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( Katon: Haisekishō ) - Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spews superheated ash from their mouth after performing four handseals. The ash is hot enough to cause third-degree burns on the victim. Because it's composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud. If the user clicks his teeth, the stagnant ash will ignite, creating a violent explosion.

I want you to focus your fire chakra and then form 4 hand seals and release a super heated ash at my clone and wait for it to surround my clone, then click your teeth and have it ignite creating a giant explosion. aka Asuma tech
 

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Just like old times xD


I begin by gathering my fire chakra in my lungs while performing four handseals. I convert the fire chakra into a super heated ash which I spew out from my lungs. I spew the ash cloud around your clone completely engulfing it in the cloud. Once the clone is covered by the ash, I click my teeth creating a spark in which it ignites the ash cloud creating a devastating explosion.

Adv

Reaches mid range
Nice rank
Even if the user dosen't click their teeth, the ash is more that enough to deal some damage.

Dis

Requires four handseals
The ash cuts the vision from your opponent
 

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haha yup xD How's it been going in the RP?

Moving on,

( Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.

I want you to focus your fire, form a hand seal and release the fire while shaping it into several large dragons and send them into the sky. If you do this right, the clouds will become darker and the conditions in order for someone to use Kirin will happen.
 

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Its going great man. How's Sensei life going ^^?


I begin by performing a single handseal while gathering and storing my fire chakra in y lungs. I focus this chakra causing it heat up increasing its ability. I channel the chakra to my mouth where I covert the chakra into fire by breathing it out from my mouth. I use shape manipulation on the fire, shaping it into separate dragon shaped fireballs.


Pros

Requires one handseal
Reaches all ranges
Fire multiple fire balls
Can be used for kirin

Cons

Since your firing several fire dragons, your vision on the enemy might be hindered
 

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tryna keep up with it xD

Katon: Hōsenka Tsumabeni ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user unleashes a volley of shuriken with one hand, while at the same time exhaling fire-infused chakra onto them in order to increase the weapons' destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting severe burns upon direct contact with either the intended victim or any other object caught within their trajectories. Due to the chakra-based nature of the flames that surround them, the shuriken will continue to burn after impact, regardless of the flammability of the object that they ultimately collide with

I want you to take out a bunch of shuriken and throw it at my clone, at the same time, i want you to infuse fire into them and increase the power of your wepons by alot, after hitting my clone, the flames will spread and my clone will go poof.
 

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Katon: Hōsenka Tsumabeni ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson

I begin by slipping my hand into my ninja pouch pulling out a set of shurikens. I leap up into the air throwing the shurikens towards your clone head on. As the projectiles are travelling I gather up my fire chakra into my lungs. I focus on this chakra, causing it to heat up rapidly. I manipulate the chakra to travel up my throat releasing my fire chakra into the shuriken causing them to ignite on fire. With the shurikens now on fire, they bring more of a deadly impact.
 

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I'll be taking over for Better. I'll explain the jutsu then tell you to do something in order to move on.
( Katon: Onidōrō ) - Fire Release: Demon Lantern
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra releasing several fire ghosts that are like heads with horns and yellow eyes that then attack the target/s in a swarm.
You perform the Tiger hand seal before releasing numerous ghosts of flame that have horns and yellow eyes. The ghosts of flame swarm the targets attacking them from all over.

( Katon: Honoo no Hashira Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame Pillar Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra into their chest and then they will release from their mouth a quick burst of flame towards their opponents feet which then errupts into a large pillar of flame reaching 3 meters tall and inflicting damage to the target.
Mold your fire chakra in your chest before releasing a quick burst of flame towards the foot of your opponent. The flame erupts on contact forming a large 3m tall pillar of flame that burns your target.

Attack the right target using the most effective jutsu.


Standing behind you I create a clone short range to your left, and arrange some dummies short-mid.range to your right. The clone I created jumps up and down while the dummies are evenly spaced out 1m from each other.
 

