Hiei Senju

[Xicer]

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Basic Information

Name: Hiei Senju
Nickname: Lightning Demon
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Clan:/

Looks:

Hiei is a young man with an athletic build, and above average height. He has jet black hair that hangs just past his shoulders with none in his face. He keeps a clean shave at all times. His eyes are as blue as the deepest oceans, and he has an "X" shaped scar in the center of his left cheek. His everyday attire consist of a plain white shirt with a black jacket, and black pants.

Personality:

Hiei is a quiet person that rarely speaks out of line, but he is not shy. He is very intelligent compared to the average shinobi, and believes that everyone has a lesson to teach. His work ethic is one of his greatest characteristics, and one of his worst. He trains his body and mind to the limits in most of his free time, so he doesn't have much of a social life. He chooses to keep a few great friends, rather than a lot of good ones. He is unwavering in his loyalty to his friends, fellow shinobi, and village. He will also lay down his life, without a second thought, if it were deemed necessary.

Village Info

Village of Birth: Konohagakure
Village of Alliance: Konohagakure

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty:/
Elements: Lightning- needs training
Your ninjutsu:
E-ranks

Background Info

History:

Being a descendant of the Senju clan, nothing has been expected out of Hiei except for greatness. This led to an extensive training regiment that he practices daily. While still very inexperienced, he attempted to modify Sasuke's Chidori technique which led to the accident leaving his face scarred. Hiei is viewed as an over-achiever amongst his peers, and somewhat of a prodigy amongst the elders of the village. He does not train and fight to defeat his opponent, but to defeat himself.

Other:

He is very interested in experimental jutsu in the field of disruption of chakra systems. He one day wishes to have his power acknowledged by everyone in the village by becoming Hokage.


Theme Song and Background Music:


Battles

Won:0
Lost:0

~Approved~
You can't link your custom history with the manga and say you're a descendant of Tsunade and the other two Hokage just because you're a Senju. That part was edited out. Keep that in mind for next time. Have fun RPing

 

[Erzo]

You followed the layout, so this should be approvable but it'd be nice if you could add some pics or even a little colour.

Other than that, have fun with the RP. ^^

 

[Kung Fro]

good job for your first bio but try and add a pic

 

[Xicer]

I remember reading somewhere that I can't edit my bio after creating it, so is it too late to add things like pictures and color? Or should I wait until I get approved, and then add it after my first bio update?

 

[Vex]

No, you're not allowed to edit a bio if it's been approved. But you can edit it freely now. It's just that you cant edit it after approval.

Also, you shouldnt update your bio so frequently. Especially not just for making it look nicer xD
Update it every 2-3 months or so.

If you have anymore questions, just leave me a vm.

 

[Xicer]

Thanks for all of the feedback everyone. I really do appreciate the help. Is there anything else that I need to improve on before I get accepted/denied?

 

[Erzo]

Thanks for all of the feedback everyone. I really do appreciate the help. Is there anything else that I need to improve on before I get accepted/denied?

I'm not too sure if you're allowed to relate custom history with the manga, but I don't think it'll get declined because of that. o-o

You look like you're good to go. Now all you need to do is wait on approval, once you've done that you can ask for training in an element of your choice. ^^

 

[Xicer]

I thought this was Hiei from YYH.

Good bio.

That is where I got the name! Hiei was my favorite character on YYH

 

[Xicer]

Based on your experience, is there a sensei that is recommended for lightning jutsu? I've looked at the table, and can't decide who I want to ask once the time comes.