I felt like sharing. :)

Kiba21890

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This is a fan fiction web comic I'm working on. I wanted to share the first scene with you guys who are interested. It's short and sweet and read from left to right like in comic strips. I love manga so much, but I wanted something people like my mom would be able to follow easy. :) I'm almost done with the second scene and should post it soon. I hope you guys like it. And I truly love questions and criticism. Also mind you, I'm not the best artist. Yet without further ado, I give you : Not Naruto.
 

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I will read it. Dattebayo!
 

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Nice work, if i had to give criticism it would be to not describe what they are doing within the panels
 

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Hmm, Dudley noted. Thx for the advice! I'm just a tad worried my drawings aren't good enough to describe it. Lol we are our own worst critics after all lol. But thank you!
 

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This was really good. You're super talented. Keep it up
 

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Thank you so much! I can't wait to see people's reactions as Katsumi's character unfolds. :)
 
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