Hot New Rap

[Desanto]

Executed by NB's and Future TeamBackPack's Very own, SneaksNasa ( NamikaziTheRapper). Drop some feedback, let me know if I suck or not

[video=youtube;sjadlwiwltM]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sjadlwiwltM[/video]

 

[ShishaMastah420]

Hot Garbage.

 

[YokoKurama]

That was interesting.
Not a rap fan, but not bad at all.

 

[Desanto]

Hot Garbage.

1st negative comment i've ever gotten, just so you know

That was interesting.
Not a rap fan, but not bad at all.

Thank you, It makes my day when a non-rap listeners like my material !

 

[ShishaMastah420]

1st negative comment i've ever gotten, just so you know



Thank you, It makes my day when a non-rap listeners like my material !

At first I commented just to see if you'll get mad, Neg Rep me and cry a river, even though I didn't watch the video.

But then after your act of humbleness, I watched it, it was aight, it's aight, definitely not garbage.

I'm guessing you mix your own music right? It sounds real amateur. The lyrics weren't the most catchy, eye/ear catching, though it did have some flow/story to it and it wasn't just words being thrown out there.

IMO, I'd say work on your depth and flow, don't get too caught up on the pen and paper rap, it might sound good just writing down on paper, but does it flow when you say it? Does it go with the beat? Also Don't ever drop your music unless you've lessened to it ATLEAST a 100 times.

Good Luck, bro

 

[Desanto]

At first I commented just to see if you'll get mad, Neg Rep me and cry a river, even though I didn't watch the video.

But then after your act of humbleness, I watched it, it was aight, it's aight, definitely not garbage.

I'm guessing you mix your own music right? It sounds real amateur. The lyrics weren't the most catchy, eye/ear catching, though it did have some flow/story to it and it wasn't just words being thrown out there.

IMO, I'd say work on your depth and flow, don't get too caught up on the pen and paper rap, it might sound good just writing down on paper, but does it flow when you say it? Does it go with the beat? Also Don't ever drop your music unless you've lessened to it ATLEAST a 100 times.

Good Luck, bro

Man i would never get mad at anyone's opinion unless i knew 100% it was all hate and even then i still probably wouldn't lol I'm not that type...

But thanks on actually listening to it, I know what you mean about the mix too, i didnt spend too much time editing it or anything. I like my raps to sound RAW unless im actually throwing it into a mixtape project or shooting a video for it.

Ill take what you said into consideration though my dude. Thanks again for atleast hearing it !

 

[NarutoB]

Was pretty cool. Some of the lyrics felt pretty cheesy, but other than that good job

 

[Desanto]

Was pretty cool. Some of the lyrics felt pretty cheesy, but other than that good job

Thanks brotha, ill work on my craft a little better next time.