Hokages and the Shinigami Realm(pt14-Final)

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  • ***-It was decent

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Guardian of the Rain

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Minato creates his Space-Time Barrier 10 feet behind Tobi, who doesn't notice.
Tobi: (What is he up to? Is that a false hand sign? A diversion?...)
Minato's clone throws a FTG kunai at Tobi, it flies right through him, pass him, and into the barrier. The clone then blitz Tobi, engages him in taijutsu, but not one hit lands. Minato uses the barrier to redirect his clone's FTG kunai at Tobi. Tobi materializes in an attempt to grab the clone, the airborne kunai reaches Tobi, Minato teleports to it and hits the distracted Tobi with a giant rasengan.
Tobi: (Damn it! He must've used that Space-Time Barrier of his to aim the clone's kunai at my back!)
Minato: That was my Flying Raijin, Level 3.
Tobi's arms are completely destroyed, absolutely unrepairable. Tobi is down on his back, temporarily immobile from the attack. Minato walk towards Tobi and stands above him, victorious.
Minato: Try to travel through realms without those eyes you give so much praise to.
Minato pulls out a kunai and slashes Tobi's sharingan and rinnegan. Breaking his mask in the process.
Tobi: Ahhhh!
Tobi's real identity is revealed to Minato.
Minato: (So, that's who he is afterall....Well, it's irrelevant now.)
The Fourth Hokage decides to let him live, being that Tobi will no longer be a threat without his doujutsu.
Minato: Stay here, where you belong.
Tobi screams in agony and defeat.
Minato teleports to Tobirama in the Shinigami Realm. Hashirama, Tobirama, and Hiruzen all stand together, awaiting Minato's arrival. Kushina and Jiraiya as well, they've been waiting ever since they've got their conscious back.
Kushina: Minato!!
She affectionately tackles him.
Minato: Kushina, my love. There aren't words to describe how much I've missed you.
They kiss with extreme passion.
Jiraiya: Hey! You two lovebirds get a room.
Minato and Kushina stops kissing and laughs.
Minato: Jiraiya-sensei! You're as lively as always!
Jiraiya: Hmph, I've been put in worse situations. Being captured, cast in genjutsu, and forced to fight my old sensei is no biggy.
Everyone laughs.
Hashirama: Young Minato, I had no doubt that you would come back successful. I pity those who angers a shinobi with a strong Will of Fire.
Tobirama: Yes, I knew you would keep your promise. The time of your arrival was the only concern.
Hiruzen: Minato-boy, Lord Second informed us with great news while you were gone. Is it true.....we can finally leave this realm?
Minato: Yes, yes we can.
Everyone can't help but to smile from the amazing news. Minato grabs Kushina's hand. The other 3 Hokages each put a hand on Minato's shoulder. Jiraiya places his hand on top of Minato's head, like a father would do to a son.
Jiraiya: (I'm so proud.)
Minato: Everyone ready?
They all nod.
Jiraiya: You're going to love the Heaven Realm, there are so many babes!
Kushina punches Jiraiya in the face.
Kushina: Pervy-Sage, I'm his wife ya know!
Hiruzen: Haha, leave it to Jiraiya-boy to ruin a moment.
Everyone chuckles.
Minato: Okay, here we go.
Minato teleports himself and the others to the kunai he left in the Heaven Realm. The Hokages finally get the fate they deserve...

Back in the World of the Living...
Tobi-cloned Zetsu battles Naruto, Kakashi, Guy, and Bee.
Tobi-cloned Zetsu suddenly stops fighting. Through Tobi's white Zetsu spores, Tobi-cloned Zetsu can sense he's been defeated.

Tobi-cloned Zetsu: (So, it turns out Tobi's plan didn't turn out as expected. Now, it's up to me to see his goal completed.)
Naruto: Hey! What are you zoning out for?! I'm your opponent!
 
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Roby

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Awesome as always :)
 

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Nice ending. I wish we could of known who Tobi's name was U_U.
 

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Nice ending. I wish we could of known who Tobi's name was U_U.

I'm glad you liked it, there were so many different way to end it, but I went with that one. Sorry, I would've created too much speculation if I would've revealed who Tobi was.
 

mintoandkushina

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Damn, that flying rajiin level 3 xd like a boss! Too beast for words man :D
 

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Awesome bro interesting ending u surprised me greatly. Great Job. Now what r u going to do. :)
 

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Was great!!!! But the chapter could have been lil longer....you know the fight n all.........but overall it was good
 

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Awesome bro interesting ending u surprised me greatly. Great Job. Now what r u going to do. :)
Haha thanks dude. I'm glad people are liking the ending. Now, I'm going to brainstorm for my next FF:D
Was great!!!! But the chapter could have been lil longer....you know the fight n all.........but overall it was good

Yeah, sorry. I admit that I rushed it a little. But, I still put a lot of thought into it:)
 

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Nice.! :D Too bad its the final chapter.! :T_T:
 

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FTG level 3 huh?? Really,amazing...I enjoyed the whole series..You know,you are very talented.Waiting for the next series. :D :D
 

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FTG level 3 huh?? Really,amazing...I enjoyed the whole series..You know,you are very talented.Waiting for the next series. :D :D

Haha it seems the FRL3 was a good idea. Thanks bro, I'm glad to have you as a fan, my FF wouldn't have been anything without you guys. I'll inform you when I release my next FFxd
 
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