[Photoshop] Hot Mess

Anduril

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sorry but as far as i see .... it is lame compared to your other works....
cannot see the render... :(
the pink glow comes out of nowhere ....
no focal.....
the C4D`s seem to be random ....
but dont mind me i am a noob :)
 

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Its kind of weird that some of his hand is missing but other than that it looks fine...in an abstract sort of way. Imo the text should be more to the right.
 

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sorry but as far as i see .... it is lame compared to your other works....
cannot see the render... :(
the pink glow comes out of nowhere ....
no focal.....
the C4D`s seem to be random ....
but dont mind me i am a noob :)
First of all, it's a stock, not a render. The pink is a fractal which I've used. The focal is his face, which is why I've placed the text there.
 

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I am aware that this isn't my best work, but you have to remember that it's not my usual style, I'm using a tutorial, and so forth. I did do improvements on it though, based on C4D placement and text.

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Hmm..
IMO, the pink brushing up top doesn't really work with the other colors and could be removed/changed.
And the text could do with either being smaller or having it's opacity turned down.
 
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