[Raiton] How shocking.

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walks up to the training field and sees her student sleeping lazily. Shaking her head slightly, she molds lightning chakra in her pointer finger on her right hand.

Touching her student's forehead, she shocks him awake. Nothing too powerful, though.

"Good, you're awake. I'm Aigis the Mandalore, your teacher."

"I hope you had a good nap, because there's no rest for a while."

"Before we continue, let's go over the basics."

"Since you're quite new to this, tell me what a shinobi is, as well as the concept of chakra and ninjutsu."


Her voice was curt and efficient. It was just the way she was as a person.
 

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As Mangetsu has a great affinity to water he is quite shocked by the raiton chakra.

"Ouch that's something, hello Aigis sensei."

"Um shinobi are like elite warrior assassins who make up most of the military strength in our area. Shinobi usually live in hidden villages where they are paid to carry out a variety of missions and where they train to be a shinobi. Hidden villages are governed by a kage along with a counsel consisting of village elders as well as the top shinobi of the village. Shinobi use chakra to perform jutsu.

Chakra is the power that comes from your spirit. You use chakra whenever you put effort into anything. We have a chakra system where the chakra runs through like veins. The ends of the chakra pathways are where chakra is pushed out. These are called tenketsu. We also have chakra gates or limiters which slow down the chakra flow so that the chakra pathways do not rupture. Elemental chakra is where you give a certain nature to the chakra which explains why we say the phrase "chakra nature". The raiton chakra nature is produced by quickly resonating vibrations.

Ninjutsu is where we use chakra to perform some sort of action. Most ninjutsu require hand seals. Hand seals partially tell the body how to use the chakra."


Mangetsu sips from his water bottle.
 

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Aigis listened to Mangetsu's explanation. Quite textbook, in her opinion. She did have certain expectations, and he had managed to meet them sufficiently.

"Remember that each shinobi has a Nindo; a 'Ninja Way', that outlines their beliefs and ideals, molding their disposition and influencing their actions. Never lose your way, Mangetsu-kun."

"There are two types of chakra: nature chakra that's molded for elemental usage, and your normal chakra, which is used for basic jutsus. External sources of energy like Senjutsu exist, but that's more in depth. The history of chakra is extensive; it's quite fascinating and detailed."

"Ninjutsu allows us to perform feats that regular humans aren't capable of doing under normal circumstances, like walking on water. Hand seals mold the chakra, you are correct."

"Now, a couple more questions and exercises before we continue with the techniques. I want you to tell me everythign you know of the lightning element. It may seem trivial, but having a solid foundation is key here. I will fill in any gaps you may leave out."
 

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"Hmm well the chakra uses high frequency vibrations to bring out that chakra nature. It has a powerful piercing effect as well as a paralyzing effect. It's energy but it doesn't have a physical force like earth or water."

"Are you wearing a tie? It goes good with your robot outfit. Hahaha... o_O"
 

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"I'll need a little more than that, Mangetsu-kun. What are its strengths? Weaknesses? Famous users, and Kekkei Genkais that use lightning as a component?"


Aigis raised an eyebrow. There was a slightly awkward silence after Mangetsu's second, snarky comment.
 
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"Cough cough, haha excuse me... by the way, you look good senpai. :sweat:"

"Alright let's see... Raiton is strong against water, earth, crystal, lava, steel, blast, scorch, sand, kaguya techniques, wood, ice and sometimes storm. It is weak against wind, and dark... op much?"

"The most famous lightning users would be the raikage and his lightning armor as well as Kakashi with his raikiri."

"Raikiri is a component of swift, sound, magnetism, and storm."

"Because it is strong against water, raiton can be used after a suiton jutsu for greater effect."
 
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"Thank you." Aigis said, taking the compliment. Perhaps she was admittedly quite good looking...

"See? That wasn't so hard, was it? Pretty straightforward. Let's have one more exercise before we continue with the first set of techniques..."

