Hows my new song?-please read

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i have it copyrighted, so no stealing :), how is it guys, it can either be folk, acoustic, or r&b

Yo, girl, you know that you’re what i want
and you know that’ll I’ll never front
cause God wants you
to be with me
to show you the world
that we could see

And, I know that times have been hard
but if u hold on we could go far
cause God told me
that we’re meant to be
and that true love
is what we need

Cause girl we really could of been something el-else
I mean one touch from you makes m-my heart melt
I’ll open up to you to show you my true self
BABY WHEN YOU LEFT ME THIS IS WHAT MA HEART FELT

*chorus*
What is sunshine without the rain,
cause I need the clouds to hide my pain
cause everyday
it hurts to see
when you’re with him
and it’s not me!!!

I’ve cried out to you but no return
maybe I should do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that I can see
what we were
and what we use to be
ohhhhhhh!!!......
what we use to be...... (gentle voice, more calm)
that all I can see....
what we use to be....eeeeee
*chorus*

I still don’t know what I’m looking for
a way out when I know theres no door
I need to find
that one soul
but i know shes the girl
to com-fort- me

But man she was just so divine
And God knows I wanted her to be mine
but when our love was true
she found some one new
and know what am I
suppose to doooooo, ooooooooohhhhh!!!

Cause girl we really could of been something el-else!!!!!!
I mean one touch from you makes m-my heart melt!!!!!!!
I’ll open up to you to show you my true self!!!!
BABY WHEN YOU LEFT ME THIS IS WHAT MA HEART FELT!!!!! girl!!

*chorus*
What is sunshine without the rain,
cause I need the clouds to hide my pain
cause everyday
it hurts to see
when you’re with him
and it’s not me!!!!!

I’ve cried out to you but no return
maybe I should do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that I can see
what we were
and what we use to be
ohhhhhhh!!!......
what we use to beeeeee!!!!!...... (gentle voice, more calm)
that all I can see....
what we use to beeeeeee!!!! yeahhhhh!!!!
*chorus*

if you were air
I’ll hold you in until my face turned red
If you were a song
I’ll play you until my ipod’s dead
If you were my guitar
I’ll tune you to the perfect pitch!!!!
If you were my girl
you wouldn’t have to worry who you’re with, ohhhhh yeah!
*chorus*
What is sunshine without the rain,
cause I need the clouds to hide my pain
cause everyday
when you’re with him
this is what
my heart sing!!!

I’ve cried out to you but no return
maybe I should do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that I can see
what we were
and what we use to be
ohhhhhhh!!!......

reprat from top of chorus

what we use to be...... (gentle voice, more calm)
that all I can see....
what we use to be....eeeeee yeahhhhh!!!!
*chorus*
 
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