Highdchool of the dead Rp
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kiriahatake
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(dude i do the same thing only i just type so fast that i just need less time. everyone knows i suck at spelling so i don't fix it most the time. other wise grammer is suppose to be important. i'll laugh at others mistakes when comes to spelling but won't say a thing.)
FalseBlade
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Bright Master
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(I dont mean to sound like a jerk or anything but I notice you use alot of repeated definitions along with a few comma splices. When I say repeated definitions, I mean things like "Varires depend", Which basically eighter mean the same thing or have the same use. It would only confuse the reader by doing so. :"Seeing as it was a reply to Bright Shadow's post that was made at 10:00 PM Eastern Standard Time with my post being made 17 minutes later" Considering the fact that you already used: "seeing as it was a reply to bright shadows post", you shouldn't put "my post being made", as that would be unnesseary repetition. The reason I'm posting slow relies on the fact that eighter I forget, or playing need for speed the run. Just a small opinion. NOW BACK TO THE GODDAMN RP!!)
FalseBlade
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November 11
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{Alright then. ^^}
In the darkening of the evening, Okabe Rintarou --Honor student of education, graduating a year earlier than most-- was a well renowned Chemistry teacher at the local High School. Renowned mostly from his students, seeing as despite his very complex mind that most would consider the individuals personality to be 'up-tight', Okabe was a very light hearted fellow as well. He enjoyed to goof around but at the same time maintain a balance between play and work, and somehow he always managed to keep this balance with that of his students.
When the epidemic of the "z-virus" he dubbed it personally began to spread, he was at his high school in his class finishing up some paperwork. When it started and he had time to process the fact that it wasn't something that would
be quickly resolved by the likes of the military of even the government, Okabe decided that it was high time to take off and try and find a location that is far more fit for holding out, a place filled with supplies and the such.Okabe made his way silently through the school for the most part, eventually coming across that of a metal bat that was in a hallway gym locker, taking hold of it knowing that he would no doubt find use for it later on. He continued his venture through the school, occasionally having to bat down one of the "Ghouls" he called them whenever they were without a doubt incapable to simply go around. Eventually Okabe had managed to make his way out into the parking lot of the school, where he made his way to his Aston Martin DB7 model car. The vehicle was that of the 1993 - 2004 model, and despite his 'sexy looks', that was really all it had going for it. It was a fair looking car, yet in the sense of gas mileage and speed, it was average at best. The only other thing that made this vehicle extremely considerable, was that it was one of the more well built frame durability builds during that generation of vehicle models, making it capable of taking a good hit or two and not take much more than a few dents. Okabe swiftly got into his vehicle, frantically checking over his shoulders every so often to ensure nothing was coming up behind him as he unlocked his vehicle door. Once unlocked, he swiftly swung the door open, climbing inside as he then started up his vehicle swiftly and made his way out of the lot, swerving around some of the walking "Ghouls" as much as possible.
Once he was finally out, he processed several possible destinations that he could advance to that would be good places to hold out. The finalized decision that he made was to made his way to the local mall, of which had all the supplies he would need, ranging from that to a variety of possible defensive weaponry, whatever hasn't been scrapped up yet by others that would be good food, drink and medical supplies, as well the likelihood of chemical supplies that he could use to his advantage as well in many ways. Okabe continued his advancing drive toward the mall, luckily he had filled his gas tank this morning before heading to the school, so he had more than plenty of fuel to get him around for some time.Once at the mall, Okabe pulled up to one of the docking ports (where delivery trucks pull up to the garage like areas to unload stocking supplies), getting out of his vehicle momentarily to open the port, which by a stretch of luck was unlocked. Once opened, he glanced around to make sure no "Ghouls" were about, and when ready he decided to pull into the garage will his car, then closed up the door behind him, this time locking it to guarantee safety. He shut down his engine then closed his car door slowly and easily to try and avoid making as much noise as possible from echoing throughout the mall. Once done, he took hold of the bat he had found back at the school, and began to make his way throughout the mall, seeing what he could find.
{Just a note, I do like using detail, as per demonstrated in something like explaining chemicals.. xD -- I take my role playing very seriously, hence the advanced detail. Sorry if it is nothing more than a pain in the butt, but it is simply how I role play. ^^ -- I also want to point out that Okabe made it to the mall before everyone else did and has been there for a few hours now, seeing as he started that way not shortly after the start of the whole outbreak, as well during the time that everyone else was out picking each other up or whatnot. Most the detail is just explaining what happened before, during and after the outbreak started. ^^}
FalseBlade
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{Alright then. ^^}
In the darkening of the evening, Okabe Rintarou --Honor student of education, graduating a year earlier than most-- was a well renowned Chemistry teacher at the local High School. Renowned mostly from his students, seeing as despite his very complex mind that most would consider the individuals personality to be 'up-tight', Okabe was a very light hearted fellow as well. He enjoyed to goof around but at the same time maintain a balance between play and work, and somehow he always managed to keep this balance with that of his students.
