon with a gaping mouth to attack. The water used will be stationary till it is sent offensively toward the opponent.

Perform the Dragon-Tiger hand seals in succession while utilizing your water chakra to summon a large amount of water to strike your opponent with. Also manipulate the shape to look like a Dragon, I want to be surprised.

*Creates a clone*

Same thing as before, you know the deal - advantage, disadvantage, and battle use.
 

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I begin to listen to Sempais instructions then I perform the Dragon->Tiger hand seals while molding and gathering my chakra I then send my chakra to the air around me and use it to materialize water from the chakra I've gathered and sent in the air after that I use shape manipulation to turn my water into a dragon which I then send to attack Heister's clone.

Adv.: Its a quick move to make seeing it has only 2 hand seals.
Dis: since its a low lvl jutsu a strong enough defense could just block it.
Battle Usage: I'm not sure of the battle usage but to use it as an offensive move. what do you say sempai?
 
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