Hokages the Shinigami Realm(pt13)

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Tobi throws a black sphere 150 feet above.
Minato: (I've seen this technique before, through Naruto's eyes. It was Pain who used it, though.)
Giant segments of the wasteland rips from the ground and towards the black sphere, lava from nearby volcanoes even gets sucked in by the gravitational pull. A large section of rock rises from underneath Minato. He's pulled in towards the sphere of rock and lava, which is getting bigger and bigger by the second.
Souls: Aaahhhhh!
Close-by souls are tugged by the massive ball and are destroyed by the incoming boulders and lava.
Minato: (This isn't good. Since the land is apart of this realm, it's not physical like the World of the Living's land, which means even a soul can be crushed.)
Minato throws a FTG kunai at the ground in an attempt to teleport away from the carnage, but it is also pulled by Chibaku Tensei. Minato is involuntarily approaching the sphere, just 60 feet away and inclosing.
Minato: (I'm running out of options. I wonder if this would work....)
The Fourth Hokage forms a rasengan and starts to add his element affinity to it until it is a complete Wind Release: Rasenshuriken. He launches it at the center of the Chibaku Tensei. The enormous sphere is completely oblierated, then Minato jumps down and lands in a giant crater. Boulders and lava falls everywhere.
Minato: (Looks like all that training I've done in the Shinigami Realm to add my wind nature to rasengan paid off.)
Tobi stands there, disappointed.
Tobi: (If only I killed him that night, 17 years ago...)
Minato: (It's safe engage him in taijutsu now, being that I cut off one of his hands.)
With a kunai is his left hand and his right hand made into a fist, Minato charges for Tobi. Minato attacks him, but all his assaults are rendered useless due to Tobi's intangible ability. Since Tobi only has one hand, he uses a kicking style of fighting. Minato's reflexes are too quick to be hit by someone who doesn't specialize in taijutsu. They keep fighting close-range, completely on par with each other. Then, Tobi decides to end the taijutsu battle and uses a small Shinra Tensei. Surprised by the change, Minato gets hit by the repulsive technique and is knocked back 15 feet away. He recovers from the blow and rises to his feet.
Minato: I applaud you, not even the second fastest shinobi has been able to hit me. But, it ends here.
Minato makes a clone, weaves a hand sign and holds a FTG kunai in between.
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Sorry to everyone who I told that part 13 will be the last, part 14 will be forsure.
Lol I forgot "and" in the title. Oh well.
 
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yess im pumped for 14!

It'll be posted tomorrow, then the whole story will come to an end.:)
But, don't worry. I'll be creating another FF some time later on.:D
Btw, I just edited the OP and had Minato make a clone at the end just to let ya know.
 

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NICE! :) Dude I gotta seriously spread some rep so I can rep you T_T. But I'm so glad this isn't the end, I was about to cry :p
 

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Awsome bro Great Stuff
Thanks, man. I'm glad I gotta new fan:)
NICE! :) Dude I gotta seriously spread some rep so I can rep you T_T. But I'm so glad this isn't the end, I was about to cry :p

Haha it's fine. It's the principle that countsxd
And sorry dude, but all good things come to an end, right?:shrug:
 

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Awsome chapter. :D Minato learning
Rasen Shuriken xd
That was cool. I wonder what Minato is about to use.? :eek: +Rep
 

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Are you going to show the Tobi's face cause the manga has not shown Tobi's face. Just Curious?
 
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Awsome chapter. :D Minato learning
Rasen Shuriken xd
That was cool. I wonder what Minato is about to use.? :eek: +Rep

Haha thanks. It's only right I give the creator of rasengan an advanced version of it.
And I think you'll like what he's about to do:D
 

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Wow...Cant believe someone hitted Minato.And i'm happy for giving Minato the RS...Just like a guy said above i'm curious if you are going to show us tobi's identity....And waiting for next one.Great chap btw.
 

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Wow...Cant believe someone hitted Minato.And i'm happy for giving Minato the RS...Just like a guy said above i'm curious if you are going to show us tobi's identity....And waiting for next one.Great chap btw.

I'm happy that you're happy with what I've done. I have something in mind for Tobi's identity:)
 
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