I Feel Sad

[Deviation]

Sometimes I Feel
By Deviation


Sometimes I feel so empty like there is nothing inside
I reach inside but I can't find what was there
I forgot what it was that that I had lost
It hurts and I don't know why
I cry and I can't explain why

Sometimes I drag myself out of bed only to see a rainy day
I keep looking up and the sun just won't shine
I swear that no matter how far I run the wind won't blow
For if it did maybe I could fly away and maybe I wouldn't hurt anymore
If I could fly maybe the sky wouldn't look as black and the rain would go away

Sometimes I feel so lonely that I just sit by myself while the world looks away
I look outside and see so many happy faces and me glancing as they pass by
Hoping one will look at me and say hello and how was my day
But no one cares and never will is what they say to me
So many lies and masks simply saying nothing

Sometimes I don't feel like waking up
I wake up and dread the day ahead
I look in the mirror and see someone I don't know anymore
I used to be so happy and ready for anything
Now as I look at the broken mirror I pick a broken piece
And write on my arm that i don't want to be alone anymore

I don't want to be sad anymore...



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[Blinkie Uchiha]

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Nice poem bro : )

 

[Sir Blades]

Sad is the emotion of mediocre people with no ambition.
Kidding, it was a pleasant poem. Poets turn me on =D

 

[Netferarri]

I thought this was going to be a venting thread lmao

OT: Nice poem bro, plus rep!

 

[Dshon21]

Sounds like a bad case of depression. In cases like this I would advise a therapist or a priest. Although a cheap girl and a shot of Gin can take the edge off.

 

[Hipster Madara]

I like the poem.

 

[Guy Fawkes]

we ignore feelings hereU_U

 

[Pavoneo]

Amazing poem, captures the atmosphere you're trying to present extremely well.

 

[Tsuki]

Thanks for sharing with us your poem man

 

[SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI]

thats really nice..!!

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Great poem man . exactly what i felt few days ago . i went on a trip every thing fine now .

 

[darkprince]

nice poem .

 

[Deviation]

Thank you everyone who replied. It means a lot that you took the time to read it and comment on it. <3