When the epidemic of the "z-virus" he dubbed it personally began to spread, he was at his high school in his class finishing up some paperwork. When it started and he had time to process the fact that it wasn't something that would
Okabe made his way silently through the school for the most part, eventually coming across that of a metal bat that was in a hallway gym locker, taking hold of it knowing that he would no doubt find use for it later on. He continued his venture through the school, occasionally having to bat down one of the "Ghouls" he called them whenever they were without a doubt incapable to simply go around. Eventually Okabe had managed to make his way out into the parking lot of the school, where he made his way to his Aston Martin DB7 model car. The vehicle was that of the 1993 - 2004 model, and despite his 'sexy looks', that was really all it had going for it. It was a fair looking car, yet in the sense of gas mileage and speed, it was average at best. The only other thing that made this vehicle extremely considerable, was that it was one of the more well built frame durability builds during that generation of vehicle models, making it capable of taking a good hit or two and not take much more than a few dents. Okabe swiftly got into his vehicle, frantically checking over his shoulders every so often to ensure nothing was coming up behind him as he unlocked his vehicle door. Once unlocked, he swiftly swung the door open, climbing inside as he then started up his vehicle swiftly and made his way out of the lot, swerving around some of the walking "Ghouls" as much as possible.
Once at the mall, Okabe pulled up to one of the docking ports (where delivery trucks pull up to the garage like areas to unload stocking supplies), getting out of his vehicle momentarily to open the port, which by a stretch of luck was unlocked. Once opened, he glanced around to make sure no "Ghouls" were about, and when ready he decided to pull into the garage will his car, then closed up the door behind him, this time locking it to guarantee safety. He shut down his engine then closed his car door slowly and easily to try and avoid making as much noise as possible from echoing throughout the mall. Once done, he took hold of the bat he had found back at the school, and began to make his way throughout the mall, seeing what he could find.
{Just a note, I do like using detail, as per demonstrated in something like explaining chemicals.. xD -- I take my role playing very seriously, hence the advanced detail. Sorry if it is nothing more than a pain in the butt, but it is simply how I role play. ^^ -- I also want to point out that Okabe made it to the mall before everyone else did and has been there for a few hours now, seeing as he started that way not shortly after the start of the whole outbreak, as well during the time that everyone else was out picking each other up or whatnot. Most the detail is just explaining what happened before, during and after the outbreak started. ^^}
November 11
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Bright Master
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(Woah! Don't get the Classic DB7 mistaken, its horsepower makes up for its top speed and durability. Lol, could smell one of them cars. )
{Alright then. ^^}
In the darkening of the evening, Okabe Rintarou --Honor student of education, graduating a year earlier than most-- was a well renowned Chemistry teacher at the local High School. Renowned mostly from his students, seeing as despite his very complex mind that most would consider the individuals personality to be 'up-tight', Okabe was a very light hearted fellow as well. He enjoyed to goof around but at the same time maintain a balance between play and work, and somehow he always managed to keep this balance with that of his students.
When the epidemic of the "z-virus" he dubbed it personally began to spread, he was at his high school in his class finishing up some paperwork. When it started and he had time to process the fact that it wasn't something that would
Okabe made his way silently through the school for the most part, eventually coming across that of a metal bat that was in a hallway gym locker, taking hold of it knowing that he would no doubt find use for it later on. He continued his venture through the school, occasionally having to bat down one of the "Ghouls" he called them whenever they were without a doubt incapable to simply go around. Eventually Okabe had managed to make his way out into the parking lot of the school, where he made his way to his Aston Martin DB7 model car. The vehicle was that of the 1993 - 2004 model, and despite his 'sexy looks', that was really all it had going for it. It was a fair looking car, yet in the sense of gas mileage and speed, it was average at best. The only other thing that made this vehicle extremely considerable, was that it was one of the more well built frame durability builds during that generation of vehicle models, making it capable of taking a good hit or two and not take much more than a few dents. Okabe swiftly got into his vehicle, frantically checking over his shoulders every so often to ensure nothing was coming up behind him as he unlocked his vehicle door. Once unlocked, he swiftly swung the door open, climbing inside as he then started up his vehicle swiftly and made his way out of the lot, swerving around some of the walking "Ghouls" as much as possible.
Once at the mall, Okabe pulled up to one of the docking ports (where delivery trucks pull up to the garage like areas to unload stocking supplies), getting out of his vehicle momentarily to open the port, which by a stretch of luck was unlocked. Once opened, he glanced around to make sure no "Ghouls" were about, and when ready he decided to pull into the garage will his car, then closed up the door behind him, this time locking it to guarantee safety. He shut down his engine then closed his car door slowly and easily to try and avoid making as much noise as possible from echoing throughout the mall. Once done, he took hold of the bat he had found back at the school, and began to make his way throughout the mall, seeing what he could find.