She handed Mangetsu a small, square piece of chakra paper, with a distinct texture.

"Basically, channel your chakra through your chakra system and into the paper. But before you do that, visualize in your mind what lightning is to you. How powerful, direct, and high in energy it is. Think of its properties and nature... things that our five senses perceive when we think of lightning. Make sure you have a vivid image of what it is. Become one with it in your thoughts, and then, mold your chakra to shape it into lightning, or Raiton, chakra. When you channel your Raiton chakra successfully through the paper, you will cause it to wrinkle, and perhaps even vaporize."

"It's quite abstract, but I'm sure you can handle it."
She said, with an encouraging tone.

"And when you're done, give me an explanation on the differences between shape and nature manipulation, and how they are used together to perform ninjutsu."

"Ask questions if you have any..."


Aigis watched Mangetsu with a strong gaze.
 

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Mangetsu takes the piece of paper between two fingers and focuses on the paper intensely. Mangetsu visualized the crackling of electricity, the speed and power of the energy. He tightens his muscles suddenly, focusing chakra into the paper, trying to bring about the feeling of the raiton chakra, with its high frequency vibrations. However, instead of the appropriate response, the paper only becomes soaked with water.

"I hope those aren't expensive..." :p

Having tried with four more pieces of paper Mangetsu finally succeeds, making the paper wrinkle, having learned how to feel it through better.

"Alright that was easy. Let's see now. Nature manipulation is what gives chakra certain attributes. Raiton acts differently than other chakra natures. Shape manipulation is where you control that chakra to do something, to do the action. You use it to move the chakra aroundand shape it. The exercise with the paper involves nature manipulation to give it the properties of raiton and shape manipulation to use that chakra on the paper."
 

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Watching as Mangetsu put in his best efforts to try and manipulate the chakra paper, she acknowledged his tenacity. Even if he had failed once, he didn't give up. That was a good quality to have.

"Good work. I'm sure you'll acclimate to the feeling once we go through a bunch of these techniques. So let us begin taking our first steps."

"Now, the D-ranks are very basic and simple, so I'll have you simply perform them. When we get to the higher ranks, that's when we'll start analyzing them."

"The first one is simple. Gather Raiton chakra in your hands, and use your shape manipulation to change them into small, concentrated bolts of lightning. Then, you'll fire them off at your targets. Fast and efficient, if not necessarily powerful."

"Hit the targets over there."


Aigis pointed to a set of three targets behind them. Two were at short range (5 meters) from Mangetsu, and the last one was mid range (10 meters).

(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.
 

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"Well alright. Might wanna step back..."

Mangetsu goes into the chidori stance with his left hand grabbing his wrist. Mangetsu then spends almost a minute charging up his chakra until some bolts start to travel around his hand. He then makes a slicing motion with his hand through the air and sends the bolts of lightning at the farthest target, barely missing it and going into the ground. After trying it several more times Mangetsu gets the hang of it eventually.

Mangetsu falls onto his back in the grass and sips from his water bottle.

"Geez this raiton stuff doesn't like to cooperate. By the way, is raiton your main chakra thingy senpai?"
 

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Mangetsu performed the first technique in a somewhat dramatic fashion, using the Chidori stance. Interesting. Aigis could see her student's perceived difficulty with Raiton... he was a Hozuki, after all. But this was what training was for; to mold fresh students into effective fighting machines.

"Yes, lightning is quite hard to tame. Remember to always keep your focus and concentrate on bending it to your will with shape manipulation."

"Now, if by 'main chakra thingy', you mean my mastery or specialty... it is not. Raiton is fast and destructive, but I would prefer using elements that are more well balanced. Each element has its own style that few people take advantage of. When you gain real experience, you will know what I mean."

"The next D-rank will have you concentrating your Raiton chakra in your hands. I prefer using my dominant one, but it makes little difference. Slam your hand onto the ground, and channel a surge of electricity through the ground and aimed at your opponent's feet. If you're successful, you'll be able to deliver a shock to them, although it only reaches up to short-range, so be aware of that."

