NaruAwesome
Active member
hey guys. so i made a song when i was bored and wanted some input. hopefully this thread in the right category. please read the whole song and the beats cause i might take time to produce this and send it to people that know people
give me your opinion
give me your opinion
All I Can See
sing it calmly like plain white t's rhytm of love song
(regular beat to song, comma means breaks)
ta dah, dah, dah, ta da, da da da
ta dah, dah,dah, ta da,da da da
ta da, da da
ta da, da da
ta da, da da
ta da, da da
You know that you're what I want
and you know I'm not trying to front
cause God wants you
to be with me
to show you the world
that we could see.. yeah
Girl, I know that times have been tough
But if we hold on we can go far
cause God told me
that we're meant to be
and that true love is
what we both need
(beat to only this part of song, the “cause girl” to the “heart felt”)
ta da, ta da, ta da,ta da, da da da
(drums- da da dum dum)
ta da, ta da, ta da,ta da, da da da
(drums- da da dum dum)
ta da, ta da, ta da,ta da, da da da
(drums- da da dum dum)
ta da, ta da, ta da,ta da, da da da!!
(drums- da da dum dat!!)
cause girl, we really coulda had been something else
I mean you is what make my- heart- melt
I'll open up to show you my- true-self
Baby whe you left this is what my heart felt!!(gets louder)
Chorus
What's sunshine without the rain
I need something to hide my pain
cause every day
when you're with him
this is what
my heart sing
I'm crying out to you but no return
maybe I should just do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that I can see
what we were we whatwe use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all I can see
what we use to be-eeee
I still don't know what I'm looking for
a way out whn I know theres is no door
I need to find
that one soul
but I know she's the girl
to comfort me
But she was just so divine (mood lightening up, beat rises)
had every curve to the perfect design
but when our lovewas true
she found someone new
and now what am
suppose to do,ooo! (beats gets louder)
cause girl, we really coulda had been something else
I mean you is what make my- heart- melt
I'll open up to show you my- true-self
Baby whe you left this is what my heart felt!!(gets louder)
Chorus
What's sunshine without the rain
I need something to hide my pain
cause every day
when you're with him
this is what
my heart sing
I'm crying out to you but no return
maybe I should just do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that I can see
what we were we whatwe use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all I can see
what we use to be-eeee
(regular voice but groove to the beat)
If you were a song
I'll play u until my ipod's dead
If u were air
I'll hold u in untilmy face turned red
If you were my guitar
I'll tuneu until the perfect pitch
If you were my girl
you wouldn't have to worry 'bout who you're with. Hoo!!
(this part of the song has it's own beat)
ta da, ta da ta, ta da ta, ta ta ta( it repeat for next 8 lines)
What's sunshine without the rain
I need something to hide my pain
cause every day
when you're with him
this is what
my heart sing
I'm crying out to you but no return
maybe I should just do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that u can see
what we were we what
we use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all u can see
what we use to be,yeah
sing it calmly like plain white t's rhytm of love song
(regular beat to song, comma means breaks)
ta dah, dah, dah, ta da, da da da
ta dah, dah,dah, ta da,da da da
ta da, da da
ta da, da da
ta da, da da
ta da, da da
You know that you're what I want
and you know I'm not trying to front
cause God wants you
to be with me
to show you the world
that we could see.. yeah
Girl, I know that times have been tough
But if we hold on we can go far
cause God told me
that we're meant to be
and that true love is
what we both need
(beat to only this part of song, the “cause girl” to the “heart felt”)
ta da, ta da, ta da,ta da, da da da
(drums- da da dum dum)
ta da, ta da, ta da,ta da, da da da
(drums- da da dum dum)
ta da, ta da, ta da,ta da, da da da
(drums- da da dum dum)
ta da, ta da, ta da,ta da, da da da!!
(drums- da da dum dat!!)
cause girl, we really coulda had been something else
I mean you is what make my- heart- melt
I'll open up to show you my- true-self
Baby whe you left this is what my heart felt!!(gets louder)
Chorus
What's sunshine without the rain
I need something to hide my pain
cause every day
when you're with him
this is what
my heart sing
I'm crying out to you but no return
maybe I should just do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that I can see
what we were we whatwe use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all I can see
what we use to be-eeee
I still don't know what I'm looking for
a way out whn I know theres is no door
I need to find
that one soul
but I know she's the girl
to comfort me
But she was just so divine (mood lightening up, beat rises)
had every curve to the perfect design
but when our lovewas true
she found someone new
and now what am
suppose to do,ooo! (beats gets louder)
cause girl, we really coulda had been something else
I mean you is what make my- heart- melt
I'll open up to show you my- true-self
Baby whe you left this is what my heart felt!!(gets louder)
Chorus
What's sunshine without the rain
I need something to hide my pain
cause every day
when you're with him
this is what
my heart sing
I'm crying out to you but no return
maybe I should just do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that I can see
what we were we whatwe use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all I can see
what we use to be-eeee
(regular voice but groove to the beat)
If you were a song
I'll play u until my ipod's dead
If u were air
I'll hold u in untilmy face turned red
If you were my guitar
I'll tuneu until the perfect pitch
If you were my girl
you wouldn't have to worry 'bout who you're with. Hoo!!
(this part of the song has it's own beat)
ta da, ta da ta, ta da ta, ta ta ta( it repeat for next 8 lines)
What's sunshine without the rain
I need something to hide my pain
cause every day
when you're with him
this is what
my heart sing
I'm crying out to you but no return
maybe I should just do usher and let it burn
cause this is all
that u can see
what we were we what
we use to be,yeah
what we use to be
that's all u can see
what we use to be,yeah