{Just a note, I do like using detail, as per demonstrated in something like explaining chemicals.. xD -- I take my role playing very seriously, hence the advanced detail. Sorry if it is nothing more than a pain in the butt, but it is simply how I role play. ^^ -- I also want to point out that Okabe made it to the mall before everyone else did and has been there for a few hours now, seeing as he started that way not shortly after the start of the whole outbreak, as well during the time that everyone else was out picking each other up or whatnot. Most the detail is just explaining what happened before, during and after the outbreak started. ^^}
Shiina: Oh, look... I think thats the mall down there..
FalseBlade
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kiriahatake
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(seriously i am not reading this T_T dude if you put in a paragraph at a time more post count and more likely people are going to read it seriously i'm taking care of a babay i don't have time to read this all.... T_T)
{Alright then. ^^}
In the darkening of the evening, Okabe Rintarou --Honor student of education, graduating a year earlier than most-- was a well renowned Chemistry teacher at the local High School. Renowned mostly from his students, seeing as despite his very complex mind that most would consider the individuals personality to be 'up-tight', Okabe was a very light hearted fellow as well. He enjoyed to goof around but at the same time maintain a balance between play and work, and somehow he always managed to keep this balance with that of his students.
When the epidemic of the "z-virus" he dubbed it personally began to spread, he was at his high school in his class finishing up some paperwork. When it started and he had time to process the fact that it wasn't something that would
Okabe made his way silently through the school for the most part, eventually coming across that of a metal bat that was in a hallway gym locker, taking hold of it knowing that he would no doubt find use for it later on. He continued his venture through the school, occasionally having to bat down one of the "Ghouls" he called them whenever they were without a doubt incapable to simply go around. Eventually Okabe had managed to make his way out into the parking lot of the school, where he made his way to his Aston Martin DB7 model car. The vehicle was that of the 1993 - 2004 model, and despite his 'sexy looks', that was really all it had going for it. It was a fair looking car, yet in the sense of gas mileage and speed, it was average at best. The only other thing that made this vehicle extremely considerable, was that it was one of the more well built frame durability builds during that generation of vehicle models, making it capable of taking a good hit or two and not take much more than a few dents. Okabe swiftly got into his vehicle, frantically checking over his shoulders every so often to ensure nothing was coming up behind him as he unlocked his vehicle door. Once unlocked, he swiftly swung the door open, climbing inside as he then started up his vehicle swiftly and made his way out of the lot, swerving around some of the walking "Ghouls" as much as possible.
Once at the mall, Okabe pulled up to one of the docking ports (where delivery trucks pull up to the garage like areas to unload stocking supplies), getting out of his vehicle momentarily to open the port, which by a stretch of luck was unlocked. Once opened, he glanced around to make sure no "Ghouls" were about, and when ready he decided to pull into the garage will his car, then closed up the door behind him, this time locking it to guarantee safety. He shut down his engine then closed his car door slowly and easily to try and avoid making as much noise as possible from echoing throughout the mall. Once done, he took hold of the bat he had found back at the school, and began to make his way throughout the mall, seeing what he could find.
{Just a note, I do like using detail, as per demonstrated in something like explaining chemicals.. xD -- I take my role playing very seriously, hence the advanced detail. Sorry if it is nothing more than a pain in the butt, but it is simply how I role play. ^^ -- I also want to point out that Okabe made it to the mall before everyone else did and has been there for a few hours now, seeing as he started that way not shortly after the start of the whole outbreak, as well during the time that everyone else was out picking each other up or whatnot. Most the detail is just explaining what happened before, during and after the outbreak started. ^^}
Kiri glares at you (falseblade).
"shut up and let me do the directioning....." now we got the ba akiria back.
"give another minute or so and then you should see a sign with a rice patty on and across it it says eat at fifth. you can't miss it." akiria's stomach growls loudly. T_T
November 11
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{Haha, true enough. xD -- Though a lot of people buy the vehicle and then modify it to increase performance, I was going based off of what I would assume would be it's top performance without modifications, seeing as Okabe isn't super b.s. rich for mods. xD}
{Lmao.. Just read the 'note' portion, final paragraph. It has the summery for you.. xD}
*J.J. runs outside, to find numerous zombies scattered about the place. The sound of his footsteps on the concrete attracts the attention of two zombies about 3 feet in front of him. They begin to rush at him, as he tries to run back to the door. Unfortunately, the noise the zombies were making attracted the attention of a third zombie coming through the science building. J.J. notices that this particular zombie had reddened eyes, and then begins to make a dash for it through the soccer fields, being careful to avoid running on any concrete to avoid drawing any more attention to him.*
FalseBlade
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kiriahatake
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kiria hugs stan 's neck and her slightly large b.oobs slightly get stuck in his fac causing him a nose bleed.
"Thak you!" she giggle.s
"Thak you!" she giggle.s
FalseBlade
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After she lets him go, he goes back to staring, unblinkingly out the window. "We should throw a party."
kiriahatake
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Akiria hits him upside the head.
"are you nuttz??!! do you want to die?" the hit leaves a bump.
"are you nuttz??!! do you want to die?" the hit leaves a bump.
FalseBlade
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"Owww" Stan starts rubbing his head. "I didn't mean now, nor a loud one.... But just to make sure, we didn't cross out the idea, right?"