"Try and shock me with this jutsu. Go ahead, don't worry. If I die... well, that's on you."
she said with a small, almost playful, giggle.

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.
 
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Hearing the challenge Mangetsu gives a toothy grin thinking he has caught on to his senpai. Jumping up from the ground feeling energized he puts his left hand on his wrist focusing the sharp raiton chakra into his hand using the shape manipulation to bring it out, so that it crackles around his hand. Mangetsu suddenly takes his left hand which was concealing a smoke bomb and flicks it at Aigis. Mangetsu then slams his hand onto the ground leading his chakra to leap across the ground in a surge towards his senpai's position. After that he charges up the raiton chakra in his right hand once again and swipes it through the air making the chakra leap through the air to his senpai whom he expects to be emerging from the smoke by now. Mangetsu's arm feels slightly numb from using two raiton jutsu so quickly.

(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.
 

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As the smoke bomb explodes at her feet, Aigis doesn't move, instead, she notes Mangetsu's quick thinking. The lightning surge reaches her feet, but her Mandalorian Armor easily shrugs it off, almost absorbing it. The subsequent follow-up lightning bolts hit her body, but they are absorbed as well.

She emerged, wafting the smoke away and coughing a little, but otherwise unharmed. She giggled a little.

"Apologies... I should have told you... my Mandalorian Armor grants me immunity to C-rank or lower Lightning jutsus. But I commend that combination of yours. Fast and easy to execute."

(really, though, it is an ability of the Mandalorians ^^)

"Alright, this is the final D-rank Lightning technique! Channel your Raiton chakra into your palm. You'll then swipe your plam across your body, releasing a wave of lightning bolts at your targets as you do so. It covers a wide area and can hit more than one target."

"If you ever need to take a break, tell me. Don't want you to overdo it; this is just training, after all."
she said this with a concerned tone. Lightning and Water never really did mix well together...

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user moves his palm unleashing a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.
 

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"Dang, I thought you'd get off the ground somehow."

"Don't worry about me."
:p

Mangetsu holds his hand up next to his chest and creates raiton chakra using the qualities of lightning. He then shapes it into electricity sparkling around his hand. Swiping his hand through the air Mangetsu sends the bolts of lightning at the three targets, spreading them out so that each target is hit.

"Hey wait a minute, I think you just taught me the same jutsu thrice."

Mangetsu takes a sip of water. Lol
 

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"Yes, lightning is relatively one dimensional. Fast, powerful, but somewhat predictable by more hardened shinobi."

"Let's begin with the C-rank techniques. I will help you along the way if you have questions. We will do two techniques per round... if you want to go slower, let me know."

"The first technique will have you performing the Tiger, Snake, and Dog hand seals. Run a Raiton current through your hand, which will then burst and release from it, creating an attack that can hit multiple individuals. One interesting thing to note is that this lightning current can avoid obstacles and hit your targets. The range and speed of it are quite decent, too."


Aigis created a Shadow Clone of herself, which hid behind a tree. Mangetsu knew she was behind the tree; Aigis wanted him to try the technique by maneuvering it around the tree to hit her clone.

( Raiton: Raigeki) - Lightning Release: Electric Attack
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing the required hand seals Tiger → Snake → Dog the user creates an electric current from their hand that can hit multiple individuals at the same time. Furthermore, it extends into incredible distances and can avoid obstacles.

"After that, create a wave of electricity from your hands. Same principles as previous techniques, but what's different here is if your opponent or target is on a water source, the damage of the water and lightning techniques both increase, and range can change as well. Try it on my clone who's standing on the lake over there."

She created a second Shadow Clone, and the clone applied chakra on her feet to stand on the lake.

