Hynata Hyuuga's first spar

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At the border of his village a small slope descend to a small lake, with lush vegetation. The view over the lake is breath taking with the sunset mirored in the lake with orange yellowish colours.
But she's ignoring all because she have to be concentrated at the chakra she sensed coming in her direction.
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  • Terrain: near the lake
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The chakra sensed earlier came from a beautiful girl who approached the village with unknown intentions, and Hynata knew that she had to be carefull and she cannot let her close to her hidden village.
As first move she activated Byakugan
Byakugan techniques


B rank

(Jūken: Hakke Sanjūni Shō) - Gentle Fist: Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: A maneuver that in effect is akin to a halved variant of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms but is able to be performed at 1.5x the user's current speed and accordingly, halts the flow of chakra that circulates in thirty-two tenketsu of the foe's chakra pathway system. The recipient of this move will be rendered unable to use more than 50 chakra in individual attacks, which includes those with applied passives, for three turns. Beyond that effect, the usage of this maneuver will reduce the victim's chakra supply and any accumulated senjutsu chakra by 10% for two turns.
and turned to the girl saying with her warm but strong voice while scanning her body to check the chakra flowing and the potential danger
Hi stranger, what are your business here?
 
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nice bio ^^
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The chakra sensed earlier came from a beautiful girl who approached the village with unknown intentions, and Hynata knew that she had to be carefull and she cannot let her close to her hidden village.
As first move she activated Byakugan
Byakugan techniques


B rank

(Jūken: Hakke Sanjūni Shō) - Gentle Fist: Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms
Type:
Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: A maneuver that in effect is akin to a halved variant of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms but is able to be performed at 1.5x the user's current speed and accordingly, halts the flow of chakra that circulates in thirty-two tenketsu of the foe's chakra pathway system. The recipient of this move will be rendered unable to use more than 50 chakra in individual attacks, which includes those with applied passives, for three turns. Beyond that effect, the usage of this maneuver will reduce the victim's chakra supply and any accumulated senjutsu chakra by 10% for two turns.
and turned to the girl saying with her warm but strong voice while scanning her body to check the chakra flowing and the potential danger
Hi stranger, what are your business here?
Sorry for the delay xD.

Red simply stood before her opponent, simply crossed her arms. With her right hand, she indicated the beginning of the bout. Would her opponent attack? Her eyes were odd..Red hadn't seen anything like it before. But she did take notice. Nonetheless, she would simply launch one kunai towards her opponent. This travels in a straight line towards the girl.
 

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Better late than never
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Responding at the shinobi's right hand movement Hynata did the same gesture, understanding from the beggining that the girl were not aggresive and the throwed kunai could be a kind of "let's see what you can do". In front of her the fearless kunoichi didn't know obviously about Byakugan's defense and Hynata had no intention to reveal it's secrets yet. The simple attack of a kunai throwing was for her amusing because she knew from the first movements of her opponent's hand that the girl will throw a kunai and saw it's trajectory like it was already drawed in the air.
Moving and rotating slightly her upper body she avoided the small kunai who pierced a tree behind her.
But the attack as simple as that means the self confidence of the user so Hynata didn't expect another move and performed the hand seals for her water release jutsu and a body of water formed in her palms creating a vortex which she blasted through her opponent.
(Suiton: Hahonryuu) - Water Style: Destruction Torrent Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: After waving the Boar → Dog → Ram handseals, a water vortex created in the palm of the user’s hand that can then be blasted forward creating a spiraling wall of water which can then be used to attack or defend.
Chakra 600-20=580
 

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Water manifested itself as the girl dodged the kunai with ease. Red would pay it no mind as the linear water movement came towards her. Focusing her Earth chakra, Red would manifest beneath her a wave of Earth. This allows her to move into the air with the earth itself, in an arc to her right. This of course, dodges the linear water based attack and allows her to come from her opponent's left side. From this wave, Red would cause a massive spike of Earth to emerge to aim and impale her foe once she gets close.

