I created my own manga!

[SumnNarutoRelated]

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lemme know whatchu think o great ones

 

[Bad Touch Yakushi]

I just added a new page

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lemme know whatchu think o great ones

It's nice quality! Art is good and stuff like One Punch Man starts out like this- keep pushing it!

 

[Gerkak]

Keep up the good work

 

[SumnNarutoRelated]

It's nice quality! Art is good and stuff like One Punch Man starts out like this- keep pushing it!

i shall i shall!

the art'll get better as i get more used to the inking process. I'm a pencil man myself

heres an example

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[Bad Touch Yakushi]

Focus on expressions and faces next i'd say, though that could just be the Akira Toriyama -style you're going for. I've just never been big on them.

The shadow lines and the body look absolutely gorgeous and i'm jealous

 

[SumnNarutoRelated]

Focus on expressions and faces next i'd say, though that could just be the Akira Toriyama -style you're going for. I've just never been big on them.

The shadow lines and the body look absolutely gorgeous and i'm jealous

duly noted!

ill get those inks downpack if its the 2nd to last thing i do.

more so than anything, story>art and thats what I'm pushing for

thanks for the feedback mate

 

[Monxstaa]

oh nice good luck

 

[Nick01]

Pretty good. Keep it up.

 

[Byron123]

Congratulations for starting something so ambitious, keep doing your best.

 

[SumnNarutoRelated]

oh nice good luck

Pretty good. Keep it up.

Congratulations for starting something so ambitious, keep doing your best.

thank you brothers. I'm aiming to make this the best anime of all time

 

[Filosoofis]

Cool man keep us posted

 

[Marin]

The artwork is too scetchy and some panels look like scribbles, so work more on the details. You can use more screentones to cover up the blank places.

Also, it would be a good thing to find a webcomic platform of some sort and publish it there.