Hows my song

NaruAwesome

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so how is my song, i recently wrote it

Who needs the truth
when life work well with lies
yeah, that’s what i thought was right
until i had ta realize

girl, i thought i played the game
but now looking back i see
the only thing u wanted was
for me to be me

but now i understand
and i wanna make amends
i gotta do right by u
i can’t go through this again

i gotta change my ways
but i don’t know what to do
i’m sorry for what i did
baby i didn’t mean to hurt u


CAUSE I STILL LOVE U

AND I WISH THAT U KNEW

THAT IF I COULD TAKE BACK WHAT I DID

I’LL BACK IN TIME AND START OVER NEW


CAN’T GET U OUTTA MA HEAD

BUT I GOTTA MOVE ON INSTEAD

BUT SOMETHING KEEPS LEADING ME BACK TO U

I’M TEARING DOWN THE LIES AND HERES THE TRUTH

OHHHH,.. GIRL!

I SPILLING OUT THE LIES AND HERES THE TRUTH

YEEEAAAAH!

NO MORE LIES AND HERES THE TRUTH

looking back now
i noticed what i miss
looking into your eyes
and the passion in your kiss

i wish i had that back
shoulda thought ’bout i did
shouldn’t have cheated on u
but i know u don’t wanna reminisce

but now i understand
and i wanna make amends
no other girl compares to u
in ma heart you’re a 10 outta 10

i gotta change my ways
but i don’t know what to do
look at me now! ma heart is true!
i’ll do anything to come back to u!


CAUSE I STILL LOVE U

AND I WISH THAT U KNEW

THAT IF I COULD TAKE BACK WHAT I DID

I’LL BACK IN TIME AND START OVER NEW


CAN’T GET U OUTTA MA HEAD

BUT I GOTTA MOVE ON INSTEAD

BUT SOMETHING KEEPS LEADING ME BACK TO U

I’M TEARING DOWN THE LIES AND HERES THE TRUTH

OHHHH,.. GIRL!

yeah, I SPILLING OUT THE LIES AND HERES THE TRUTH

YEEEAAAAH! oooh,

NO MORE LIES AND HERES THE TRUTH

baby, something keeps me,
running back to u!
i don’t know what it is
but i apologize , i do, i do!
so i’m calling you now
ta ask if your okay!
since you been gone
i’ve been missing u each dayyyyyyyyyy!!!!!


CAUSE I STILL LOVE U

AND I WISH THAT U KNEW

THAT IF I COULD TAKE BACK WHAT I DID

I’LL BACK IN TIME AND START OVER NEW


CAN’T GET U OUTTA MA HEAD

BUT I GOTTA MOVE ON INSTEAD

BUT SOMETHING KEEPS LEADING ME BACK TO U

I’M TEARING DOWN THE LIES AND HERES THE TRUTH
repeat chorus


OHHHH,.. GIRL!

yeah, I SPILLING OUT THE LIES AND HERES THE TRUTH
YEEEAAAAH! oooh,

NO MORE LIES AND HERES THE TRUTH
 

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Meh, you sound sprung lol

I say put a slow jam guitar rhythm maybe slow rock with a sick bassline and it'll be all good.

You ever heard of fruity loops studio?
 

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Download the Fl studio trial and make a beat for it. It's hard to use but it's madness when you learn how to use it.
 
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