(Doton: Doryūha) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: After performing the required handseal sequence: Rat → Snake → Tiger the user creates and rides a wave of earth that can branch of to attack from a distance. The user can also use the technique to manipulate the terrain and trap the target by wrapping earth round their legs preventing them from moving

(Doton: Retsudo Tenshin) - Earth Release: Violent Heavenly Earth Needle
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user after after using earth release: earth flow wave, will perform the snake hand seal and then will create a large needle out of it to impale the opponent.
Note: Must use Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave beforehand.

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This is the moment when you see a bio's weaknesses, when you want to make a move that you could do but it's not there TT
I will update it as soon as this battle will end :)
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Even if the water could interfere in the visual field of anyone this is not the case with Hynata, hers Byakugan observing immediatly the chackra focused to perform a jutsu and she didn't expect it's finish to start her move, always looking at her opponent in her aerial trajectory and noticing the earth spike which it looked like a spear for her. To confuse the silent kunoichi who didn't reply at her question, Hynata made in rush the handseals and made 2 water clones. All three Hynatas spaced out and formed a semicircle around the girl throwing simultaneously an explosive kunai at her, all three kunais exploding and making a thick mist.

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique Rank:E Type:Supplementary Range:Short Chakra Cost:5 Damage Points:N/A Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user. Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder Rank:E Type:Supplementary Range:Short Chakra Cost:N/A Damage Points:N/A The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
Chakra 580 - 10 = 570

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Edited: i cannot be active for a while, can we froze the spar until i come back?
if not, is my loss.. I am sorry but rl is demanding my all self.
 
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With the launch of the kunai, and an inexplainable mist forming before her, Red would focus her Wind chakra to her chest. With an inhale, and a sudden exhale, Red would release the Wind towards her foe. This happens as she propels herself off the Earthen wave, allowing her to easily land on the ground, now getting closer to the girl. The wind blast allows her to blow back both the kunai, and the mist, nullifying it. Red would merely sigh as she says;

"I've come for your eyes, girl."

She states coldly, as she awaits her foes next response.

(Fūton: Gōkūhō) - Wind Release: Great Vacuum Cannon
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The users gathers his Fuuton chakra into the lungs to blow out a sphere of air at his target that can blow backwards the opponent and small objects around him.

