Looks pretty cool, alot of potential!
I don't really know where to look.
Ofcourse I,m meant to look at the girl in the middle,
but all the little dots, fractals and other shiny stuff combines take my eyes all over the place.
It's a bit chaotic. It gets messy at some spots.
Also i kind of dislike all use of C4D renders.
That's just my personal opinion tho.
Keep up the great work!