How To Fix Naruto Shippuden (PERSONAL CHANGES)

[Bad Touch Yakushi]

Sai dying like that? He needs to have more character development before dying off.

The existing manga gave him plenty of development. He learned the meaning of bonds, rebelled against Danzo even with his tongue seal and begun to side with Team Kakashi, even going so far as being accepted by Captain Kakashi. His character development arc ended with the fight with Shin, the flashback and the closure ended there.

Remember in this version he also plays a MAJOR part in the Konoha Shut-down arc.

 

[BerryDerange]

I didn't like it. I enjoy Kishimoto's version most of all of course. This becomes a normal story with a normal ending. If this was naruto I would feel it's a bit cliche. Good effort though. Naruto is somewhat perfect the way it is.

 

[BerryDerange]

Correction: It is perfect the way it is. People just nag for the sake of nagging.

 

[Bad Touch Yakushi]

I didn't like it. I enjoy Kishimoto's version most of all of course. This becomes a normal story with a normal ending. If this was naruto I would feel it's a bit cliche. Good effort though. Naruto is somewhat perfect the way it is.

Fair enough. Again it's not me whining, it's just the personal changes I would make.

And I can assure you Naruto WILL have a cliche ending. Probably better than mine but cliche either way.

 

[Infinite Akatsuki]

really enjoyed it...good job!

 

[Kiaba]

I think what u said is awesome but the problem i ave is that most if not all of the epic fights need some more improvement,i mean look in the games how certain fight scenes are construct they are even better than the episode itself

 

[Bad Touch Yakushi]

I think what u said is awesome but the problem i ave is that most if not all of the epic fights need some more improvement,i mean look in the games how certain fight scenes are construct they are even better than the episode itself

Oh obviously. The game has much better presentation of the early Shippuden fights, I even recommended skipping the anime and just playing Ninja Storm 2 to my friend lol- it actually tells the story better.

Yeah the improved versions of the fights would be here. Other than maybe the amplified Kakazu fight- because as awesome as it is....I don't kill Kakazu in my version. Not just in that arc anyhow.

 

[Xāvî1]

Great thread

just for the note you made a simple mistake that is put chikara arc after the kage summit arc

 

[Bad Touch Yakushi]

Great thread

just for the note you made a simple mistake that is put chikara arc after the kage summit arc

Thank you!

Oh? What's the problem there?

 

[phantomlord22]

nice thread
good job
it seems interesting!

 

[XantoS]

TBH I really wanted Kimimaro to live...nice thread btw

 

[~WastelandSociety~]

Naruto story is perfect just the way it is.

 

[Bad Touch Yakushi]

Naruto story is perfect just the way it is.

whatever you say

 

[BarrelRoll]

tho i want a dark eding for naruto, i like your ending story too

 

[Jack Spicer]

Simple: Get a time machine and fix the war arc.

 

[Bad Touch Yakushi]

tho i want a dark eding for naruto, i like your ending story too

An alternative one is that Naruto dies and/or sacrifices himself. His death is what brings peace to the ninja world. I LOVE that idea.

The one I had is almost a dark ending, Sasuke and Naruto are on the brink of killing themselves when they both stop at the last second.

 

[Amaterasuice]

I would've made different changes, but it was quite good!