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Surprised by the sudden wind who blowed away her mist and by the approach of the enemy, Hynata jumped forward for close taijutsu combat aiming for her opponent chakra points. Her leap towards Red brought her at less than one meter distance of the girl and her words sounded crystal clear and kinda offensive.
So you can talk! she whispered, more for herself, as a recognition of the enemy's words meaning.
Mantaining active her byakuan Hynata started her well known gentle fist taijutsu moving her hands with incredible speed gentle poking with her hands the vital chakra point of Red's body. She continued her move that she felt insufficient with Eight Trigrams Palm Grating Heaven, aiming at whickening her enemy and discourage her and also at making her unable to fight.
B rank
(Jūken: Hakke Sanjūni Shō) - Gentle Fist: Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: A maneuver that in effect is akin to a halved variant of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms but is able to be performed at 1.5x the user's current speed and accordingly, halts the flow of chakra that circulates in thirty-two tenketsu of the foe's chakra pathway system. The recipient of this move will be rendered unable to use more than 50 chakra in individual attacks, which includes those with applied passives, for three turns. Beyond that effect, the usage of this maneuver will reduce the victim's chakra supply and any accumulated senjutsu chakra by 10% for two turns.
Eight Trigrams Palm Grating Heaven
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B-S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20-40
Damage: 40-80
Description: A variant of Eight Trigrams Palm Revolving Heaven whereby the user follows the same process but also shapes the outputted chakra into razor sharp blades. Ergo, those struck by it are not repelled by concussive force but are instead subjected to being reduced to small shreds by coming into contact with what is akin to a giant revolving grater. Note: B-rank is short-range while each rank thereafter increase the range by one level.
Chakra 580 - 10 = 570 - 40 = 530
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Surprised by the sudden wind who blowed away her mist and by the approach of the enemy, Hynata jumped forward for close taijutsu combat aiming for her opponent chakra points. Her leap towards Red brought her at less than one meter distance of the girl and her words sounded crystal clear and kinda offensive.
So you can talk! she whispered, more for herself, as a recognition of the enemy's words meaning.
Mantaining active her byakuan Hynata started her well known gentle fist taijutsu moving her hands with incredible speed gentle poking with her hands the vital chakra point of Red's body. She continued her move that she felt insufficient with Eight Trigrams Palm Grating Heaven, aiming at whickening her enemy and discourage her and also at making her unable to fight.
B rank
(Jūken: Hakke Sanjūni Shō) - Gentle Fist: Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: A maneuver that in effect is akin to a halved variant of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms but is able to be performed at 1.5x the user's current speed and accordingly, halts the flow of chakra that circulates in thirty-two tenketsu of the foe's chakra pathway system. The recipient of this move will be rendered unable to use more than 50 chakra in individual attacks, which includes those with applied passives, for three turns. Beyond that effect, the usage of this maneuver will reduce the victim's chakra supply and any accumulated senjutsu chakra by 10% for two turns.
Eight Trigrams Palm Grating Heaven
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B-S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20-40
Damage: 40-80
Description: A variant of Eight Trigrams Palm Revolving Heaven whereby the user follows the same process but also shapes the outputted chakra into razor sharp blades. Ergo, those struck by it are not repelled by concussive force but are instead subjected to being reduced to small shreds by coming into contact with what is akin to a giant revolving grater. Note: B-rank is short-range while each rank thereafter increase the range by one level.
Chakra 580 - 10 = 570 - 40 = 530
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The fabled Byakugan, Red thought as her foe came closer. With her mastery of the Earth element, Red would cause the very ground to rumble as the girl approaches, throwing off her footing as she simultaneously stepped back with her right foot, pivoting off it as she causes her upper body to swing as she spins her body. As she spins, Red grabs her unusually large sword from its sheath and swings it laterally at her disoriented foe, who is at this point, rather close to her. This is aimed at her mid section, aimed at cleaving her abdomen and delivering quite some cutting damage.

"Resistance is futile."

(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.

(Suiken) - Drunken Fist
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 30
Description: This unusual taijutsu style is a unique style of combat Drunken Fist Fighters become human powerhouses who'll strike unpredictability, with no inhibitions, an explosive fury and without any second thoughts about their actions. The user can either make themselves drunk or imitate the method by use of swaying and uneven balance on their feet to attack their opponents a total of 12 variant attacks.

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Followed, like mirored in her right and left, by her two water clones, Hinata noticed the ground's changing structure with her Byakugan activated so she replaced his own body with her right clone meanwhile she lifted her real body in midair, taking support from the clone, and making a tall leap over the unknown girl landing on the ground close behind her.
The left clone throws a single big water droplet imbued with chakra who makes it invisible in the air, aiming for the solar plexus of the girl, not to kill her but to knock her out. The other clone receives the hit of the girl's sword and become a wave of water, splashing the ground..
In the same time Hinata, who is now behind the girl, uses a water prison jutsu after performing needed handseals, with the intention of ending the battle without any damage from both parts.

Kawarimi no jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: E
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 5
Damage: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. The technique is a mix between high speed movement and the use of the transformation technique but has its limits.

(Suiton: Shizuka Yari) - Water Release: Droplet Spear
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: Using their skills with water release, the user creates an orb of water in their hand which they can then release in the form of multiple spearing streams, that they can use to attack their enemy from multiple directions or in spirals.

(Suiton: Funshutsu Mizu Kinko) - Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 20 Damage: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
 

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It seemed she had a penchant for survival, capable of even surviving close range encounters. Red smiled, this was turning out to be quite interesting. As she slashes destroying one clone, the girl disappeared quickly replaced with a solid block of wood. Through quick enough reactions, Red notices the formation of Water based droplets aimed to skewer her and with a thrust of her sword, a single green arrow would burst forth splitting into two parts.