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Short-Long depending on the water technique)
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+10 to a water technique when used in conjunction)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

"From now on, I also want you to give me the advantages and disadvantages of each technique. Just tell me what is IMPORTANT... I don't expect essays. If you've got any opinions or questions, ask away."
 
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"Alright, C-ranks already!" He exclaimed. "And hand seals, pretty advanced stuff eh?"

Mangetsu takes a moment to remember the hand movements and then performs the three hand seals, taking care to do them correctly. He places his hand onto his right arm and gathers raiton chakra in his right hand. Mangetsu changes the raiton chakra into a large arc which jumps from his hand, bending around the tree to reach the clone.

"I like that one. Hope that armor works well enough."

"Advantages... this seems pretty good to me. You don't even need line of sight to multiple long distance targets."

"Disadvantages would be that it can't be used without the hand seals."

"Hey look a lake!"
XD

Mangetsu jumps onto the water using chakra on from the feet to stand atop the water. Gathering raiton chakra in his hand, Mangetsu shapes it into electricity gathered around his hand. He slaps his hand on the surface of the water, releasing the electricity in a wave towards Aigis.

"So I suppose advantages are that when there is something to connect to the opponent with water then this is harder to counter. It's good to use with suiton."

"Disadvantages would be that it can depend on the effectiveness of the suiton I suppose."

"My questions are, is this better for countering doton? And can I destroy trees and stuff with it?"
:p
 

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"To answer your question, I would say the first jutsu in that previous set is better attuned to destroying Earth, since it's more focused, versus the second technique, which is more widespread. Theoretically, you could cause lightning burns to trees... but don't worry too much about that unless you're fighting a Mokuton user."

"Remember, performing hand seals can slow one down in battle, so be prepared to always anticipate and counter a jutsu that forms. Not having to perform handseals, or performing less handseals, makes your combinations and attacks faster."

"Now, before we continue, I want to give you some quick notes on elemental interactions and how they're used. Take this piece of paper, read it, understand it. I'll be asking you questions periodically as well."


Elements are strong and weak against each other. Earth is strong against Water. Water is strong against Fire. Fire is strong against Wind. Wind is strong against Lightning. Lightning is strong against Earth. Knowing these fundamentals will shape your counters in a battle.

There are some general rules when using elemental strengths and weaknesses. Here are some basics.

1. If you use an elemental technique, and your opponent counters with its weakness, they can generally use techniques that are a rank lower in order to cancel it out. Higher ranked techniques will overwhelm your jutsu. So, for example, if I were to use a B-ranked Fire technique, you could use C-ranked Water techniques to cancel out the fire. Anything higher ranked than that will overwhelm my Fire technique and continue towards me, and anything lower ranked than that will not affect my Fire technique. This only applies if the jutsus clashing have elemental relationships.

2. When elements that are neutral to each other clash, or if they are of the same element, In general, they should be approximately of the same rank in order to cancel each other out. However, it also depends on the jutsu and its usage.

Disclaimer: these are universally followed, but that doesn't mean they are 100% ironclad. In battle, the key is the USAGE and DESCRIPTION of how you use a technique. If you can provide a counter that makes sense, you will be able to gain the advantage.

Aigis waited for Mangetsu to go over the details. Afterward, she spoke again.

"Onward. This next jutsu is... Lightning Armor, for lack of a better term. Channel your kneaded Raiton chakra throughout your body, and release it from your chakra points in a large, uncontrolled current around you. Then, use your shape manipulation to cause this current to mold around your body, covering you in an armor similar to the Raikage's. This armor will protect you from basic tools and weak jutsus. However, after one attack, the armor will disperse."

"In the description, it says the jutsu can be used offensively and defensively. Give me examples of how you would use it in both ways."


(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.

Once Mangetsu completed the first jutsu's performance and analysis, Aigis beckoned him to walk over to the nearby cliff (yes, there's a cliff there, because plot >_>").

