NaruAwesome
Active member
Wassup nb, so I was reviewing one of my older songs and wanted some advice, so whatever you think will help then post it, thanks
You know that you're what I want
and you know I'm not trying to front
cause God wants you
to be with me
to show you the world
that we could see.. yeah
Girl, I know that times have been hard
But if we hold on we can go far
cause God told me
that we're meant to be
and that true love is
what we need
cause girl, we really coulda been something else
I mean you one touch from you makes my- heart- melt
I'll open up to show you my- true-self
Baby when you left this is what my heart felt!!(gets louder)
Chorus
What' is sunshine without the rain
I need yo love to hide my pain
cause everyday
it hurts to see
when you're with him
and its not me
I'm crying out to you but no return
I should just do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that I can see
what we were we whatwe use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all I can see
what we use to be-eeee
I still don't know what I'm looking for
a way out whn I know theres is no door
I need to find
that one soul
but I know she's the girl
to comfort me
But she was just so divine (mood lightening up, beat rises)
had every curve to the perfect design
but when our love was true
she found someone new
and now what am
suppose to do,ooo! (beats gets louder)
cause girl, we really coulda had been something else
I mean one touch from you makes my- heart- melt
I'll open up to show you my- true-self
Baby whe you left this is what my heart felt!!(gets louder)
Chorus
*What's sunshine without the rain!!!
I need yo love to hide my pain!!!
cause everyday
it hurts to see
when you're with him
and its not me!!!
I'm crying out to you but no return
I should just do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that I can see
what we were we whatwe use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all I can see
what we use to be-eeee!!!!!
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!*
(regular voice but groove to the beat)
If you were a song
I'll play u until my ipod's dead
If u were air
I'll hold u in until my face turned red
If you were my guitar
I'll tune u until the perfect pitch
If you were my girl
you wouldn't have to worry who you're with. Hoo!!
chorus
*What's sunshine without the rain!!!
I need yo love to hide my pain!!!
cause everyday
it hurts to see
when you're with him
and its not me!!!
I'm crying out to you but no return!!1
I should just do usher and let it burn!!!!
cause this is all
that u can see
what we were we what!!!*
repeat chorus
we use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all u can see
what we use to be,yeah
and you know I'm not trying to front
cause God wants you
to be with me
to show you the world
that we could see.. yeah
Girl, I know that times have been hard
But if we hold on we can go far
cause God told me
that we're meant to be
and that true love is
what we need
cause girl, we really coulda been something else
I mean you one touch from you makes my- heart- melt
I'll open up to show you my- true-self
Baby when you left this is what my heart felt!!(gets louder)
Chorus
What' is sunshine without the rain
I need yo love to hide my pain
cause everyday
it hurts to see
when you're with him
and its not me
I'm crying out to you but no return
I should just do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that I can see
what we were we whatwe use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all I can see
what we use to be-eeee
I still don't know what I'm looking for
a way out whn I know theres is no door
I need to find
that one soul
but I know she's the girl
to comfort me
But she was just so divine (mood lightening up, beat rises)
had every curve to the perfect design
but when our love was true
she found someone new
and now what am
suppose to do,ooo! (beats gets louder)
cause girl, we really coulda had been something else
I mean one touch from you makes my- heart- melt
I'll open up to show you my- true-self
Baby whe you left this is what my heart felt!!(gets louder)
Chorus
*What's sunshine without the rain!!!
I need yo love to hide my pain!!!
cause everyday
it hurts to see
when you're with him
and its not me!!!
I'm crying out to you but no return
I should just do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that I can see
what we were we whatwe use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all I can see
what we use to be-eeee!!!!!
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!*
(regular voice but groove to the beat)
If you were a song
I'll play u until my ipod's dead
If u were air
I'll hold u in until my face turned red
If you were my guitar
I'll tune u until the perfect pitch
If you were my girl
you wouldn't have to worry who you're with. Hoo!!
chorus
*What's sunshine without the rain!!!
I need yo love to hide my pain!!!
cause everyday
it hurts to see
when you're with him
and its not me!!!
I'm crying out to you but no return!!1
I should just do usher and let it burn!!!!
cause this is all
that u can see
what we were we what!!!*
repeat chorus
we use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all u can see
what we use to be,yeah
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