I created a manga!!

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I added a new page to my manga Tactile Therapy. Now go read it you bish... i don't do this ish for nada






All love is greatly appreciated!!
 

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Put the link in your sig so I can read it another time, I'm lazy now.
 

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I really like it actually. I just read it. Keep it up
 

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Great job, I applaud you for taking the effort of putting your work out there as not many people are courageous enough to do that. If I could make one comment it's that sometimes it was hard to figure out what was going on in some panels. It's the same kind of confusion that I get when reading One Piece (although being compared to a best-selling manga could be taken as a good thing). Overall good job though, I especially thought that you did good creating dialogue, which many people struggle with.
 

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Great job, I applaud you for taking the effort of putting your work out there as not many people are courageous enough to do that. If I could make one comment it's that sometimes it was hard to figure out what was going on in some panels. It's the same kind of confusion that I get when reading One Piece (although being compared to a best-selling manga could be taken as a good thing). Overall good job though, I especially thought that you did good creating dialogue, which many people struggle with.

haha me and One Piece mentioned in the same sentence?? my life is completed. yea but no you're right i get that a lot, especially in the beginning pages. the truth is the way I've written it is that there is no other way in which those pages would've not been confusing as they were purposely drawn that way.

i promise it'll all make sense very soon tho. Thanks again man for the comment
 

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Not acting big here but from someone who's also drawn their entire life. Very nice work man and good on you for having the balls for starting a manga.
 

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thank you man. that really means a lot to me. more than you know
ofc dude!
Great job, I applaud you for taking the effort of putting your work out there as not many people are courageous enough to do that. If I could make one comment it's that sometimes it was hard to figure out what was going on in some panels. It's the same kind of confusion that I get when reading One Piece (although being compared to a best-selling manga could be taken as a good thing). Overall good job though, I especially thought that you did good creating dialogue, which many people struggle with.

I agree with the "I don't know whats happening during some panels" comment. For the first 7 pages or so, I couldn't really figure out what stuff was. The drawing quality seemed to significantly improve over the course of the 30 some pages. Also I'm confused as to how/why Russia declared war. I thought the USA destroyed the meteorite with mass x, sending the thousands of shards back to space?
 

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ofc dude!


I agree with the "I don't know whats happening during some panels" comment. For the first 7 pages or so, I couldn't really figure out what stuff was. The drawing quality seemed to significantly improve over the course of the 30 some pages. Also I'm confused as to how/why Russia declared war. I thought the USA destroyed the meteorite with mass x, sending the thousands of shards back to space?

Thanks i appreciate that. Yea unfortunately the drawing process in the beginning was very tedious for me as i lack the proper materials to produce good content.

The russians declared war because they had two astronauts on board of the ISS when the US fired the nuke at the asteroid which destroyed the ISS in the process

edit: its on page 32
 
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