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It's my first time. Please be gentle with me Better.

Rei's Rules
No Killing/Stealing
No CJ/CE
Range: mid
Terrain: Cliff landing. To the left a wall of earth that has another landing above it, to the right a cliff that leads to death by sharp rocks.

Something like this except higher from the ground with sharp rocks at the bottom.
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I'll be using Masuyo in my sig.

You choose who goes first.
 
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*poops and runs away*

(SORRY FOR ZHE SPAM :T_T:)
 

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Gin Ichimaru in sig

i throw two kunai with explosive tags at you in a horizontal pattern aim at your chest

As soon as they get close i detonate them, damaging you
 

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Gabriel: Masuyo-chan?! *If he hurts her I'll kill him!* -__- you better be careful
 

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People and my name, always using it in clever ways xd
 

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i throw two kunai with explosive tags at you in a horizontal pattern aim at your chest

As soon as they get close i detonate them, damaging you

*I throw 2 explosive kunai at your incoming kunai and detonate them when theyre about to make contact making all 4 kunai explode. While the smoke from the explosion is still thick and our views of each other are blocked, I cast Destruction Bug Aerial Assault sending my bugs through the smoke high in the smoke but still concealed in a cloud formation which resembles the smoke. The bugs swarm above you and crash into you, pummeling you to the ground.*

(Kikaichu Masu Misairu no Jutsu) - Destruction Bug Mass Projectile Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user sends a bigger version of Destruction Bug Projectile Technique dealing more damage to the target.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame clan.

It is a more effective version of
(Kikaichu Misairu no Jutsu) - Destruction Bug Projectile Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will send a cloud like projectile of destruction bugs at the enemy.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
 
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Youยดre better then that guy! Remember that your knight is with you should it get difficult Melizzle.;)<3
 

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*I throw 2 explosive kunai at your incoming kunai and detonate them when theyre about to make contact making all 4 kunai explode. While the smoke from the explosion is still thick and our views of each other are blocked, I cast Destruction Bug Aerial Assault sending my bugs through the smoke high in the smoke but still concealed in a cloud formation which resembles the smoke. The bugs swarm above you and crash into you, pummeling you to the ground.*

(Kikaichu Masu Misairu no Jutsu) - Destruction Bug Mass Projectile Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user sends a bigger version of Destruction Bug Projectile Technique dealing more damage to the target.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame clan.

It is a more effective version of
(Kikaichu Misairu no Jutsu) - Destruction Bug Projectile Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will send a cloud like projectile of destruction bugs at the enemy.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.

As you release your kunai at mine, i know theres going to be an explosion no matter what, so i take out my shinso (sword in bio) and focus my wind chakra into it and as soon as the explosion happens i swing my sword and release a gust of wind that clears the smoke and i see you releasing your bugs.

(Fลซton: Kujaku Senpลซ) - Wind Release: Peacock Whirlwind
Rank: C

Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: This technique utilizes wind chakra into the users sword and then they swing it to create a powerful whirlwind of gusts of wind by releasing the wind chakra in sync with the swing of the sword.

as soon as i see you releasing your bugs, i take a deep breath and exhale a flame from my mouth and quickly destroys your bugs.

(Katon: Hi no iki) - Fire Release: Fire Breath
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user breathes a powerful stream of fire from their mouth at their target.

i then with my shinso in my right hand, carefully charge at you and when i reach you i fake a slash with my sword and hit punch you with my left hand sending you back

lets see how good your taijutsu is
 

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As you release your kunai at mine, i know theres going to be an explosion no matter what, so i take out my shinso (sword in bio) and focus my wind chakra into it and as soon as the explosion happens i swing my sword and release a gust of wind that clears the smoke and i see you releasing your bugs.

(Fลซton: Kujaku Senpลซ) - Wind Release: Peacock Whirlwind
Rank: C

Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: This technique utilizes wind chakra into the users sword and then they swing it to create a powerful whirlwind of gusts of wind by releasing the wind chakra in sync with the swing of the sword.

as soon as i see you releasing your bugs, i take a deep breath and exhale a flame from my mouth and quickly destroys your bugs.