One part would be willed to utterly decimate the water technique as it hits it with the same strength, as the other is willed towards the girl herself, aiming to interrupt her from performing her technique (should you continue with Gushing Water Imprisonment, the arrow would strike you, due to close proximity).

Simultaneously, Red would pivot off her foot once more as she continues her swing, this time aimed at the clone. Through extending her range, Red performs a wide scaled crescent shaped arc with her sword, capable of reaching the clone with ease due to both the large size of the sword as well as the technique utilized.

Left with only her and the original girl, Red would merely smile as she says;

"Give up, girl."

(Kenjutsu: Sōdo Yajirushi) - Sword Art: Sword Arrow
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will channel raw chakra into their sword and perform what seems to be a simple thrust. But, as the user fully extends their arm, they'll use shape manipulation to release the stored chakra in the form of a green arrow that measures about 1m in length that travels quickly. The arrow is also incredibly sharp, so much so that it's able to split apart techniques of the same rank and below. As the chakra is released the user can will it to split into four parts in order to attack multiple opponents, or a single opponent from different sides.

Note: Only useable twice per battle.
Note: Courtesy of Ańbu Juniør

(Kumo-Ryū Mikazuki Kiri) - Cloud-Style Crescent Moon Beheading
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 60
Description: The user utilizes a large extent of their physical capabilities to swing their sword in a single large arc, which occurs with such ferocious velocity that the technique can be employed in situations where only a very limited time to react is available. The swing can be used to counter attacks from multiple opponents simultaneously. The technique receives its name due to the entire movement being reminiscent of a crescent moon.

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i don't want to give up. I wrote an answer but it disspeard after a while. Maybe it wasn't the best answer. I will try again.
I have some questions, i will answer independent of these though.
1. how come the splitted arrow went one in front to the clone and one in back to Hinata?
2. Why the water prison jutsu doesn't affect Red at all? because if this is not an effective jutsu idk why is listed.
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Hinata realised immediatly that she needs a change in the battle pace, all her attacks being read and countered by the unknown girl. While the girl were in her rotation with her menacing sword pointed at the waterclones, she mantained the waterprison with her right hand, and with the left concentrated chackra in the top of her index repelling the splitted arrow aimed at her. Due to the byakugan, Hinata saw that arrow immediatly and knew it's force and intensity, balancing in her finger an equal amount of chakra.
The same technique Hinata used with the right hand aimed at the tenketsu point of the girl, his body in rotation allowing her to gentle hit many points with her right hand, with her all palm for best result. The hand movements were so quick that an outsider couldn't have been follow Hinata's right hand movement inside the water prison.
Also, she was looking at the girl's sword carefully, to can counter or avoid it's blade. She concentrated chakra again in left hand for defense.

Type: Offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: Targeting a single chakra point, the user delivers a two-fingered strike at the opponent, in an attempt to plug the chakra that's being used and halt its flow.

Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40 Description: This attack consists of a quick, precise thrust of the user's palm to an opponent's body. Like other Gentle Fist techniques, it sends chakra into the target to cause internal damage that paralyzes them for one turn.
Type: Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A (+10 if the opponent makes direct contact)
Description: The user exerts chakra from several tenketsu from a single part of their body, this chakra is gathered roughly ten centimeters away from the user's skin and forms a small shield of chakra, no bigger than twice the size of an average palm conveniently useable as a way to block tai/kenjutsu attacks(upto B-Rank) but is weak to elemental techniques as it's merely raw chakra which does not require advanced chakra manipulation. If the opponent makes physical contact with the shield they will suffer slight damage across the part of their skin which connected with it. The shield itself is no bigger than twice the size of an average palm and can block Tai/Kenjutsu attacks up to B-Rank as well as Elemental attacks up to C-Rank within reason.

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