"Form the Snake, and upside down Tiger hand seals. Clap your hands together and mold your Raiton chakra. Press your hand at the base of this cliff, allowing your Raiton chakra to be sent through it like a wave that shocks upwards. The cool thing here, is that it can cause the rocks to dislodge and run down, like a rock avalanche. I think the rocks may be electrically charged... so be careful about that."

"Try it out. Just be sure not to kill us."
she said, that last part being totally deadpan and serious.

(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake → Upside down Tiger → Hands clapped together when near a cliff , the user causes stone and rock to become dislodged and rain down on anyone below it by releasing a wave of electrical energy which weakens the rock and makes it fall as it crumbles. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work.
 

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Mangetsu skims through the paper.

Mangetsu thoroughly studies the piece of paper and makes an origami shuriken which he throws into a dart board floating in the air.

"Alright I guess I'll just dive into the next jutsu now."

Mangetsu makes a one handed seal, gathering raiton chakra throughout his body. He gives this chakra the properties of lightning and shapes it so that it makes a field of electricity all over his body. As a mosquito tries to land on Mangetsu, it is instantly fried. Having defended against the mosquito's attack, the jutsu automatically deactivates.

"Let's see I'd use it for countering raiton of equal rank quickly and easily. I'd also use it with taijutsu but I doubt I'd need it though. However, because this only does its job against one thing this can be negated with a very weak attack. I also doubt this could even defend against any doton."

"Ah yes the legendary moving cliff. I'm sure it's a giant turtle or something as always."


Mangetsu performs the hand seals slowly and focuses Raiton chakra into his feet. He then sends this energy through the ground as far away as possible and makes it climb up the cliff using high frequency waves of electricity to dislodge much of the earth making it fall down like an avalanche.

"See I didn't hurt anybody. Alright, advantages... You can turn somebody's doton against themselves I guess? Disadvantages... Hey where'd that cliff go, it disappeared! I was gonna practice on it. Oh well too bad, can't use the jutsu anymore."
 

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Aigis noted Mangetsu's cheeky humor. At least he tried to make things interesting. She removed the origami shuriken and refolded the paper in a few quick, dexterous moves, pocketing it.

"That little insect wasn't trying to attack you, but I suppose that's a practical application of the technique."

"However, you CAN defend against Doton techniques up to B-rank, just once, though. So, say I trap you in an Earth prison. You could use this lightning armor to destroy the prison, although it would deactivate after doing so. What makes this jutsu unique is that it's very fast to perform and use. Keep that in mind."

"Proceeding onward. The first one will have you raise your hand in front of you. By molding your Raiton chakra through it, your hand will start glowing yellow, which is conspicuous and flashy. You'll fire lightning bolts in a conical, horn-shape, very similar to previous lightning bolt techniques. I suppose this one's stronger than the D-rank ones... but otherwise relatively one-dimensional."


Aigis set up another set of targets for Mangetsu to hit.

(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand infront of them like a sword. It will begin glowing in a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shape of a horn that spread outwards, allowing it to attack multiple targets.

Aigis then pulled out a sword from her equipment bag that she always brought with her to every training session. She unsheathed it and stabbed the ground in front of Mangetsu, allowing it to stay upward.

"Alright. Take that sword and channel your Raiton chakra through it, allowing it to act as a conduit for said chakra. It will increase the cutting power of the sword."

"The hard part here is to manipulate and exercise chakra control to allow the sword to levitate in front of you. Then, you'll apply the principles of clone creation to create two exact copies of this sword, bringing it to three swords total, that float and have shocking, cutting properties. You can then use hand gestures to control the trajectory and attacks of these swords, but bear in mind that these types of techniques require you to keep your focus on them, so you can't perform any other jutsus until you stop the swords or break your focus."

"Cut up these watermelons so we can share them."


Aigis had set up three watermelons on a table in front of Mangetsu.

( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15 (-5 per turn)
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s through hand gestures. While controlling the weapons, the user cannot mold chakra for other techniques and needs to keep focus.
 
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