(Katon: Hi no iki) - Fire Release: Fire Breath
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user breathes a powerful stream of fire from their mouth at their target.

i then with my shinso in my right hand, carefully charge at you and when i reach you i fake a slash with my sword and hit punch you with my left hand sending you back

lets see how good your taijutsu is

*When you blow the smoke away I see you inhale to perform your katon. As you inhale I move to short range and form 3 handseals and create a water whip in my right hand. As you release your jutsu I lash my whip around you and bind you with it around your chest area binding both of your arms. I was not quick enough to save the bugs but that's alright.

(Suiton: Suiben) - Water Release: Water whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat โ†’ Dog โ†’ Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.

While you are bound I perform Lightning Saber sending the bolts through the whip. The lightning and water together electrocute you for extra damage.

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent
 

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*When you blow the smoke away I see you inhale to perform your katon. As you inhale I move to short range and form 3 handseals and create a water whip in my right hand. As you release your jutsu I lash my whip around you and bind you with it around your chest area binding both of your arms. I was not quick enough to save the bugs but that's alright.

(Suiton: Suiben) - Water Release: Water whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat โ†’ Dog โ†’ Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.

While you are bound I perform Lightning Saber sending the bolts through the whip. The lightning and water together electrocute you for extra damage.

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent

so i take your combo like a boss lol :cool: lol not really tho

As i am now on one knee, panting damage by your technique, i then force myself to get up panting

This has gone on too long

i focus my wind chakra and force myself to jump in the air a little bit tho, and then blow wind at you blinding you with the dust it carries but just doing that, and i land back in mid range.
(Fลซton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement
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I then focus my fire chakra when i land and fire a huge fireball that covers a large area that goes at and covers your vision between us
(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Style: Intense Pain
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A huge burst of fire that turns into a huge fireball and can cover a large area, burning all in its path.
As its coming at you, i jump back into long range and stomp the ground creating a tunnel that leads to right under you, i then exhale my fire chakra into the tunnel until it gets right under you as magma, and with one hand seal it erupts out as lava from right under you.

(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, making an underground tunnel form between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire to turn into lava as it travels. With a single hand seal, the lava will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them in lava.

mhmmm i think i over did it....... my bad
 
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*When you blow the smoke away I see you inhale to perform your katon. As you inhale I move to short range and form 3 handseals and create a water whip in my right hand. As you release your jutsu I lash my whip around you and bind you with it around your chest area binding both of your arms. I was not quick enough to save the bugs but that's alright.

(Suiton: Suiben) - Water Release: Water whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat โ†’ Dog โ†’ Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.

While you are bound I perform Lightning Saber sending the bolts through the whip. The lightning and water together electrocute you for extra damage.

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent

You didn't defend against the fire here.
 

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I released the bugs in the air so that's where he attacked. He and I talked about that one.

As i'm caught in the water whip, i see you release your lightning and its quickly coming at me, i quickly blow out a wind ball out of my mouth that stops your lightning technique and continue on as a D rank wind and knocks you down, and release your hold on the whip. i then break out of the bind since your no longer holding it.

(Fลซton: Gลkลซhล) - Wind Release: Great Vacuum Cannon
Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: The users gathers his Fuuton chakra into the lungs to blow out a sphere of air at his target that can blow backwards the opponent and small objects around him.

I then focus my fire chakra, and then blow out a fire that surrounds you and wraps around you and then comes together on you like gaara sand coffin.

(Katon: Honoo no Saigai Hi Kagayaku no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Flame of Disaster Fire Shine Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user releases a flame of fire chakra that converges on the opponent wrapping around them and burning them.

if my first counter about releasing your whip isn't right tell me, so i can edit

Your counter to the whip doesn't work as the whip is binded around around you and is tightly bound around you so you couldn't inhale enough air to supply that jutsu and you would be shocked.
 

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lol Xanthe
Why you troll everyone xd I thought my training thread was enough :p xd
Just let them have fun thats what its all about :D
 

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lol Xanthe
Why you troll everyone xd I thought my training thread was enough :p xd
Just let them have fun thats what its all about :D

Xanthe is my senpai I asked him to explain it.
 

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Your counter to the whip doesn't work as the whip is binded around around you and is tightly bound around you so you couldn't inhale enough air to supply that jutsu and you would be shocked.

ight cool thanks dude i'll edit
 

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ENOUGH :scorps: let the battle continue with my lil Kiri rose and the guy who needs to do what his name suggests -_-
 

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Xanthe, die in a fire o-o
 
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