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-Sorry for the wait dude. My laptop broke down and had to wait a while to get it fixed-

Seeing the dummies spread out from each other evenly, I think which jutsu will be most effective in this situation. I come up with an answer. I perform the Tiger handseal while gathering my fire chakra. I release the chakra into the atmosphere around the dummies. I use shape manipulation on released fire chakra, shaping it into ghost-like flames that resemble a ghost with horns and yellow eyes. The ghosts attacks the dummies in a swarm.

( Katon: Onidōrō ) - Fire Release: Demon Lantern
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra releasing it into the atmosphere around him to create several ghost-like flames resembling heads with horns and yellow eyes that then attack the target/s in a swarm.

Seeing the clone jump up and down, I deduce it time to use the other jutsu shown to me. I manipulate my fire chakra in my chest, gathering a large amount. I release the chakra from my mouth, creating a quick burst of flames that travels towards the clones feet. Once it reaches the clone, It erupts into a large pillar of flame reaching three meters.

( Katon: Honoo no Hashira Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame Pillar Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra into their chest and then they will release from their mouth a quick burst of flame towards their opponents feet which then errupts into a large pillar of flame reaching 3 meters tall and inflicting damage to the target.
 

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Good. now I want you to give me an adv. and dis. with each jutsu from now on.

( Katon: Kaen Senpū ) - Fire Release: Flame Whirlwind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the required four handseals Monkey → Bird → Dog → Ram, fire erupts around the user's body and then launches towards the target in a spiraling-manner or expands engulfing the surrounding area in a tornado of flames. Anything nearby is incinerated as the flames erupt upwards.
Perform four hand seals as you before making fire erupt from your body and launching it towards your opponent in a spiraling manner or you can make it engulfing the surrounding area in a tornado of flames.

( Katon: Benijigumo ) - Fire Release: Crimson Earth Spider
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing five handseals Tiger → Horse → Rat → Dog → Tiger , the user spews out fire that both surrounds the enemy and then transforms into a spider that attacks the enemy. This technique effectively traps and attacks an opponent at the same time, and can be used to force them into another attack.
Perform 5 hand seals before spewing out fire that both surrounds the enemy and then transforms into a spider that attacks the enemy.

( Katon: Hi no Iki ) - Fire Release: Fire Breath
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user breathes a powerful stream of fire from their mouth at their target.
Channel your chakra into your lungs before breathing a powerful stream of fire from your mouth at your targets.
 

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( Katon: Kaen Senpū ) - Fire Release: Flame Whirlwind

I begin by performing the handseals Monkey → Bird → Dog → Ram. Once performed I cause fire to erupt from my body. Once the fire erupts from my body I manipulate it and launch it towards my opponent in a spiraling manner.
This this I expand the fire causing it to engulf the surrounding area in flames turning everything into ashes.

ADV

Can be used for two purposes
High rank
Can be used as a defense and as a attack

DIS

4 handseals
Can be easily countered



(Katon: Benijigumo ) - Fire Release: Crimson Earth Spider

I begin by performing the handseals Tiger → Horse → Rat → Dog → Tiger while gathering my fire chakra. I spew out a large amount of fire that surrounds the enemy. I use shape manipulation on the fire causing it to transform into a spider that attacks the foe.

ADV

Can be used as trap and attack
No handseals required

DIS

Requires focus for the spider to move.
Can 't perform another justu while the spider is in play


( Katon: Hi no Iki ) - Fire Release: Fire Breath

I begin by channeling my fire chakra into my lungs. I focus on this chakra causing it to shoot out a powerful stream of fire towards my opponent.

ADV

Requires no handseals
Power lol

DIS

Travels in a straight line
Easy to avoid
 

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( Katon: Honoo no Heki ) Fire Release: Flame Wall
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user kneads fire chakra into their forearm and then by swinging their arm in a wave motion they release the fire chakra creating a line of fire that spreads out infront of the user acting as a defensive wall.
Knead some fire chakra into your forearm before swinging it in a wave, and as you swing your arm release the stored fire chakra creating a line of fire that will spread out in front of you creating a defensive wall. I doubt that this can block objects with tangible propertise though.

