[Adventure] Hi's & Goodbye's

[Waindo]

Every "hi"
Ends up with a "goodbye."
As a short lived lamentation,
Heard only by the skies.

And every "goodbye."
Is a "hi" to an end,
And every ending prompts a new;
Time of our lives to begin.​

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

From a long time and good poem .

 

[fiend]

Short sweet and meaningful
And finally XD.

 

[Waindo]

Thx guys.

 

[Hotaruko]

beautiful as always

 

[Waindo]

Thanks Blue.

 

[Tenshi Hikari]

Nice Waindo.

 

[Waindo]

Thx ma'am.

 

[Portg4s D Ac3]

"Good poets need only small phrases
No long sentence of meaning
Or paragraphs of philosophical mazes" short and simple just has a nice touch dude. good poem

 

[Waindo]

"Good poets need only small phrases
No long sentence of meaning
Or paragraphs of philosophical mazes" short and simple just has a nice touch dude. good poem

Glad you liked it. Majority of my stuff is simple but impactful to some extent. Thx for the elaborate critique.

 

[Nyanmaru]

Nice waindo! Glad to see you around in this part of the forum again

 

[Waindo]

Nice waindo! Glad to see you around in this part of the forum again

Ty Adri.
Not exactly "around" or back again though. I'm limited with my free time and don't want to waste it on NB or internet all together. But I'll keep posting here whenever I can.