( Katon: Hinotama no Mai ) - Fire Release: Fireball Dance
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will attack the opponent with a series of slashes with their sword and then finish up with jumping into the air above the target and releasing a powerful fireball down upon them.
Note: Requires a Sword.
*Tosses you a rusty sword*

Attack that dummy in front of you with a combo before jumping into the air above it relesing a powerful fireball down upon them.

( Katon: Yūgana Honoo ) - Fire Release: Graceful Flame
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their fire chakra and doing the tiger hand seal, shoots an intense fire stream at the opponents feet which then lifts them into the air in the eruption of a column of intense flames. Sasori can replicate this technique through the usage of his fire launcher.
Manipulate the fire chakra that I want you to need in your chest before performing the Tiger hand seal. I then want you to release a intense stream of fire at the feet of a dummy which will lift them into the air in the eruption of a column of flames.
 

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( Katon: Honoo no Heki ) Fire Release: Flame Wall

I begin by gathering my fire chakra into my forearm. Once gathered I swing my arm releasing the stored chakra from my arm. I use shape manipulation on the fire causing it to rise up and shape into a wall. The wall is large enough cover my whole body making it as a barrier.

( Katon: Hinotama no Mai ) - Fire Release: Fireball Dance

I begin by swinging my sword at the enemy delivering a series of slashes that land on his torso. As the final slash lands,I quickly gather my fire chakra into my lungs kneading and molding it as it gathers. Once I gathered enough fire chakra, I jump up into the air high above my foe while releasing a large and powerful fireball that crashes down onto my opponents head killing him.


( Katon: Yūgana Honoo ) - Fire Release: Graceful Flame

I begin by manipulating my fire chakra causing it heat up inside my lungs. Once gathered I perform the tiger handseal and shoot out a intense fire stream at the feet of the dummy causing him to life up into the air busting into a eruption of intense flames.
 

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Our training will end after A ranks since you are only a jounin. I also want you to add an advantage and disadvantage to all the descriptions.
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(Katon: Shageki Bisuketto) – Fire Release: Firing Biscuit technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat → Dragon → Boar the user then creates powerful flames inside the giant oven created by Lightning Release: Sixteen pillar bind, cooking the opponent until their burnt. Its normally used together with Earth Release: Mud fall to harden the mud covering the enemy, immobilizing them.
Note: Can only be used in the collaboration of Lightning Release: Sixteen Pillar Bind
This is a collaboration technique commonly used after "Lightning Release: Sixteen Pillar Bind". After the giant oven is created by using the lightning technique, the user will create a powerful flame inside of the oven which will helps cook whatever is trapped inside in conjunction with the electric current, and by using "Earth Release: Mud" to cover the enemies it will start hardening as the electric current and fire heats it up. You don't have to perform this one but tell me the sequence of the combination and the amount of people needed to perform it?

(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Release: Intelligent Hard Work
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Rat → Dog → Tiger fires a small fireball that erupts into a giant fire-storm after making contact with a surface, causing widespread destruction to the area. Since the flames travel along the ground, and cover such a wide area this is a difficult technique to evade. When combined with Wind Release: Pressure Damage, this technique is amplified to the point of being able to evaporate a large amount of water in an instant.
After performing 3 hand seals the user will fire a small fireball that erupts into a giant fire-storm after making contact with a surface, causing widespread destruction to the area. Anything within a certain range of the area will not escape its aftermath so when faced against this technique make sure you get a good distance away.(Depends on opponent's description)/B]

(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, using his fire chakra and making an underground tunnel from between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire carry rock and other debris with it as it travels, melting them. With a single hand seal, the molten rock debris will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them and burning them alive.
First stomp on the ground using your fire chakra while making an underground tunnel from between yourself and the opponent. You then breathe out fire into the tunnel causing the fire to carry rock and other debris underneath your target which will engulf and burn them alive with only a single hand seal.
 
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